Delta Force: Reborn as Vyron, I Team Up with Hackclaw from the Start

At present, there are 18 chapters. The only bad point is the protagonist in the early stage. He is too shameful. No normal person would be like this. This may be the abstraction in the introduction. Anyway, a normal person would not be like this. It is not about the impact of the war on him, but his behavior is purely giant and has slipped through the net for a long time. All the highlights are based on the physical experience and muscle memory of the Veyron. The soul of a dead man can penetrate the Veyron, which is an insult to the image of the Z country soldiers. However, the behavioral habits of the Claw are better described. Other than that, this is the best one among the few Operation Delta books currently available. November 6, 2024

The main character in the early stages made my blood pressure soar, but it got better as I grew up. The author gave me a lot of sweets, which are so sweet that I need to take insulin. The combat descriptions are also perfect, and the sweets and the plot are interspersed just right. Although some settings have been slightly modified, I mainly went for the sweets [learned]. It is very high-quality among Delta fandoms. In the blink of an eye, more than half a year has passed, and Delta has also become popular, which has led to an unusually large number of fanfics being written. At this time, as the first batch of Delta fanfics, it is inevitable for the author to stand out as the popularity is good and the quality is high, not to mention that it is still being updated. Seeing that now I have almost forgotten what the protagonist was like in the early stage. Tang is a real Tang, he can survive it, haha. Anyway, if you have raised the poison resistance, you can rest assured and read. The author also has considerable writing skills, come on!

How can I put it, the author does have writing skills, and aside from the fact that the protagonist Tang does not look like a living person, the writing is indeed very good. Although the latest chapter has a big poisonous point, which is the identity of the time traveler, and a small poisonous point is that the system misuses the protagonist's points and is disobedient. There are also small poisonous points such as equipment falling into the sea, which can easily make readers run away. However, in recent years, the poison resistance has been full, and indeed there are almost no articles about delta, so it is acceptable. I still hope that the author can write better and better, with less poison and less Tang, come on!

The writing style is okay compared to current Delta fan fiction, but the main character design is a bit weak. I think the author wants to portray an ordinary person to become a G I T step by step. The story of the returning beauty who was embraced by the combatants at the end is old-fashioned, but it still has room for development. However, the growth of the protagonist is a bit slow. Although I want to expand the story, your update speed is not very consistent with your ideas. I have also written a novel of 1,000 words in less than 30 minutes, but after all, the delta plot mode has not yet been opened, so the author can only touch the stone. He, it's understandable that the update is slow, but after all, it took two and a half days to polish a chapter of more than 3,000 words. This may be a bit too slow, but I have to say that your seriousness and careful polishing of the article are still worthy of admiration, because I can clearly feel that the awkwardness of this new chapter has disappeared compared to the previous chapters. I hope you can continue writing and bring us better articles. (Personal experience: The protagonist of the story urgently needs a test of blood and fire to transform him)

It's good to watch, but it's a little bit toxic in the early stages. To be honest, the character of the male protagonist in the early stage is really not worthy of a beating, but the portrayal of the female protagonist is still very good, and the emotional line is also quite clear, but the author is a bit slow to update, and there seems to be a slight problem with the timeline, but after all, it is a fanfic, and the private setting is normal. The overall plot is sweet, and the middle stage is more eye-catching, which is quite interesting.

This is the best Delta fan I have seen so far. I hope the author can complete it and not be a eunuch. It is very uncomfortable. I will always support you, author, come on! [Blow a kiss][Please update] Finally, I want to ask, is there a love line? For example, the male protagonist and Horrible Claw [Thinking] So can the author answer my question? Will the male protagonist and Horrible Claw be a couple?

It's pretty good. The emotions are well written, and it's not too watery. It's just that the time is a bit slow. There are more than 100 pictures, and it took less than half a month at most. The author typed out all the words of the characters in the past two days, verbatim, but I like it.

I have read a few chapters so far. Based on my understanding of games like Delta, the world view is incomplete and the relationships between the characters are confusing. I am lucky to have a fanfic. And I don't think there's anything wrong with growth-type protagonists. As long as the author's writing skills are good, the look and feel is much better than that of a cool novel, and it's like a business simulation that gradually accumulates. In fact, the main reason is that I have watched Dragon Clan, and I am very resistant to this category. For me, it is good to be able to grow and have results, rather than feeling like I can't poop like the Dragon Clan.

The advantages of this book are obvious. The writing is very real. It can be seen that the author has a solid foundation and the logic is online. This is the reaction of a normal person after time travel. The characters must have a growth arc, instead of becoming a soldier king like Long Aotian. The shortcomings are actually quite obvious. For those who like Weilong in the game plot Readers, this book is not suitable for you, because it essentially means changing a character and growing up from scratch. In fact, this is logical and in line with the logic of ordinary people. However, many people may not be able to accept this setting. For such readers, this is obviously a shortcoming. This book is still remarkable. [Praise]

This book has a very detailed description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Except for a little bit of poison at the beginning, the poison resistance helped me carry it through. At the end, I just like it, like it, like it. I think this is my favorite Delta fanfic so far, so @ Insasi must have more than 2000 chapters, otherwise I will be sorry for being so good. Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000.