Interstellar: The Slacker PUAed Mechs and Scraped His Way to the Top

Beautiful! I really like the author's great portrayal of the heroine Lin Qiu! ! ! ! Please don't let the male lead be Shen Jin... Arrogant, look down on low-level people, self-righteous... Please change the male lead, it's fine without CP, I can't stand it anymore...

I can't believe this is the quality I can see in Red Persimmon. It's comparable to the ones I've seen before. I see that there are no surprises now. The emotional line is not obvious yet, mainly the career line. The heroine is very strong. It's good, the author writes it quickly, and I urge you to update more!

Apart from the fact that the male protagonist is perfect, I like the author's portrayal of the female protagonist, but I can't believe that Shen is actually the male protagonist. . . It feels like there can't be too many male supporting roles as pure cannon fodder in other stories. . . I can't believe the scene where the heroine and the hero are together. . .

As a fan of mecha novels and micro-group portraits, I was full of expectations when I first saw the label of the work, but after reading it, I was inevitably a little disappointed. The core problems in the current perception focus on two points: First, the character creation is superficial, and the supporting characters are mostly set as "tool men" with facial makeup - they are not "evil people" in the true sense, but more deliberately set off their abilities by deliberately opposing the heroine, and there is generally a disdainful attitude towards B-level, even if the heroine Winning can only be attributed to luck. It lacks the characteristics and highlight details that can make people feel good, and it is difficult to show the vivid charm of the character; secondly, the sense of group portrait is weak. Even after entering the competition stage, the main line is that the heroine fights alone and leads the school to the first place in the league, which fails to reflect the essence of the group portrait theme. I look forward to the author further polishing the content in the future, creating more flesh-and-blood characters with distinctive personalities, and truly building a three-dimensional parallel world that readers can immerse themselves in. This will also allow the mecha theme and micro-group portrait setting of the work to have a more dazzling effect, come on!

Why are they saying that the male protagonist is not good? I think the male protagonist is pretty good, and isn't it true that the female protagonist is the male protagonist whoever the female protagonist likes? Why do they stop watching if they say there is a male protagonist? [Laughing and crying] Come on, the writing is pretty good, and the subject matter is also good!

First, from the perspective of the heroine, it is very exciting, the plot is also very exciting, there are not many emotional lines, and the world view is mainly promoted from the perspective of the heroine. The most interesting, exciting and powerful is the heroine. The heroine has a bottom line, the heroine is flexible and changeable, and the heroine's inner os is also very funny. The most important thing is that the heroine has a brain and can see five steps at a time. Of course, the smooth development of the plot and perspective are inseparable from the author's excellent writing ideas. Second, from the perspective of supporting roles, let's start with the supporting female roles. There is no brainlessness or inexplicable hostility for no reason. Everyone has their own pursuits and situations. Even if they are against the heroine, it will not be offensive. I like to have a supporting female character (I won't name her name, I think everyone knows who I am talking about) who can face her ambitions head-on. When faced with the embarrassing situation of the opposite sex, he is calm and calm, has his own thoughts, and is a little kind. It can be seen that the author's understanding of women is not one-sided, and I can also feel the author's love for women. I didn't pay much attention when reading it. When I wrote the review, I calmed down and felt the author's thoughts. This feeling is very good. Third, in terms of male protagonists and supporting male characters, the male protagonist's perspective is honestly not that great, but the other male characters are not dull either. They basically appear around the female protagonist, which is good. Female videos definitely focus on the female protagonist. The role can be outstanding, but it cannot surpass the female protagonist (referring to the irreplaceability or uniqueness of the female protagonist). Fourth, from the perspective of the villain camp, there is a saying that is very good. There is no natural villain, only the opposition of the situation (my own summary). If all the hostile camps that compete for interests with the heroine are considered villains, some villains are against the heroine out of the perspective of family and country, some villains only pursue interests, and some villains are motivated by the pursuit of interests. Some villains are just out of competition, and some villains are purely out of emotion... To a certain extent, whether the protagonist is happy or not depends on whether the villain is strong or not. Obviously, everyone has brains. This kind of back and forth, all the conspiracies and tricks are under the control of the heroine. Just thinking about this can make her have an orgasm, hahahahahaha Finally, in general, the author's ideas are very good and powerful, and the various settings do not challenge people's evil points. Basically, when I watched it, I didn't get angry or too frustrated. When reading novels, I like being able to meet all kinds of different characters without having to go out and socialize by myself...

The plot is novel, the heroine is very powerful, the supporting characters are also full of characters, and the couple of secondary CPs are very easy to interact with. However, I didn't like the male protagonist's character in this book, it was too pretentious and off-putting. However, the male protagonist's role in the early stage was small and the plot was really fascinating, so I continued to read on. Seeing the heroine's teammates in the back, they suddenly fell in love with the heroine, and then began to compete with the male protagonist. Forehead. . . In fact, I think this love is very inexplicable and without warning. It feels like it is to set off the male protagonist and give him someone to compete with. (I don't mean to say that the heroine doesn't deserve to be liked. I simply feel that my teammates suddenly like the heroine for no apparent reason like tool men.

This is a low-key but very intense work with a heroine. The most rare thing is that there is no love line in the whole process. The heroine only wants to make star coins and focus on her own career and growth. Her "strongly needed" sense of belonging is particularly moving, and the change in attitude is handled step by step, not abrupt or suspended, just right. The rhythm of the plot has its own refreshing temperament, and the foreshadowing is so many and deep that people can't help but look forward to the follow-up. There is a pan-spiritual humanistic care in the author's writing, and the depictions of nature, small animals, and even human nature are delicate, interesting, and full of warmth. Each character has a distinct personality, is real and flesh-and-blood, and has no dull sense of being a tool. And the heroine carries the audience throughout the whole process. The short-drama-style slap-in-the-face scene, coupled with the setting that everyone cannot do without her command, is full of excitement but without losing logic. It is very enjoyable to watch!

It's quite interesting. Each chapter is very long. I really like the heroine and the mecha intelligence in it. It's very cute and the heroine is very smart. However, I feel that the progress is actually quite slow. There are still many mysteries that have not been solved so far. I feel that I can't see the end, I can't guess the ending, and there are many pitfalls. I don't know which pitfall is the main line. So far, I feel that the main line is to revitalize the institute, bring down that group, and then solve the cancer of the alliance and revitalize it. The alliance, solving the anti-alliance and other things, but the Mecha Youtian has not been clearly explained yet. I feel that this hole will be filled in after the military exercise is over. The length is really too long, especially the winter camp. It has written a hundred chapters, but the heroine has only experienced it for about half a month. It is still very interesting. I want to save it until it is finished. (Although it feels like it's still a long way from the end

Super nice [Blowing Kiss] The protagonist and other characters are well portrayed. I feel that many characters in the article have a bad attitude towards the heroine at the beginning and have solid class prejudices. However, the heroine has always done what she wants to do and insists on doing, and gradually affects the people around her. It turns out that people with lower grades can also work hard through the day after tomorrow. Obtaining the results that high-level people can get gives low-level people more hope, changing the rules of their environment, and protecting and cultivating rare species. The heroine has a bottom line and perseverance! ! Ahhhhhh this article deserves a higher rating, up, up, up! ! ! In addition, I really like the plot of the heroine communicating with the mecha intelligence and the nurturing Zaizai. It's so cute! ! ! !