Starting from Scratch: Building a Secret Organization That Controls the World

Beautiful, love watching. The most important thing is that there are many male supporting characters, unlike many urban novels where women do the work. Not normal at all. The protagonist has brains and works efficiently. No drag at all.

The heroine will be criticized every few pictures, letting readers know that the protagonist is not a eunuch. Although she does not have a harem, she is not a eunuch at all. She looks very comfortable. It is much better than those novels about eunuchs under the banner of harem stories.

[Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Warn the author not to steal the book I wrote. Writing a book is not easy, but stealing is not advisable. In order to prove your innocence, please send the manuscript and let me see if it is the same as what I wrote! ! ! !

Overall, it's good. I can read it and I have the desire to read it. The only flaw is that the parents' scenes are a bit awkward. It's not that I can't write it, but I suggest that I try to write it off if I don't know how to write it. This is a cool article, a cool article, a cool article! Try not to have any plot that makes readers feel embarrassed! Come on, the number of words is not enough [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I read the comment section before writing the comment. Many people with low scores ran away because of the existence of "mother". When traveling to a parallel world, you really shouldn't have parents and just be a lone wolf. The ones with high scores are just good-looking and don't say why, so I'll tell you. Four points is almost the same. The main deduction is that the protagonist is not a lone wolf, and there is no scene on the mother's side. I just wrote that the protagonist will be nervous every time he calls his mother. In his previous life, he should have been a mercenary leader, so the reason why he is nervous when he calls his mother is to make the protagonist a little "human"? But if you write the characters but not the scenes, it's completely unnecessary. Another point is that the combat power is likely to collapse. After all, it is still the real world. There are gene locks, telekinesis, etc., And there are also genetic warriors. But this high probability will be after 300 chapters. It is only over 100 now and can still be read. It's hard to say if it feels better at the moment. You'll know after reading dozens of chapters. If you can tolerate that the protagonist is not a lone wolf, you can watch it. The author won the resurrection match [facepalm] Although I have forgotten the previous plot, the Destiny Club created by the protagonist in the middle period is very powerful, and it still impressed me deeply. On the contrary, the confrontation between the Democratic Republic of the Congo and France is not interesting. Anyway, I like to watch the Destiny Club scene the most at the moment. After eating it for half a year, I took it out again and watched it for a long time [facepalm] I can only say that it is a quick update.

Overall, the writing is pretty good, but there are more and more useless plots later on. Boring routines like "Class Reunion" can take a long time to write, but the first part is pretty good.

I laughed so hard [laughs], I thought this author was so awesome [pouts] but only two updates a day [laughs and cries] It's really short, it's really hard work for the author's wife [grieved]

The writing is okay, and the plot arrangement is okay. The protagonist shouldn't be obsessed with women. ! Wrong number, it should be four stars.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The author has rich experience, and the logic of the article is basically self-consistent. As long as you control the upper limit of your ability and don't collapse, it is a good book. In other words, I prefer to watch the real society develop quietly and slowly in Africa, and to be the mastermind behind the scenes and form secret societies. Don't make it too fantasy later, otherwise it will lose its flavor.