Honkai: Star Rail: Have I Become the Swarm Disaster's Progenitor?

Breeding should look a bit like breeding. You can also drive in a subtle way, but you have to drive. I will wait and see first.

Well, it's hard to say. It's not bad, everyone's needs are different. Personally, I think your lengthy discussion of how to solve problems was okay, but the main character gave me a very weak performance. I respect the process of solving the problem of "destiny" binding, and even enjoy it a little. I feel like there is a sense of peace, and you are the protagonist... After I finished reading the chapter that ended the discussion on the space station, I read the book review and thought about the chapters I had read. I had mixed feelings, and I didn't know what to say. The protagonist was indeed a bit of a loser. You need to show off the protagonist's personal charm. Some long chapters that are mainly read just for fun may not meet the needs of readers. Moreover, you are jumping a bit. You should wait until you finish Fengsheng to figure out a solution for these things. By the way, I want to ask you how long you have been writing and how old you were when you started writing. (No malicious intent, just asking) Summary: I like good-looking plots and stories, and distinctive characters. In short, this book is innovative. @Is growing up a nightmare? Well, it looks like an ordinary person wearing a star god's leather jacket is thinking hard. The more I think about it, the more confused I become... I can't think about what I really want to say, there is something missing, time travel, wanting to be rich, being ignored by the patrol, getting on the train, Black Tower Space Station,... Because I sometimes don't pay attention, I don't know why you get on the train, why you discuss your destiny (probably because you think too much),... In short, I only saw the chapter where the issue of destiny is discussed. I'm so confused now.

I'm just a stranger, am I the only one who thinks the writing is beautiful😋 Many people say that cheating is really unnecessary. They don't want to see the setting jump from 14 to 24. It's like this when I write and write about it. Pinoconi must foreshadow it... The follow-up style is basically the same as the previous one [face covering]

It's good, but I feel like the author forgot something. I've finished reading the part about practicing breeding that was promised, and I haven't waited until 555 - [laughs crookedly]. To be honest, as long as the author doesn't forget the previous settings, he can forget about anything. In fact, I think this is considered a good book. After all, some authors often mess with settings and forget all about the next chapter. The author is so much better than others [crying]

It's better to write the name. Just call it Xing. Calling it Pioneer sometimes makes me feel confused when reading the article. Writing the name Xing makes it easier to pronounce.

In fact, I can see some of the author's thoughts, but I still can't accept that Star God is so unqualified. Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles [laughing and crying], but if the author started this setting from scratch at the beginning, I feel better

After reading the introduction and content, it was quite interesting, but after reading the introduction, I still wanted to ask weakly, "Is it... Pure love?" I have read several Pure Love Warriors before, and now I am a little scared after being defeated by the Minotaur.

Except for the slightly verbose opening, the overall writing is good. There are some private settings, but if you are just reading the fanfic, you shouldn't pursue perfection. Generally speaking, the character design is not broken. The protagonist has a reasonable explanation for why humanity is greater than divinity. The logic is self-consistent. I think it is a better fanfic.

Come on, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it, do it! ! !

Not to mention other things, compared to other articles about star gods, this book is very well written. I give it a 5-star review. Come on, I think highly of you, the author. If possible, I'll wait until you write more and give you a second 5-star rating. [Praise]