This Naruto Has Justice at His Back!

Write more about pirates. If you want to read Naruto, I have other books. The selling point is the story in the world of pirates. The author should grasp this point.

It still feels pretty good. I feel good about redeeming Naruto in his childhood. It would be better if the age issue could be solved. After all, the longer the back and forth time, the older the mental age will be. Even if the appearance doesn't change, it's still weird for a 20-year-old to talk like a 10-year-old.

It's a very interesting story that goes back and forth between two worlds, but the comparison between the two worlds is a bit too cruel. I always feel that the navy is not so innocent, and Shikamaru and the others on the Hokage side did not appear at all. Obviously in this time period (just the Kurama family, but to be honest, I didn't read this part, but the fanfic said that they became friends during that period, but they forgot about it later (?)). In this situation, maybe we should complain about the education level of the "people" on both sides? (On one side are naval cadets, on the other side are ordinary villagers emmm) And the confident Little Sun Naruto is great. It's a bit sad to see his family leave, but after all, Naruto has such a thing as earth reincarnation, and I feel that there will be a chance in the future. There is also the Nine Lamas. When will Naruto be able to become friends with it? I still want to see them working together. With the current situation of robbing power, is there really no problem in the future? (I'm worried)

To add to the setting, Garp will not lose his combat power due to aging. This can be said to be one of the bugs in Oda's works 🤦 I really gave you a big job. Zefa's hand is the only one that must be cut off, isn't it?

The writing is very passionate, and it is a direct original plot of Garp's group destroying the five old stars Im. In other fan fiction, the final villain is not there at the beginning. Naruto's character is very majestic and upright, and he is the saint in my fantasy.

I give it five stars because this is the only book I know of that is the fastest to eliminate the Celestial Dragons in Tomato. The 100th chapter has not yet been reached, so I can only say. . . . Awesome! It's so cool, so cool to watch!!!

Take good care of your body. I will always support you, author, but don't be like so many authors who write this kind of plot and always end it at the climax and can't think of new content. I hate this. I hope you won't hurt me, my love for you, and my love for your works. Heart, don't hurt me

The author's writing style of "The Double Passing Through the Sea of ​​Fire" is very good, but I feel that the Kyuubi opened too fast. The author should add more interactions with the Kyuubi later. The author's discomfort should be how Naruto knew the Kyuubi's name. He himself said that what tailed beasts need is respect, and the Kyuubi is a tsundere and does not call each other by name. At first, I didn't know how to develop a communication that respects the Kyuubi and allows him to open his heart. 🤦[OK]

It's beautiful, I hope I can write it down

Such a beautiful novel! I don't know what some people think and give such a low score? Such a good creative novel