Could You Play It Safe? Your Readers Are All Going In With You

Dude, I don't know how long you can last like this, I feel like you're about to be banned [laughing] [laughing]

I still want to ask about Uncle Dong's extra story [smile][smile][smile]

They say you can't be impatient, and you can't read novels if you're impatient. This novel is like this. You must not be impatient, you must take your time. Watch it carefully frame by frame, and then you will gradually become irritable, just like me, I almost saw the protagonist playing with the police officer, um. In at least a few pictures in this book, my fussing and procrastinating is the same as squeezing out toothpaste, but the content is still very good. Compared with other crime-related themes, his descriptions are very delicate. So delicate that you can squeeze out toothpaste. I highly recommend it.

The most fearful thing in this world is brainwashing, or the brainwashing that you think you are doing [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]

I've finished reading it. To be honest, I don't usually post book reviews, but to be honest, this book is really interesting. Next, I will talk about what I think are the advantages and disadvantages of this book. Let's talk about the advantages first. First of all, this book is well written in terms of plot and setting. For example, when writing about Dali and Lao Zhou's escape, it gave people a sense of tension. To be honest, I really didn't expect that the entire water city was my way of escaping. There are also some humorous parts that make it very interesting to read. Relaxation, for example, in that case, the reply given in the post can be updated. The whole novel gives people the feeling of being tense but relaxed. There is nothing very poisonous in the characters. Of course, it may be because I have a high poison resistance, so I automatically ignored it. Next is the shortcoming. I will ask the author, do you know what my viewing experience was like when I read the readers in the post? I almost jumped to watch it. The whole feeling that that part gave me was that it was long-winded and cumbersome. I know that the author may have wanted to describe it in better detail, but do you know where it is? How bad is the experience of saying so many words in such a tense place? The original emotion of being hooked by the plot has slowly been worn away. Anyway, the shorthand is that the plot is not compact and people feel it is not strong. There are also places where the chapter is broken. In the words of the article, the author, have you studied at the break training center? (That's what this sentence should say, I'm not sure) There are few chapters and updates are slow. Author, if you see it, remember to comment. I hope you can improve the above shortcomings. In order to make a punishment gift or something, I will make sure next time. I hope you can write better and more people will read the novel [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's super good-looking, much better than the previous one, and there's a lot less nonsense. However, I saw some similar content to the previous one, such as the female top student's inner fantasies, which made me want to write a book.

Ababa Aba Aba… Give me... Just one more chapter... It's itchy... It's itchy... Please... Show me one more chapter, I can do anything... I can do anything... I'm willing to do anything...[Vomit][vomit][vomit] Keep it up… Every time I raise my heart, it disappears, annoying [vomit][vomit][vomit]

Good-looking [Blowing Kiss] There is currently no heroine, so there is no heroine, right [smile] [smile] [smile]

The writing is both refreshing and funny. There is no poisonous point at the moment. The subject matter is also relatively new. It predicted my judgment and I didn't guess the direction of the plot at all. It successfully hooked me. The writing is good. I personally feel that it is in the upper reaches of Tomato.

This novel is so well written, it's funny, exciting, and makes people want to read on. The shortcoming is that it's too little, and it's not enough to read.