Mecha in One Hand, Microphone in the Other

The previous writing is very good. I like this kind of plot where the protagonist thinks that he is mediocre, but in fact he defeats human beings in all aspects. But after entering the military academy, the plot line was laid out too fast and too deep, and it became a bit like a stream of consciousness. For example, in graffiti, although the pattern is still the same in the end, it is a stroke in the east and a patch in the west. Except for the artist, it is difficult for tourists to see what it is during the process. I hope the author will take his time. In fact, there is no need to write too hastily. In the end, it should be a very good article.

It's pretty good-looking, but a little lacking.

Off topic, it's pretty cool! I just don't know which world the heroine is writing about! But update soon, author!!!