Starsea Shipgirls: The Age of Expansion

Pretty good but... When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. To sum up, updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updating. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Urgent! Urgent! Urgent! Why should I encounter this book so early! ? You must still have some manuscripts saved [punch out] and hand them over as soon as possible! !

I particularly like the subject matter. Since I play Ship B and never read the plot, I actually only like original articles that follow the Ship Girl template. However, this one is about interstellar science fiction and belongs to a different genre. I think it's full marks for creativity and subject matter, but I don't know if it's the author's control over the plot direction or something else. It feels too bland and obscure. I suggest that the author can refer to some popular articles to try to establish a clear main line or create crises in stages, or maybe refer to the daily articles of Kan Niang to mainly write about daily life. Generally speaking, I still support the author and hope that the author's writing will get better and better.

The author feels that this book is well written, but the caliber of the naval guns is too small. The caliber of the main and secondary guns of these ships can be expanded 10 times. Otherwise, the caliber of the main gun of a 2km long battle cruiser is only 1.8M, which is too small. In fact, it can be changed to a caliber of 18m.

It is a very good book. There are no poisonous points or pain points in the whole process. The plot is also very interesting. If I have to say it, it is a bit lacking in emotion, but this is also an advantage. There are also a few pictures at the end that are a bit too anxious. The ending is a very nice semi-open ending.

How should I put it? I actually like novels about ship girls, but I don't like to force ship girls into rare levels. I prefer that each girl has her own characteristics. For example: the destroyer girl runs fast and consumes less resources. The main gun is weak but has a close-range killer torpedo. The cruiser girl is slightly slower and the main gun firepower exceeds the destroyer. Then there are specializations in various directions. The main force girl runs slowly, eats a lot, but has super firepower. However, she has limitations and needs to form a strong joint group with the destroyer cruiser to exert her maximum ability. She will not act alone. You can change the rarity of the ship girl into a level, so that every ship girl has the ability to touch the top level.

To be honest, the author's writing is quite good, at least the writing style is passable. On tomatoes. There really is nothing better than this author's writing about starship girls. Of course, it cannot be said that there are no shortcomings. The author still lacks a bit of imagination, for example, he was in the interstellar world, and ended up using a traction rope to tow the spacecraft. [Hold face][Hold face] But overall it's pretty good-looking. I hope the author can work hard! [Send heart][Send heart]

Overall it's pretty good, but the setting feels a bit familiar, a bit similar to the Fire Battleship and Dragon Whale family I saw before, especially the family settings and battleship and rare objects settings!

Overall, it's a good read, but there are too many things in the back that I can't remember. I also feel that there was not much foreshadowing of the relationship in the early stage before I made a vow. I hope there will be more emotional lines later. Good luck, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's a very good book. I still hope that the ship girls all have names. Except for the first few ship girls, they don't have any sense of existence. I don't know what they are called, what they are, whether they are historical ships, and what skills they have. I hope you can start writing about them. Good luck, author💪

The best ship girl novel I've ever read. I didn't expect it to end so soon. There aren't many good Kan-girl novels these days.