Martial Arts Chat Group: But I'm a Cultivator

Work hard, overall it's good

It feels pretty good, let's wait and see first

I originally planned to give it a four-star rating, but since this thing is related to whether the author will write it in the future, I gave it five stars. The other issues are not big, but I feel that the protagonist seems to have too little combat experience outside of the realm of cultivation. He killed two noobs, and the same goes for elixirs. Can't the elixir recipe be optimized? There is also the issue of erysipelas that I didn't seem to see written about. There are also group members who praise the protagonist too highly, and the group leader did not choose it. Here are the suggestions of a bookworm who has read more than 7,000 hours and 600 books.

Why does Mao have the skills to cultivate magical weapons in the secular world? Even if he practices Mai, he shouldn't appear here. Juyuanqiao and the powerful people are still here.

Very nice, give it five stars

It's a little creative, but the characters of the members of the chat group are all the same. The author can try to write the original characters in the future. Everything else is okay. I can only say that the cute new author should work hard.

Would the author want to try that paragraph online? [Sneaky laugh] Lao Zhang, what if~ I mean what if, Zhang Cuishan was forced to death by the five major sects, and before he died, he said to you, "Emei... Guo Xiang... Come to Wudang and you can protect me for the rest of my life." [Sneaky laugh] Then~ died of anger

I think it's good. The book is generally good. The writing is relatively fluent and there are no big loopholes. The most important thing is that it basically doesn't contain poison. This is very good. The only regret is that I didn't go to the previous sect to show off [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The structure is clear, the route is clear, and it is easy to read. It is suitable for fishing. It is worth collecting, but the theme and routine are not novel. If the protagonist is given some reasonable ideas, for example, a warrior in a highly civilized world on the link uses technology and even magic to analyze the essence of immortality, and then breaks the dimensional wall and competes with various bosses and even reincarnation space to grab people and resources, it will definitely be more interesting.

In terms of improving cultivation, it is better to improve the quality of spiritual roots.