Gourmet: From the Start, I'm the Dorm Supervisor at Totsuki

It looks pretty good, and it makes up for a lot of regrets. But I would like to ask if Nakiri Shina will accept it? The problem is solved, and his man is unreliable, why not join the protagonist? It would be a bit pitiful for a widow to live her whole life. It collapsed, collapsed, and the back completely collapsed. It should be called Eunuch Traveling Through the Food World. In the front, I only wrote about cooking skills, and there was no emotional line at all. Moreover, the plot is completely different, it does not describe daily life at all, and the strength completely collapses later on. The abilities that were acquired slowly in the past can be acquired wholesale later. The characters in this world haven't been written yet, and the characters have all gone to the second world without being introduced. You can write daily plots in the early stage, and even write some emotional lines to pass through. Don't be so anxious, it feels like someone is holding a knife to it, and you have to finish the book quickly. I would say that it would be better if you write slowly, over 300 pieces, collect what you need to collect, and then go on an adventure together in a different world. You have enough emotional connections, and you are willing to follow him all the time, and work with him to improve the results to you. Alas, I don't want to talk about it anymore.

It would be boring for the protagonist to keep crushing him. He needs an opponent or some opponents. For example, maybe China is the ancient country of this world, so food is the most important thing here. Originally, the dark cooking world had been dormant for hundreds of years, but the emergence of the protagonist's secret skills attracted many people to search for past information and reawakened the dark cooking world. The main plot transitioned from a small school to the legendary kitchen utensils, and discovered that the system was actually Kiku downstairs, training the protagonist in order to fight against the dark cooking world, and then Let the protagonist train Jiexingliao to rebuild Ju and go downstairs to compete with the dark cooking world for kitchen utensils. The dark cooking world can also introduce a genius heir who can master poisonous cooking, control late-night cooks, and have secret skills in the club. In the end, the protagonist team narrowly wins and discovers that after collecting the kitchen utensils, they can go to the captive world of delicious food and start a new story.

Author, listen to me, you can join three worlds. The props can be written as little masters. In the surface world, you can write food spirits as high-level special chefs. In the middle and later stages of the inner world, you can write food prisoners, so that you will not be eunuchs. You can add some fantasy ingredients appropriately in the early and middle stages, which can provide a foreshadowing for the middle and later stages.

A very nice Shokoku fanfic It combines the material of The Young Master and The Prisoner of Good Food without going too far off topic. As for the female protagonist, we haven't seen any female protagonist yet. According to the progress of development, there should be multiple female protagonists. It didn't change the whole thing in any detail, and largely retained the original plot. Conclusion: You can watch it with your brain, it's a rare Shoji fanfic

I really feel that awarding a soul-soothing can solve the problem of God's Tongue. Judging from the current performance of God's Tongue, it is that the spirit is violent. There is no problem with the body itself, but the spirit cannot accept it and it makes it impossible to eat. It happens that the soul-suppression thing is the professional counterpart.

It's been a long time since I've seen a Shokugeki fanfic, and this one is quite outstanding compared to the previous ones of the same type. Come on, author!

I've read more than 60 chapters, is there a female protagonist? Don't you mean harem? [Cover face][OK]

The most interesting fanfic I have ever seen is The Rebirth of Japan's Chef God, but it's a pity that it has entered the palace.

Come on, write four or five hundred of them.

One star is missing because traveling through time travel to Xiaodang's house is boring.