Did My Dao Companion and Disciple Spend Money on Me Today?

Although the rating of this book is a bit low (it seems to be 6.6 When I write this), it is beautiful! It is a bit surprising to see this slightly different article that makes people in the book come alive now that it is common to see people wearing books. Although the text is a little thin, the meaning is endless. The plot is not too cliche and is also full of fun. Liu's image is full-bodied and his life is well detailed. The image of Liu's gracefulness and righteousness is vividly displayed on the page, and at the same time, there are traces of suffering. In comparison, Gong's image creation is slightly lacking. His life was really painful, and he hinted at many points but it was a little late. However, the emotional description is delicate and the reading experience is really good. The other characters are a little flat, but they are enough to complete the whole story. If there is a sequel, I would like to give more scenes to characters other than the two protagonists to show or hint at the stories behind them. I'm really confused whether to give it four stars or five stars. One is that the writing still has a lot of room for improvement, and the other is the characterization problem mentioned above. The key factor in the final decision to give it five stars was the timing of the stop. In my opinion, the author's timing of stopping writing is perfect, no more and no less, which not only brings the story to an end but also leaves enough space for the story. (Human words: It not only solved the heart-breaking heartache of me reading the novel in the middle of the night and found that I was almost bee (don't be afraid, the last one is he, it is very well prepared and very touching, I am bragging here)) but also left Gong Liu enough free space for me to imagine the story that follows.) In fact, the world view can be expanded a little wider. I look forward to the next work and see you again when I have the chance.

Pros: It's pretty good-looking, the fighting scenes are described in detail, and the subject matter is novel. Disadvantages: My, extra, extra, too! ! ! ! Where did my hot extra story go? Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaation, the child is really going to starve to death if he doesn't give me any big meat (roaring incompetently) (crying bitterly)... Ahem, I think the content is a bit lacking and the description is a bit lacking. After reading it in one go, I still felt that the article was a bit thin. I was a little sad that I couldn't continue writing the rest of the story. Hahahaha (pretending to be strong)

Overall, the writing is okay, and the fighting is also well written. You can understand how the fighting is done, and the story logic is smooth. It just feels like it's a bit confusing in some places, and the handling of conflicts is not tense enough. Although there are climaxes and turning points, I don't know why it still reads flat. In some places, the perspective is not comprehensive enough. I thought it was deliberately left blank until later, but it turns out there is no (), so it seems that the space is not enough. Some places that should be described were not described, maybe because the big scene was not considered. But it was still very smooth to read, and the protagonist's posts seemed very natural and well-described, and the emotional lines were full and not greasy. It made me really believe that they were destined to be together and that they were the most suitable people for each other. In summary, I really like the description of the emotional line! Overall, the flaws are not overshadowed, and it is not shocking to the point of being amazing, so I cannot give it five stars, but it is still a good story worth watching!

Obviously this article is great, with delicate emotions. Although the plot is still slightly lacking (there are some holes that have not been filled in), I am really looking forward to the extra chapters! ! ! ! [Almost crying] I didn't even see the two of them really making love together, and the text was over, which left me with more to say. [Cry]

The setting is interesting enough and the text is short. It's fun to watch. Help, the more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. How come a good team always has some "troublemakers" who are either cowardly, uncooperative and supporting free prostitutes, or pretending to be noobs and causing trouble without being asked to leave the team [Strike] There is also the iron rooster character who had nothing to do with anything at the beginning. Let me ask you, in order to prevent the master from accepting apprentices, I paid (recharged) myself to accept two apprentices. The master loves to accept apprentices (could it be possible that you paid for each of them?). It was also like one of his teammates who wanted to spend money to buy trophies. The master promised to give the trophies to the disciple for free as long as he became a disciple. Why did he agree to Lao Gong (the logic collapsed) and the whereabouts of the trophies were not revealed in the end. Then, in order to enter the dungeon, I bought pills for my master and myself (set one for 1,000, fixed one for 1,000 experience points) to upgrade from level 34 to 36. Not to mention that in the later stages of the game, upgrading requires more experience. Based on the previous description of how others spent at least 5,000 each to upgrade from level 17 to 20, the threshold for entering the dungeon is not low (you also need to upgrade equipment). The purpose of Lao Gong Jin's dungeon is to sell materials. The materials that must be obtained when fighting the final boss cost 7 gold each (see the gold price 1:50 above). There is no mention of how many pieces will be dropped. You have to share it with your teammates, right? The effort and reward are not proportional. Lao Gong's character is also a live broadcast, and he has already been stretched out by spending money on his master (if he is not this character, he is rich and just loves money, forget it), so he goes to the dungeon to brush up materials... Some descriptions seem like the author is proficient in the game, and some descriptions look like a novice. The details that need to be said are not explained, and the more professional vocabulary is not explained. The logic of the plot suddenly disappears, and the character design suddenly becomes OOC (for example, the master can be seen to be from the cultivation world at first, but later it becomes more like cosplaying in a holographic game - it is outrageous that he can even instruct how to activate skills. Even though he has a body in reality, he is in the game world the whole time)

It's very beautiful, both in terms of characterization and other aspects. Lovely protagonists (Gong Na innocent), and vivid deputy CP Actually, what I mainly want to know is how did Liu survive and are he related to Gong and Shenxing from the same body (or previous life)? If it is Gong, is it because of the influence of Shen Xing (previous life) that he has a tendency to like men (I prefer that because I like this person, it has nothing to do with gender) Is Shen Xing's prostitution because he is a demon or because he has seen darkness, or both? However, I was very impressed with Shenxing (when he was having sex with Meow Meow and using someone else's body, I felt his head drop instantly) Are there some holes in the system that have not been filled in?

I clicked on this by accident. It's pretty and novel. I'll keep watching it for now. It's pretty and I'd like to read more. I'll take another look.

I really, really like this book! Master Shizun and Azhe must always be together QwQ Although the system is both hindsight and blindly restrictive, I forgive you for the sake of HE (is Master still only able to stay in reality for an hour? I am willing to deceive myself into thinking that the system has exerted its power, and the Lord God has rewarded Master with a real body). The young couple must be happy!

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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I can't stand it anymore. . Urgent need for an extra chapter to save my dog's life (falls to the ground) (faints) (vomits and has diarrhea) (crying uncontrollably)