Delta Force: Marry Me, Mai Xiaowen!

Wonderful, really wonderful! I was deceived by the title and cover of the book, but I like to read sweet love. But this book is different. The cruelty and sorrow of war are vividly described. Reis's madness, Huffker's so-called "new order", the Dragon Team's decision, Said's revenge, the positions of the three parties, Ali's struggle and awakening, these are all described perfectly! Very exciting! I haven't seen such a great novel in a long time! The author's writing is excellent! It's really, really good! Putting aside the previous words, to be honest, I think it is not an exaggeration to call it a masterpiece. This evaluation... You deserve it! Having said all that, it's time to talk about what I think are shortcomings. It's very weird. It's weird that Veyron coerced the protagonist into participating in dangerous actions. It's understandable that the protagonist pities the innocent people affected by the war. After all, I'm about to drop my little pearl 😢 It's noble for the protagonist to risk his life for these innocent people! But... It's not very reasonable. I remember that the protagonist was just an ordinary person before time travel. It's not very reasonable to have such courage. Personally, I think we can add a military identity to the protagonist, so that everything can be reasonably explained in the description, including the anger towards Hafk, the sorrow for the innocent, and the sense of responsibility for joining GTI! But I definitely won't write it like this. After all, there are a lot of changes to make. This is just my personal complaint and opinion. Finally, the author's writing style is really great! The anti-war element is also a plus! For this peaceful world!

It's really great. What you can see from the text is not the gorgeous affixes, but the author's determination not to write slang with other novice writers. If this book continues with the current quality, it will be an absolute good book. It can be published by changing the name and changing the world view. The central idea has been grasped very well, and the concept of peace is very well controlled. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Finally, the author adds an update!

Hmm... Generally speaking, it's okay. The plot is a bit rushed. It's a pity that it's not finished. But the understanding of war and peace is good, the professional vocabulary is also in place, the details are ok, the characters are full, and the plot development is also very smooth (I feel that the protagonist is a bit over the top, to put it bluntly). That's it... It's a pity that it's not finished, but I can see that the author has great potential. I look forward to the author's next work.

To be honest, the writing is relatively average. Some details and connections are not handled very well, but it can be seen that the author has tried his best. As a first Virgo, it is already very good, so go for it.

The writing style is very good, and the entanglement between G. T. I., Hafk and Asara is well described, and the understanding of peace is also very unique. There is just a small problem. I always feel that the title of the book and the text are a bit different (please forgive me if I have different opinions).

Great, really Heartbeat in the dust... It makes me feel like I'm not reading an online novel but the work of a real novelist... Unknowingly, the corners of my eyes became moist...

This is a novel that does not belong to Tomato Heartbeat in the Dust, I can't describe the feeling after reading it. If this book can be longer and the details are handled better, it will be more perfect. The author's writing style is very good, very good. If he can have more writing experience, this book will definitely be very famous. Unfortunately, the ending is too hasty, and the author has to continue to work hard!

Not bad, not bad, well written. I finished reading it in one night 🍉

Reminds me of the Call of Duty single player campaign, nice to watch.

It's really good to read, the author's writing is very good, the plot is also very good, and the updates are not slow.