Transmigration: The Daily Life of an Ancient Imperial Exam Candidate, Son of a Peddler

The writing is very good. I love to read comments. I feel that the author really cares about the readers. The author will quickly correct some unreasonable or flawed things raised by readers [laughs], but I also want to tell the author that your writing is really great [like]. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people. Everyone has a different perspective on things in different living conditions. In my opinion, you really write well, with clear organization and reasonable story development, so just stick to your own ideas and write. I believe people will continue to appreciate it. Come on!

It looks good. The male protagonist is a very qualified and wise patriarch of a feudal society. I often forget that he has traveled through time. When the male protagonist was a child, his family was just an ordinary merchant making tofu. There was no family protection in the local area. They were alone, very fragile and helpless. Small, any slightest disturbance can cause the Lin family to be in turmoil, and any force that raises its hand can destroy the Lin family. When the male protagonist realizes the importance of family clan power, he begins to make plans and organize his own family power. Although the male protagonist has many small thoughts. It can be said that he is very scheming, but he also attaches great importance to love and justice, and exchanges sincerity for sincerity, so the friends around the male protagonist will be willing to help him. Of course, sincerity is not enough, but you must have the matching strength and ability to make people see your value. Every time the male protagonist goes, Every step is just right. He is really smart. As a parent, he is really awesome. Think about it hundreds of years later, when you open the Lin family tree, the first page will be all the great achievements of the male protagonist. The Lin family prospered because of him. It is really awesome [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to the follow-up

It's pretty good. The plot is not cliché and the writing is fluent. Each character has his or her own characteristics, but I would like to make a suggestion. The protagonist sometimes says some very modern words that make me a little confused, such as conditioned reflexes and experiments [Thinking] I hope the author can read my article🙏

Everything else is fine, but the content is a bit complicated. It's not like the writing by modern literary authors, but more like the writing by ancient Confucian scholars. It's complicated and troublesome, and it's annoying to read. Low ratings are normal. The author can read other imperial examination papers. I have a follow-up version of it. It has more than 300 chapters and is updated twice a day. I can't get enough of it. The protagonist has no system and does not have a six-yuan grade. Although it is also a bit of a cool article, at least it is comfortable to read. And later on, the father and son thanked each other. This was too polite, right? And the two brothers Lin Yuan. It's true that the protagonists are brothers, but to outsiders they are just servants. After a long time, will there be no problems in their hearts? There is also a younger brother who changed his surname. It seems to be no problem for modern people, but in ancient times, haha? Changing one's surname was a big deal in ancient times. It was a big deal to abandon one's ancestors. It was so easy to just change it at the drop of a hat. In fact, it was all a small problem. If a modern person traveled to ancient times, you wouldn't have the consciousness of being a subordinate. Nor did your parents and teachers. Could it be that they are all modern people? That's outrageous

The novel is great! The structure is clear and the logic is clear and rigorous. The protagonist is well portrayed. He is positive and optimistic, responsible, knows how to advance and retreat, is calm in his work, and can lead his family and friends to make progress together. I really like this kind of protagonist! However, there is a small flaw. Most of the supporting characters are not deep enough and have no memorable points. It also gave me the illusion that without the protagonist, the supporting characters would not be able to live their own lives on their own. But it's also possible that this is the reason why the story is written from the protagonist's point of view. All in all, it's a very good article, worth reading!

Halfway through the book, I found that there were many mistakes that readers had marked out, but the author did not correct them, or only changed this paragraph, leaving the same mistakes in the previous and next paragraphs uncorrected. However, the plot of the novel is still good and worth reading.

In fact, the writing is okay, 8.7, But the novel is relaxing and feels a bit suffocating.

More real and close to life! The male protagonist is not as smart as other time travel stories and has real fingers.

I have read a lot of imperial examination papers, and the biggest difference between this one and other papers is several. 1. The father who married into the family. Most families are perfect families in the secular sense. The author did not describe much about family emotions, just a quick brushstroke. But can you understand the imperial examination essay? For example, I am following a serial imperial examination essay. The author described the male protagonist's emotions towards his family very strongly, as if there is such a family in a parallel world, which makes people feel warm. However, the author of this article has few descriptions of family emotions, so it doesn't matter. After all, imperial examination documents 2. Some things after the imperial examination. Most authors describe the events after the imperial examination and focus on describing the messengers to announce the good news, family members being happy, family members giving rewards, running water mats, etc. But the author of this article has written a lot of content that other authors have not written. For example, scholar clothes need to be purchased specially And the Deer Ming Banquet will be described in more detail. Usually at this time, the male protagonist will become a disciple. Hahahaha, there is also the blind date part, hahaha, it's an old routine. Also, if the male protagonist's sister or sister has a brother, you can marry him (a good man with a better family status) This article does not write such old routines, which is good and good Also, most imperial examination writers rent a yard, but this article actually went to live in a temple. It opened my eyes as a northerner. The writing style has been popular in the south since ancient times. I didn't expect that the imperial examination business (black and white) around the temple has developed so modernly. The wisdom of the ancients cannot be underestimated.

I feel that the writing is very good, I followed it all the way, and the progress of the plot is well grasped. I finally managed to catch up with the imperial examination papers for entering the officialdom. I was really looking forward to Lin Xiangan who was killing everyone in the court, but it ended up [crying] [crying]. I look forward to the next wonderful story [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]