High Martial: My Sister Is the Chosen One

The plot is good, but the activity is a bit low, and readers basically have no comments. Well, there are also authors who want to be funny, but they don't know how to be funny. Well, some of them can make them laugh. Anyway, the author has the skills, so you can take a look.

The author's style is so unique that it's hard to criticize [face covering], but the impression is getting better and better. For now (Chapter 645), the main selling point is still funny and abstract, and it shouldn't change much.

Give me a five-star encouragement and tell me what you think of this book. First of all, there are quite a lot of jokes in this book. If you like to make jokes, it will be the same as when you go back home. But some parts are too blunt, I think, just for the sake of making jokes. There's no problem with the character. There are certain innovations in the plot. The setting of the God-giver is quite fresh. The opening also changes the classic awakening ritual of the urban fantasy thief to show off or be stepped on. The rhythm is moderate and overall it is okay. But in terms of description, I have some doubts that the author used AI to polish it, or absorbed too many other people's opinions. The writing style is messy, which gives me a headache. If it is AI polishing, I suggest not to use it at this stage (I have one thing to say, I played deepseek and saw that some places are no different from home). If you listen to too many suggestions, I suggest you integrate your writing style and fix it. Keep writing, the setting is very good, if you can change the description, the score will not be low.

There are a lot of laughs, but the pace feels a bit fast. There is nothing wrong with the emotional line. I feel like the details could be refined. Five stars. The world view is complete, the emotional lines are many and not complicated, and the upgrade story experience is fragmented. Looking forward to updates

It combines many elements, including Yan Min, Violet, Amon, and Immortal Lord. You can read it as a fun text in your spare time.

This book is also called: God has awakened, my sister is the chosen one! In this God-given era, I, 049, the plague doctor! It's over, I'm surrounded by girls of luck! Waiting for the name, the plot development should be as non-toxic as possible. At the same time, because the writing time of the novel is short, there may indeed be many bad things. Regarding plot issues and related character issues, it is impossible to be perfect, and there may be some changes due to unknown factors...

Overall, it was pretty good, but I felt that Bai Ling was a bit poisonous. He was angry when he was taken advantage of by the protagonist during the first encounter, and then directly asked the protagonist to take three sniper shots without warning. Later, he blamed the protagonist for being knocked unconscious when he went to the Taoist temple to drink tea. Later, he even wanted to break off the engagement and gain the moral upper hand. It felt like he wanted to say "This is the breakup he asked for, I just agreed." It feels like it would be better to just do things directly after the competition and get engaged to a new heroine. It's good to feel like there's nothing else to do

Because the author has been absorbing submissions and readers' comments, the writing style may not be very stable, and may even suddenly go crazy, or some inexplicable things may appear in some places. However, the author's hard power is still quite good. Not only does he write his own main line very clearly, but he also writes things added by others (which still feel inconsistent) to fit the writing style as much as possible. This book can retain readers through novel writing methods from different angles, and has the appearance of becoming a god.

Author, you can create some original characters. Of course, original characters do not mean to find new ways, to innovate independently, and not to imitate the characters and behaviors in other novels too blindly. Instead, you can write some elements that are more popular among the public. If you create an original character that is not so original, the look and feel will definitely be much better than before. After all, your book is your book, and other people's books are other people's books. The most important point is that your Linn is your Linn, not the Linn of the Salted Fish family. This is very important. I think the setting of your book is very interesting and I think you have a chance to get into the 9 and above seats so come on, keep at it

I said 049, how come the Epidemic Doctor and Fan Tong are so familiar with each other? It turns out it was you Tianmiao [face covering] who ordered first [sneered smile] [face covering] [OK]