I Raise a Dragon in Another World

It's okay. It's great as a casual novel.

The plot is quite interesting, the characters are well drawn, and it's okay as a daily casual article.

It's quite to my liking, but some places are hard to read due to punctuation issues. For example, the dialogue has no quotation marks.

I give you five stars. Keep writing. Don't care what others say. Just follow your own feelings. Just practice writing.