Surprise! I’m the Female Lead’s Moonlight, Too

I think you can mark "micro-group portraits" and "main plot" in the introduction. This book is indeed very good-looking, with delicate emotions and well-described characters. It's just that the supporting characters are described too much, and the other protagonist only appears for a while, so it is better to mark "micro-group portraits", otherwise it will make some people feel uncomfortable. I feel like I have been tricked into it. The perspective of the two protagonists switches, but they mainly describe what the other encounters to promote the plot. There are very few encounters between the two, and there is too little emotional line (it can be said that there is no one at this stage), so it can be marked as "main plot". I feel that the author is very good at short stories, and the description of detective stories is also good. Later, I can start with fast-travel or thriller games. I feel it will be very good. I'm looking forward to the author's story. Is there a hint of Bai Yueguang who is really Weng? It's hard to tell, and it feels a bit far-fetched. According to the author's description of Weng's attitude towards Xu and what happened between them, Xu is at best a glimmer of light, and Bai Yueguang is definitely not included (because on the one hand, the author describes Weng wanting to end the relationship with the original male protagonists because he doesn't want to see disgust in Xu's eyes, but on the other hand, he does not describe Weng taking any action against Xu, and Xu almost disappears from Weng's perspective. Xu has always taken the initiative to contact Weng from Xu's perspective, so it feels like It's a bit far-fetched and contradictory, and I can't see the "white moonlight" state between Weng and Xu. It feels like he wants to end the relationship as if he is maintaining his character. ), And why Weng agreed to be girlfriends with the original male protagonists. I hope the author can explain it well in the subsequent plot. If it is because of resources, I don't see how those people are helpful to Xu. It feels like they are forcing Xu to have a boyfriend-girlfriend relationship with them in order to get involved. I hope the author can write down the reasons later to fill in the pit.

This work uses an unconventional book-traveling rescue plot setting. What is unique about it is that it does not deliberately emphasize the "favorability" mechanism or forcefully advance the emotional line. Emotional development is natural and smooth, character relationships gradually deepen through daily contact and shared experiences, plot logic always dominates, and emotional lines are more like natural by-products. This approach makes the story more realistic and avoids the mechanical feel of common systematic writing. However, the branch line "Qinghe's drama script" interspersed in the work is slightly abrupt. If the "micro-group portrait" content shown in the label is weakly related to the main line, it will easily interrupt the reading rhythm. When I read it for the first time, I was paused by the sudden insertion of chapters in the script - especially when readers are expecting "post-post" interactions. Turning to a stand-alone script can make people feel disconnected, and even misjudge the slow progress of the story. In terms of character creation, Qinghe's story line is full and dramatic, and the CP's interactions are also stable and sweet. But Xu Qiu, one of the core characters, has a slightly flat image. Her overly perfect "emotional stability" trait lacks sufficient foundation, which makes people curious: Why can she always remain rational? If her growth experience or inner conflicts could be a little more detailed, the character would be more three-dimensional. Overall, the work's flaws outweigh its flaws. The natural emotional progression, solid plot structure, and group portrait tension of the branch lines all show unique appeal. If the branch line connection method can be optimized and the protagonist's characterization can be deepened, the reading experience will be even better.

Viewpoint: ①The writing is passable, has good potential, and is worth reading. ②Not romance-oriented but plot-oriented. ③The perspective of the non-protagonist is more like a group portrait, with many branch lines, rich descriptions, and strong visibility (the criminal detective case line of campus bullying, the entertainment circle line, the supporting character racing story line, the emotional entanglement line between the original heroine and the original male lead, etc.), But the specific main line cannot be distinguished. ④The heroine surnamed Xu has little description, unclear portrayal, and is dispensable. - Suggestions (not criticism, just my personal understanding of the article): ① Change the article title and introduction tag, and add words such as "plot direction", "group portrait" and "criminal investigation reasoning" to lock in the audience. The current title will only attract people who want to see the love line of "the time-traveling heroine redeems the original heroine, who has already secretly liked the time-traveling heroine". ②Clear the specific main line and main narrative perspective. The story line is too scattered, and the narrative perspective switches too quickly and it is easy to become confused.

I started reading this novel yesterday. I feel that the heroine of White Moonlight, Xu Zhiqiu, also has a good character design. However, I feel that she has very few scenes so far. Most of them are about the heroine Weng Qinghe. Personally, I prefer Xu Zhiqiu. I still hope that the two heroines can have the same amount of scenes. In addition, there are relatively few emotional lines. I feel that the three men want and want but do not break up with Weng Qinghe, and then they can't forget Xu Zhiqiu! (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it).

The writing is good, and the characters are described very delicately. However, the emotional line of the protagonist is too few. After reading 30 chapters, I have only met the protagonist a few times. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

The story is complete and the characters are full-bodied. The low rating should be due to too few people watching it. I am willing to give this work full marks. I like the characters of Xu Qiu, Xu Zhiqiu and Weng Qinghe very much. Xu Zhiqiu is the white moonlight of early death like the sun, Xu Qiu is the warm light of darkness, and Weng Qinghe is a tragic heroine with a strong core, bitterness and purpose. The collision of the three characters is just right. Weng's The theory of quantum entanglement love is really touching. The author is also very knowledgeable. I learned a lot. The geographical knowledge in the expedition was also very appropriate. He did not just focus on the plot. He gave Xu Qiu a much richer character as a doctor. The author really put his heart into it. This is what touched me the most about this book. Come on, author. The blessings given to the protagonist in the article also wish the author a safe and worry-free life.

Super nice. First of all, Xu Zhiqiu and Xu Qiu are really good and good people. [Crying] Xu Zhiqiu is worthy of being praised by many people. It is such a big explosion, a gentle explosion! Long mouth, invincible [admiration] [admiration] directly shows that I am not her, wait ☝️Then there is Xu Qiu, very good, saved Xiao Weng, really a very good person, the wish is to let the original owner come back, etc. Oh, oh, oh, it is so good, I don't know how to praise her. The only thing is that I haven't seen enough of Xiao Xu and Xiao Weng's daily life [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] I think the love part is less, not as exciting as Mrs. [Explore] [Explore] Finally! School bullying is shameful! Put an end to! [Laughing awkwardly]

Although it is a time-travel novel, the original person she wears is also a very good person, not some inexplicable scumbag. Even Zhiqiu survived in the end, and Xu Qiu also used her real body to be with Qinghe (if Zhiqiu really died, I might cry to death, after all, all three are very good This is the first time I have seen such a development. In the past, I have either used other people's bodies or brought my girlfriend back to my own world. It would be strange if I read it too much. The author's approach really made my eyes shine. And after reading the column, I found that it is actually the first book written by the author. The writing style is really good. I look forward to writing a new article [Love]

The rating is too low, but the writing is actually very good. The characters are full-bodied and three-dimensional, if it weren't for the system that spans time and space. It really can be read as a documentary novel. I think we can even make a movie out of it, reflecting the bullying problem and the impact of unfortunate childhood growth behind the glamorous characters, and having different effects on others, as if each real character came to life.

How can I say it's very good-looking? The best novel I've seen on Tomato is very detailed. I feel like it would be a hit in JJ. It's really good-looking. It has high-profile mission settings, including the system and the settings for the original heroine. It's amazing nb