Villain Chat Group: Am I the Only One with a Normal IQ?

Having just finished talking about the nature of the devil, what should the devil do? I thought you were going to go on a killing spree, but you ended up pretending to be a grandson.

I discovered that the protagonist is just like Li Huowang How to say Li Huowang has good intentions, that is, if he thinks that this thing exists, then this thing does exist The protagonist is the same as Li Huowang I thought if this thing exists, then this thing will appear

It's finished, I'm a bit addicted. Come on, author. I had read a few novels about chat groups before when they were popular. I was definitely interested in them at first. People from different worlds communicated, traded, touted, and traveled across the world. What attracted me to these things was that I felt the infinite possibilities created by the collision of different cultures. Just like the devil and the protagonist in this article, because they grew up in different cultures, they also reacted differently to the sudden appearance of the chat group, which is why the absurd and interesting protagonist thought of the "rich second generation" box-opening plot. As well as the two sixteen-character mental methods translated by the protagonist, it has always been an exciting thing for me to see the manifestation of Chinese culture. However, if the chat group is written, only the protagonist will encounter difficulties, and then solve this problem by becoming stronger through the chat group, and add some plots in which the protagonist improves his self-awareness and character by communicating with people from many cultures in the chat group, and relies on himself rather than the chat group to overcome difficulties. For example, in the novel, the devil asked how to chase women, and compared with tips on how to chase women, the chat group acted as a brain, and the group friends did the thinking, the love was broadcast live, and the clown humiliated the plot. The author gave the protagonist from the perspective of a bystander outside the mountain to remind him that the identity of the devil is the devil, and the opponent is the hand. As the daughter of the underworld, the Demon King puts the two sides in a correct position, examines his own behavior, and thinks about the objective and reasonable plot. In addition to giving readers a novel feeling of "Eh", it can also produce a little "fuck, what he said makes sense, the strong Douzong is so scary". This is what I think is a good plot. In addition, although it is a chat group novel, if I really use a large space to only write about the chat group, it would give me a bad feeling. The plot would be a bit simple, that is, the group friends have something to do, they send out tasks urgently, others chat, and then have a confrontation with the protagonist. This cycle is a bit boring. Consider enriching the plot structure, such as writing about the protagonist's real life, the protagonist and friends laughing and chatting about interesting things in the chat group, and friends giving some ideas or jokes, which can also slow down the overall plot narrative. It is convenient for the author to have sudden whims and can appropriately intersperse the plot. I'm someone who cares about logic but doesn't know much about it. For example, I'm wondering how this chat group will conflict with the decent camp since it's called a villain chat group, and whether there are any restrictions or conditions for entering and exiting the chat group. The Demon King of Troubled Times doesn't act like a villain at the moment, so why did he come in? Does he qualify if he is recognized as a villain, or is there a reversal? In particular, traveling between different worlds should be one of the characteristics of chat group novels, but there are always some restrictions when traveling between worlds. In the text, it is relatively common to give coordinates to the indigenous rituals and then transfer them. I can accept it, and we will see the development later. Let me talk about one final point, which I think is the most likely to make people feel uncomfortable - chat group novels can easily cause the characters' personal personalities to conflict or even be separated due to their behavior inside and outside the group in order to serve the relaxed and humorous style of the article, causing readers to feel uncomfortable and discouraged due to the inconsistent logic of the characters' behavior. Similar to the poor control of character contrast, such as coldness and cuteness, sand sculpture or enthusiasm in animation, animation is relatively easy to portray and enrich the characters, so that the characters before and after them are full, and the transformation does not feel abrupt, while the novel is slightly inferior in this aspect. Just like the Demon King's words at the end of the first chapter of this article, "Urgent, urgent, urgent...", It really confused me. The image of the Demon King just outlined for me was immediately shattered for me, so much so that I almost gave up on this book. Fortunately, I have read a lot of bad books, so I decided to read a few more chapters before drawing a conclusion. Later, the author also reversed the situation, which I felt was pretty good. But I do see this kind of problem a lot, and I'm afraid it will appear in my favorite works. It's just my personal opinion. You can maintain a relaxed and humorous style, but avoid being too frivolous and vulgar. You can use clever language and plot design to create humorous effects, instead of simply relying on the accumulation of jokes and memes, marginalizing all characters, and just repeating compliments. For example, in other novels, the character's personality is not taken into consideration, and they just say "worship the boss" like a robot. Not only does it look like Aunt Wang's bound feet are smelly, long and watery, but sometimes I feel a little immersive when reading the novel. When I saw Qin Shihuang and Li Shimin in the chat group being forcibly reduced to 666, it was uncomfortable (for the humorous style of the service article I mentioned before). Laughter can be generated through funny interactions between characters and unexpected situations, rather than using vulgar language or off-color jokes. And the character's speech should be as individual as possible. It might be better to have a scene where everyone praises or makes fun of the character at the right time. Of course, the above is purely my personal opinion. I published this statement for various reasons. There must be something wrong. Because I only stated my thoughts and the specific plot of this article was less integrated, it would be biased. You can refute me if you think it is unreasonable. I did not ask the author to write according to my thoughts. If so, I would not hesitate to give up this book, because I know that I have this level and have become famous for my writing. My purpose in writing this remark is not to put pressure on the author. Good books come from time to time, and treasures are always hard to find. I just hope that the author will work hard. Even if someone persuades me to quit, I will not write small articles to complain. If the store doesn't taste good, I won't come back; if the book doesn't look good, I won't read it. Is it hard to swallow and taste it carefully? It tastes like chewing wax. Think about it over and over again? Finally, the picture shows Urgent update [please update]

It's the main chat group. I feel good about it. I watched a female chat group before. It focused on my own cultivation and daily life in my own world, and then I wrote about the chat group. This one is the main chat group and the world of friends in the group, and then I wrote about the daily life. Some people read the book because they read my comments, and then came back to ask me how they could continue reading. I talked to the author with other book friends, and the author said that he would try to make changes. The author said that it would be easy to end without putting pressure on IQ and just doubt. The author is trying to fix the loopholes. The author still listens to opinions. If you have any questions, you can just ask them directly.

I can't be the only one to rede this stone, everyone should do it together

I can't be the only one seeing this stuff [smile]

I was almost poisoned to death. Maybe I am not suitable for this kind of book. Everyone is happy to read it and watch it happily.

There is a kind of retro beauty, what year is it today [laughing evilly]

Please update it quickly, it's not enough! The split screen is too low. I'll increase it for you! The plot is novel and beautiful (♥∀♥) and the characters are distinctive. Everyone is not left behind. They are like a group of people, each with their own life. They are a group of positive people. The so-called villains are just standing on the opposite side of the so-called justice. They work hard to survive and practice at all costs. For the sake of their own world, even if it only takes a hundred years, they have achieved something that the geniuses of all generations have been unable to do. Is it incredible? No, it's you who didn't try your best! Author I urge you to update.

Yes, except that the protagonist always thinks that those demon kings are chuunibyou. The plot inside is quite funny