Blue Archive: Joining Abydos from the Start

It's very interesting\(//∇//)\. Compared with the second-generation Dior plots on station B, this one is already very good. It has a perfect storyline, rich plots, and interesting plots. When I saw your plot, I was reminded of a certain station where Arius was invaded by a large number of time-travelers. Of course it was very interesting. It's good to watch. You should watch this kind of second-generation plot, not the kind of yellow brat, or slander, like One Day One Hoshino. It's a very good comic work (✪▽✪). I hope it can be completed. I hope the author can get the picture of the protagonist. I want to see if it looks good [shy][shy]

Great book! Highly recommended, I just hope that the author can write some plots where the sword is first and then the sweetness, such as Chizuru's halo is broken and Hoshino is sad but later comes to life. (Mainly because I want to eat a knife, please ask the author)

To be honest, this book is the one I like the most among ba fanfics. The plot is light and interesting, and the author often interacts with me in the comment area. I am a student. Now I come back from get out of class at 9 o'clock every day and read a chapter and write a few comments. Then I go to bed. The plot is not very exciting. I will come back the next day. I can still remember the plot of the previous day. I discovered it in the daily recommendations when the book had reached more than 60 chapters. I was really attracted when I came in. I was really surprised that this was the author's first book. No matter what others say, this book is really No. 1 For me. Finally, I hope the author will have a happy new year and his writing will get better and better (this is the first time I have written such a long book review, so there is a problem with the word order in it, please don't mind [crying] I have changed it several times here and there. I just hope that this book can be seen by more people, so that the author's data can be better [face covering] I hope this book can have a perfect ending [love]) Luo Hanekawa is great, no need to say more [Like]

It's great. Most of the novels, especially the fanfics, are written according to one's own wishes. From the reader's point of view, everyone may be a little different or want to read it, but the author has a really good understanding of the plot and the integration is very good. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it~ As for games, happiness is the most important thing. I wish everyone can see what they want to see, and life will be smooth sailing, 10 consecutive colorful hardware [smile]

This Granblue Files fanfic really makes me feel like I've "uncovered a treasure"! The author's restoration of the character's personality is extremely high, especially the small details, such as the character's tone of voice, habitual movements, and even some little jokes from the original work, are cleverly integrated into the story, making it particularly immersive to read. The plot rhythm is also well controlled.

I have already tasted it, and there are very few articles that are good-looking and engaging. Although Lily is not very good for this circle, you have successfully written it. Beautiful Lily articles are a breath of fresh air 👍 How many groups are there? 💀

Highly recommended. The author cleverly introduced his own characters to participate in the whole plot without greatly changing the original plot, so that both experienced people who have watched the original plot of ba and newcomers who have never been exposed to ba can watch it very comfortably. It can be seen that the author really put his heart into the adaptation [Love][Love][Love]

@ Hanekawa Luo Raku The author just insists on writing like this. This is my favorite article from the Blue Files that I have read. Others have said that the other articles are very good. I have also read them, but I just don't feel as good as this one. The handling of interpersonal relationships, plot handling, and combat handling are all very good. The score of 7.4 Is purely because they have no vision, right? Please! Author, you must write this article to one million words! We can do anything! Write "Blue Files: I Join Abydos at the Beginning" for a lifetime!

I like it very much. The setting is really in line with my taste, and I saved Hoshino. I used to feel very uncomfortable when I heard that Hoshino was going to be captured by the black server and used as a test subject... I like it so much. Come on, author! I hope there is no knife

The writing is very good, and the progress of the plot is not like that of Cui He who jumps to the main plot every day.