From the Start, I Overhaul My Talent and Become Invincible!

Nice! Very well written. Many comments in the previous chapters complained about the benefits of the protagonist being taken advantage of, etc. In fact, many people are too selfish and narrow-minded. You can only see what the protagonist "lost". I can't see how others helped the protagonist. It seems that for them, the protagonist must be rich and penniless. For the protagonist who is so cheating that he can't even act. Those things can really be said to be a drop in the bucket, but some people are stingy with even a drop in the bucket. Words often reflect a person's soul. Between the lines of this book, I felt that the author is a generous, decent and kind-hearted person. [Praise]

It's okay, but there are some minor flaws. In the copy of Sakura Country, after the protagonist exits, his over-standard relics are directly left to the indigenous people for use, and the other awakened people are not surprised at all, and have no intention of robbing them. A little logic is sacrificed for the plot.

It's really a cool book, really cool. I just cheated and smashed it all the way without any acting. After reading through it, there is no outrageous plot or strange writing style. Overall, it is very comfortable. The only flaw is that the suspected heroine named Qin Bai seems to be the same regardless of whether she exists or not. She is just a fixed plot promoter. In fact, there is nothing wrong with replacing Qin Bai and bringing in the copy by other NPCs who appreciate the protagonist.

I saw 35 pictures. Can the protagonist's sword identify the enemy and ourselves? It sucks blood from the enemy but not from myself. When the protagonist fights, he can still talk and laugh with Qin Bai and the others [awkward laugh]

When she saw that Qin Bai was suspected of being the heroine in Chapter 11, although she thought the protagonist was an NPC and just wanted to start a main story, she was actually trying to mess with the protagonist and didn't understand the protagonist's motive for taking her. He was just a pure troll and even let an elite monster train for her, while she acted as a nanny next to her (could it be that only humans can help? But the core of a big family should have a lot of training), and the protagonist thought she was "cute~" Everything up to this point was okay. It started to feel strange when I met Qin Bai and now I feel uncomfortable with it. I don't want to watch a heroine who won't win but has a lot of plots. I don't want to watch a heroine who tries hard to level up while pushing the hero and still thinks about relying on her to take off. I'll give it a try here and watch it later if I have the chance [Thoughts] This book does not have a clear label of whether it has a female protagonist. If any book friends see it, please poke me to see if I have a female protagonist. I just finished reading two of the author's Gao Wu books and I really like it. I don't want to miss it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

This ending is pretty good. The whole novel is very good to read. The only drawback might be that it's a little short. There are fewer of you since level five. It might be better if you wrote out the complete growth process. Ah, of course this is my own personal opinion, what do you think? It's up to you. Then I would like to thank the author for bringing me such a beautiful and interesting novel. I myself once again express my support. Then I hope the author will work harder in the future! I wish you can write better works in the future. Become a tomato master.

In fact, overall it's pretty good. Whether it's the Sakura Country dungeon or the current dungeon, the settings are very good, and I also write my own things. As for the issue of female supporting roles mentioned in other comments, I actually don't feel anything at all. As long as I play my role and help you, there is nothing wrong with it. Overall, it's worth seeing.

The rating of 8.1 Is a bit low. This book should be a 9.0. It is a standard invincible novel with a few routines. The golden finger is a pigeon-style extraction of golden fingers in each world, but the ending is a bit rushed.

Setting rating: 5 stars Good Plot rating: 4 stars, not bad (there are some problems with the emotional line) Protagonist rating: 3 stars, average Recommended rating: 4 stars OK Plot summary Lin Qiu (protagonist): All the scripts and worlds I experienced were dreams. At the end the script finds itself long dead. His own world has long been destroyed. The so-called time travel, everything experienced is a dream. He was later resurrected by Qin Bai and became a pillar (can resurrect all conscious existences). In order to save Qin Bai, his consciousness merged with the original chaos. Find Qin Bai's consciousness in the original chaos and walk together towards the path destined to wake up. Qin Bai (female?): The son of chaos born from the original chaos. The mission given to the Sons of Chaos by the Original Chaos is to destroy the Original Chaos. For unknown reasons, the spacecraft crashed into the ruined human world where Lin Qiu was. Later, he met Lin Qiu. Later, Lin Qiu was killed, and he tried his best to revive Lin Qiu. Use consciousness to create the Yili Garden dream with the help of the power of original chaos. He killed all the demons and resurrected Lin Qiu, finally making Lin Qiu a pillar. Before his consciousness disappeared, he was awakened by Lin Qiu who merged into the original chaos, and together they walked towards the path destined to wake up. Xia Shuangyue: The original world forcibly injected an overdose of medicine to save Lin Qiu. In the end, only Lin Qiu's body was rescued, but he died from the backlash. Later, he was resurrected by Qin Bai. Finally successfully resurrected. Xia Mi (Xia Mier): the original brother of Xia Shuangyue. Transformed into a demon due to the power-enhancing experiment, the last living person in the original world. I didn't want to participate in the resurrection plan. Later, Qin Bai used Xia Mi's own life as a threat to participate in the resurrection plan. Ultimately successful. In the end, there are only four Lin Qiu in the world (except Lin Qiu's awakening to create the world and the original chaos).

It depends on the duration. Anyway, I like it [smile] If you have something similar, you can kick me.