One Piece: Starting Out as a Shichibukai

This book is good. I don't know when it started, but there was a trend of killing the protagonist group. Would this still be a pirate without Luffy? Secondly, this book separates evildoers from adventurers. This is quite good. Although there are flaws, the flaws do not hide the advantages. In fact, the trend was started by the studio. In order for more people to accept the studio's writing, just like the Siheyuan, and then let the violent people boycott the normal writing. Let normal texts have no way to survive. I came to Tomato just to read cool articles and enjoy them. If I really want to see something good, I won't come to Tomato at all. Just being cool and having fun. This book is quite good, although it is not satisfactory, but judging from the reading volume, the author should have no problem eating and drinking!

Right? The Shinigami's combat power should far exceed that of pirates. Moreover, the power is generally aimed at the soul. Elementalization should be able to hit it.

Xiaowu is one of my personal favorite anime characters, and the content of the book is pretty good. The drawback is that the author is a little too squeezed for toothpaste, and I read it for less than five minutes every day. Uncomfortable

After watching the whole process, there are some flaws in the process, but they are not big problems. The protagonist setting is "Hollow" (the Hollow in Bleach, although I haven't watched Bleach either). The writing is still very good. The power of different systems shines in the world of pirates. I don't know whether there is a combat power that suppresses the "virtual", but the combat power in the article starts with an emperor-level combat power, and it improves later. It is very powerful. The protagonist's subjective personality is also very good. He has a specific main line and moves forward step by step towards the goal. In the process, he recruits some pleasing crew members. It was the first time I saw the wonderful performance of the power of the Death System in the world of One Piece. I very much agreed with this book. The ending perfected the protagonist's "heart" and warmed up his body. It was a very comfortable ending.

I hesitated for a while whether to read this book, because I am quite interested in the theme of pirates and reapers, but because the introduction mentioned the Holy Mother, it made me very worried. In the end, I chose to read. Now that I have read the entire book, I can't say that it is a masterpiece with endless aftertaste, but I think the content of the whole book is very good. I think because the introduction mentions the Holy Mother, people will run away after just one glance at the introduction. I don't think it can be mentioned about the Holy Mother, just a normal protagonist. Maybe if you remove the reading of Our Lady, more people will

The writing is very good, but Nami is weird. I am basically sure that Nami will follow whoever can deal with Aaron.

As a debut novel by a new author, although the writing style is still a little immature, it is pretty good. As a One Piece fanfic, the chronological order is also good, which is not easy (mainly because I like Xiaowu very much). In short, the author is great, and I also like this book. It is different from most fanfics that go in the harem direction. Although I only recently got into this book, I have noticed the author's efforts and will not give up.

I really like your novels. I read them as soon as you update them, but two chapters a day are not enough. I beg you, please update them quickly. Also, I beg you, I will give you some gifts. Please don't stop updating them. I found good ones before and stopped updating them. It makes me so uncomfortable. Please don't stop updating them [crying] [crying]

It's purely my own idea. I think it's best to suppress his combat power. What settings should be used to balance his combat power with that of the pirates? Because I have always felt that Death's combat system is the highest in the sea of ​​​​death fire. If you bring such a big void, I feel that if you don't suppress him, his combat power is a bit too high for the pirates.

Overall, it's a good work, but I really can't understand Remi's emotional scene in the middle, but overall it's not bad.