If I Can’t Be the Protagonist, I’ll Be the Witch

[The following only represents my personal views] As of Chapter 7, The settings are very interesting so far. A battle between time-travelers and reborns. But in terms of writing style: especially when describing something, the perspective changes too quickly, and the article feels stuck (the perspective change is a bit stiff) and smooth (the description of a single perspective is too short, and I don't remember anything at a glance). Such as: "This is impossible!" A yellow-haired boy below shouted in surprise, Mu Tian looked at the system panel. I'm really not the protagonist... Mu Tian looked at the high-spirited young man standing in front of the obelisk with emotion. Next, it is estimated that the admissions offices of various schools will come to grab people. "Okay, Dad." After Li Mo answered the phone, he stood up and took out a wooden box from the storage bag hanging on his waist. "My dad asked me to be friends with Ji Chen. After all, he is a genius. I don't know if this gift will catch his eye." The wooden box contains the thousand-year-old ginseng dropped by the hidden BOSS mountain ginseng in the secret realm of the deep mountains and old forests. After eating it, all attributes can be permanently improved. Along with the disaster, there are secret realms and monster caves with many monsters, from which people can obtain many props and equipment related to the doomsday game. Mu Tian took out his mobile phone to search for secret realms related to spiritual authority. Every time the perspective changes, I always have to briefly think about who this person is, and before I can finish reacting, I will read the next paragraph. After many transformations, I was unable to quickly replace someone, which resulted in a "sense of distance" and "sense of separation." Personally, I feel there are three solutions: 1. Increase the length of single-perspective descriptions. 2. Minimize perspective changes. 3. Add perspective conversion to undertake. Anyway, cheers for the author, meow

Personally, I feel that the subject matter is okay, but I feel that the author's writing style needs to be improved. After finishing writing, you must read what you have written to see if there are any typos or incorrect sentences, whether the reading is coherent, and whether the paragraphs read smoothly. I hope the books I write will get better and better.

It looks good, but the pace of the start is a bit fast. It feels a bit like sending an outline directly. And I have a bit of high blood pressure at the beginning. I can't stand this kind of plot. If you suffer a big loss, you must report it on the spot, otherwise I always feel like I'm choking.

Every time I feel like there's a conspiracy going on, I feel like the author is about to take a stab at it, but oh, the sequelae have already been left behind. It made my heart skip a beat at that time_(´ཀ` ∠)__ Then I just had to watch it in a few days, but who knew I would watch it as soon as there was an update∠( ᐛ ∠)_

It's very beautiful. I just like this kind of messy stew. Although I always see people saying that it's messy, I don't feel that way. You can understand each character by just remembering them in your head [Chigua]

Nice. The plot and worldview are good, but it's a bit strange when I read it. The writing may be a little poor, and the plot feels a bit jumpy at times. It should be based on the setting of Universal Witch. Overall good. [Blowing kiss]

It's good to watch, but the Riddler is the most annoying. Although I know this is an integral part of the novel, it's still quite annoying [facepalm]

Power struggle Something like the fall of a god

It's very interesting. The author must keep it up.

@ Eunuch's pigeon Your book is so good, why do so few people read it?