Siheyuan: After Exposing the Plot, I Sent Old Deaf Yi to the Firing Range

Director Ma, Deputy Director Ma, Deputy Director Ma are mighty, the only outstanding characters in this book. Overall, it's okay. You have to be able to read it. The author's writing skills are a bit weak, but it's not that bad, just a little bit worse. Once you understand it, you will probably be able to excel. You should work hard and study from the characterization, scene description and transformation. You can read Yu Qiuyu's Cultural Journey, describing scenes from far to near, from inside to outside, etc. This character is so bad that he defeated many seniors with his pen, but you can't say that his writing is not good. In modern times, he is considered a down-to-earth writer.

Now that I have written this book, I have judged it myself. As everyone said, the plot of stealing the chicken is indeed cumbersome. I was writing and posting it at the same time, and seeing the feedback, it was pretty good, so I felt that this was the right approach. When people generally gave feedback later, I actually didn't save the manuscript, and there was no way to delete or revise it. Now I am deleting and revising it, which is 20,000 words long. It is not necessarily a small project to revise. The story of stealing the chicken ends at the end, and the pace is accelerated, one layer after another, and a lot of waste has been done. Thoughts, the reason why the previous plot is complicated and complicated is because before I wrote it, I read some Siheyuan novels that started with stealing chickens, and I was generally willing to extend the story of stealing chickens or lunch boxes for about ten chapters. In fact, it is no longer appropriate to put it in the current Siheyuan novels. I hope readers will forgive me. [Shy]

Beat, beat, beat, beat

Not bad, not bad, not bad, not bad😌😌😌😌😌😌Keep working hard💪💪💪💪💪💪

Simple and direct, never mess around in things!

After careful consideration of the details of the courtyard, a reasonable interpretation was made.

I've seen so many courtyard houses, I can go on watching this one.

The plot of criminal investigation, To avenge his mother, Shazhu is no longer stupid. Give it a high score because it's He Yuzhu.

This book is very nice

The early part is good, not sloppy, and smooth, but the later part is mediocre. After all, there is really nothing to write about even after the beast is dead. It can be considered a good courtyard novel.