Naruto: From the Start, I Obtain the Golden Light Mantra

"Final Remarks" I'm sorry that I have no way to continue writing this novel. After all, this is just an experimental novel, and the purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! (You can uncollect this book, I have no complaints)

You can add the power of Tom's rules [smile], it won't fall apart even if cut into slices

The author's writing is quite good. It's not as boring as other fan fictions. Maybe it's because I haven't watched all the anime or I forgot most of the reasons and I don't feel the timeline problem [facepalm]. Overall, it ranks first among the Naruto fan fictions I've read. Come on.

I feel that the author's time and logic are very good. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. The author doesn't stress about combat effectiveness. The balance between golden fingers and combat effectiveness is very good. Keep up the good work [sending my heart][laugh][laugh]

This book is really beautiful, and the author's imagination is really great. Not only is the story happy and happy, but it has a single heroine, and the heroine is Tsunade. Moreover, the character setting has not changed, and it is very consistent with the original setting. It is like reading the original work. The daily story is very warm, and the male protagonist's death is not too abrupt. After all, it has been three years. It was only once that it was very comfortable to watch, and the viewer felt warm in their heart. It was neither brainless nor invincible. It made up for all the regrets in the original work. Except that the author often likes to use some long and difficult sentences, there are no grammatical errors. It is really good here. I think 9.3 To 9.5 Is no problem, but this review I really suspect that someone has done it maliciously, and many settings from the world are used in it, including the Thousand Blades of the Demon Sword, and many settings from Under One Person, including Breath of the Sun. It's really fun to watch. The author has to work hard. If you continue to write Naruto fan fiction, you are very likely to Become the second tornado, because it is obvious that this is the subject you are best at. Come on, come on. I have read more than 100 chapters now. This is a rare Naruto fan novel that I can read and even want to finish. It is also the first time for me to write such a long review on Tomato. It is really good! [Top post] The plot got a little boring in the middle of the story. The male protagonist was too invincible, and the emotional drama was really hard to describe in one sentence. It was obvious that the author wanted to write a story about group elephants, but it was too everyday. .

This book shouldn't be rated so low. I've watched the Naruto series to death. Overall, it's pretty well written. The rating is probably around 8.9. Whether it can break through 9.0 Depends on whether there are novel plots in the future.

It looks good and has logic. The protagonist is not truly invincible but still needs to practice. The Pokémon are also integrated well. I hope to add more Pokémon battle scenes to give the local psychic beasts a little shock.

The writing style is good, but the way I like to write long sentences can be changed appropriately. One sentence can be twenty or thirty words long to express two meanings. Try dividing it into two short sentences. This is just a personal preference of mine. The author can refer to it appropriately.

A very good Naruto story, and the middle and later stages are handled very well. The poisonous points are almost not considered a masterpiece [eating melon] [like] If you don't like Pokémon, I suggest you don't read. The pace of this book is too fast. It would be several times faster if you have Pokémon.

It's rich in content, but this is the first time I've heard that it's for children. Mature time travelers are childish again, but overall it's harmless, and the logic is as thoughtful as possible.