Delta Force: Reborn as Vyron, I Team Up with Hackclaw from the Start
三角洲行动，魂穿威龙开局抱骇爪
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- Delta Force: Bringing a Mai Xiaoshu Home三角洲行动：拐一只麦小鼠回家Alternate title on Fanqie
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Looking for books similar to "The Aloof Campus Belle? Just a Clingy Love-Struck Girl (Super Sweet Romance)". One female lead only. I want novels with a single female lead. Don't come in and recommend a bunch of unrelated stuff. If it's not about one female lead, don't post it. I hope this list will feature stories with a single female lead.
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Currently at chapter 18, the only major flaw is the protagonist's behavior in the early stages; it's incredibly embarrassing. Anyone with a modicum of sense wouldn't act like that. This might be what the synopsis refers to as abstract. In any case, a normal person wouldn't behave this way.
The protagonist's early on was a bit blood pressure-raising, but it gets better after he grows up. The author provides plenty of sweet moments, the kind that make you need insulin. The battle descriptions are also perfect. The sweet moments and plot progression are interspersed just right. Although some settings have been modified, I mainly went for the sweet moments [I've learned something].
Well, the author definitely has writing skills. Aside from the protagonist Tang's inhuman appearance, the writing is indeed very good. Although the latest chapter has a major flaw—the transmigrator's identity—and a minor flaw—the system misusing the protagonist's points and being disobedient, plus the equipment falling into the sea—these are all minor flaws that could easily make readers leave.
The writing style is decent compared to other Delta Force fanfics these days. The protagonist is somewhat weak. I think the author intended to create a story of an ordinary person gradually becoming a GIT combatant and eventually winning the heart of a beautiful woman. While it's a cliché, it has room for development. However, the protagonist's growth is a bit slow.
It's good, but the beginning is a bit toxic. To be honest, the male lead's character in the early stages is quite annoying... But the female lead is well-developed, and the romance is clear. The only downsides are the author's slow update pace and the seemingly minor timeline issues. However, it's fan fiction, so personal interpretations are normal. Overall, the plot is sweet, with a particularly bright spot in the middle. It's quite enjoyable.
It feels good, but there are too many flaws. The biggest fear for system-based strategies is exposing the system. But the later parts are acceptable. I'll give it five stars to show my support.
This is the best Delta Force fanfiction I've ever seen. I hope the author can finish it and not abandon it; it's so frustrating. I'll always support you, author, keep going! 😘 [Please update more frequently!] One last question: Is there a romance storyline? Like between the male lead and the Claw? 🤔 So, can the author answer my question? Will the male protagonist and the monster be a couple?
It's pretty good; the emotions are portrayed very well, and it's not too padded. The only downside is the slow pacing; over 100 pages have been read, but it's only been less than half a month. The author has typed out every single line spoken by the characters in the last couple of days, word for word. But I like it.
Having read a few chapters so far, based on my understanding of games like Delta Force, the world-building is incomplete and the character relationships are chaotic; it's fortunate that fanfiction even exists. And I don't see anything wrong with a protagonist who grows through character development.
The book's strengths are obvious: it's very realistic, demonstrating the author's skill, and the logic is sound. It portrays the reactions of a normal person after transmigrating; characters need a growth arc, not an overpowered superhero becoming a top soldier right from the start. However, its weaknesses are also quite apparent.