I Transmigrated into an Eerie Campus Beauty, and She’ll Eat Me If I’m Found Out

After reading it, tell me your feelings. First of all, there are some parts that make people uncomfortable to watch, because the protagonist is too altruistic. Nowadays, everyone is an egoist. When I see the protagonist helping others even if he is in danger, I feel incomprehensible and even angry. Why must he help others? It's hard for me to stay alive, and I'm going to be fucked to death soon. Then there is too much emphasis on the protagonist's feelings of violating "conscience". For most people, it is good if you don't kill others for yourself and don't harm others. Why don't you fight back when someone attacks you? You don't want to kill me, but you can just teach me a lesson or make others stop beating you, okay? Do you have to stand there and refuse to fight back and curse? , It has no other effect except making people feel artificial. But the advantages are also obvious. It can be seen that the author is ambitious, there is not too much homogeneity, and the protagonist is well created. In particular, the psychological changes are described very delicately and the character is very distinct. From the author's description of the protagonist's skills, it can be seen that the author has a big plan, but the length of your description is too much, and it is just a blind explanation, without thinking about whether the readers want to read it. From the readers' point of view, this long and lengthy section is just explaining the simple physics of same-sex repels and opposite-sex attraction. It is unnecessary. I believe that most readers who can see it will jump or not read it well. Who cares about your stuff? It is better to make a direct comparison and pass it off. But no matter what, as the first book, the author's writing is really good, and it deserves four stars.

In the past, the protagonist always refused to accept it or cried. Her personality is like a woman, but the setting is that of a man, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. This is a poisonous point, but the author listened to the persuasion and changed it. It should be better. The plot later is quite good. The subject matter is quite new, and the author listened to his advice, and after revising it, there are no shortcomings. Also it's too short.

The setting is good, the pace is relaxed and moderate, and the plot is ups and downs and full of dangers. But what I am most satisfied with is the psychological portrayal and the protagonist's perspective. Nowadays, it is really not easy to find such a high-quality work.

The pacing is good so far, but I think there are a few things to pay attention to. 1. The protagonist's identity and stance. This is the most important thing to watch. As a lost soul, he is coveted by the weird, and as a weird and feared by humans, how does the protagonist deal with his own identity and position. This is the core issue faced by the protagonist of this book. All contradictions and conflicts will revolve around this point, and it will also be the main reason for "abusing the master". However, at present, it seems that the contradiction is too mild to support the plot. 2. Subsidiary issues arising from the issue of identity and stance. When a knife appears in a movie, it is destined to make someone bleed. In the same way, since the characters that are currently more focused on the weird characters all have foreshadowing, they will definitely appear in the future, but can it be more complicated? For example, there is a friendship between the weird ones, rather than a simple confrontation with different stances. 3. World view and human line From the current description of the uncanny world, it seems that the uncanny world is as hierarchical as the human world, with social hierarchies. Whether this is appropriate requires careful consideration. As the saying goes, the unknown is scary. Such a system is not a good thing for the weird aspect. But this can still be supplemented by the plot on the human side. If the reasons for the so-called drastic changes in the power system of the Trickster cannot be well written, the book will lose a major attraction. Small suggestions, if you find them helpful you can adopt them, after all, this is your book.

As a newcomer's work, it's actually quite good. In most plots, arrangements such as the protagonist splitting his soul to hide the aura of the lost soul, and using the players to escape are quite reasonable. I have not seen the altruistic plot of the protagonist mentioned by other readers. Maybe the author changed it later. I don't think there's anything wrong with the protagonist's altruistic character, but not many people are saints, and the protagonist should put himself first when being altruistic. Because the author you are writing about is just an ordinary person, not a public servant like a policeman or a doctor, who has any professional ethics or high moral standards. As an ordinary person, most of the time, I care about myself and the people close to me. It is enough to say some kindness to other strangers. Maybe sometimes you will be passionate and dare to be the ancestor. You can have such plots, but not too many, and because it requires a lot of foreshadowing, it is difficult to write. In most cases, it is not ideal to write. But anyway, you can read this book. The plot is relatively novel and eye-catching. Among so many clichéd, repetitive, and boring books, this one is indeed quite interesting. Of course, it's also possible that I haven't read many books of this type. [You taste carefully] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The text is about gender, but the protagonist behaves like a boy and a girl. There should be a setting at the beginning where the protagonist is more girly than a girl before time travel [laughing]

The setting is novel, the writing is fine, and the sparks created by the collision between the human soul and the weird body are also very interesting. I like to read this kind of novel where the protagonist struggles to survive in the cracks of race. It's good-looking, and it's over. The only problem is that it's too slow, and it doesn't work. It is generally slow and intermittent, with only a thousand words per chapter. I feel it is second only to novels that are updated weekly. However, for such a low level of popularity, it is already a blessing to be updated continuously. It is basically generating electricity with love. Come on, author, and look forward to the day it is finished.

The plot has a strong sense of immersion. I think it's very interesting. I hope the author will work hard and update it three times a day [awkward laugh]

I feel like this book is good. I hope the author will continue to update it to the end. In addition, I hope that the protagonist can always maintain his humanity, and his personality and habits can gradually integrate with the original person, but his values ​​​​do not be weirdly assimilated.

It's a very special subject matter. Since the author wants to grasp the survival of a "normal person" in a mysterious world, he must make himself look like a mysterious person but not really become a mysterious person. There are too many contradictions that need to be considered. No one can think about the problem in all aspects, just write down according to their own ideas. Seeing the restoration of authors, book reviews, and chapter reviews, I feel that I am easily influenced by readers, but what I want to say is that a setting that originally requires so much thinking, and then taking into account other people's ideas will easily explode. There is nothing wrong with caring about what readers think, but a balance must be struck, otherwise it will be difficult to agree on whose opinion everyone should listen to. Come on, the subject matter is very special and the writing is very good.