After Adopting the Down-and-Out Female Lead, I Died Horribly in Front of Her

It's so cool. It's the first simulation. The protagonist burns everything he has in order to save his sister. Even though he has become a cripple and can only survive in a mortal city, he still relies on his bonds to fight towards the battlefield of immortals and demons. His strong will supports the protagonist. Even if he only has one arm left, even if he has vomited black blood for several years, and even if his internal organs are almost spit out, he can still kill through the battlefield. This is love! ! Five stars, must be five stars! ! I can't be the only one who can read this book, come in here... Come in and read it! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Generally speaking, this book is well written. Although the first act is very confusing and a bit difficult to understand, the second act with the witch's story highlights the author's strength. Guide the witch who only has fear to gradually progress, and Xu Xie becomes the witch's light. This setting is not only full of warmth, but also skillfully shapes the characters and relationships, making the story rich in depth and appeal. The plot of the third act in the world of martial arts, whether it is the plot design of accidental and inevitable intertwining of Wu Yingxue's unintentional rescue, or the grand narrative of leading A Niu and others to form a survival army to fight against the demon, all demonstrate the author's strong narrative ability and imagination. The rapid growth in writing is a highlight. The description of the environment is immersive, making readers feel as if they are in different worlds; the details of the characters are described in detail, whether it is the protagonist Xu Xi, or characters such as Xu Moli, Witch, Wu Yingxue, and even Daniel and Aunt Zhang (especially Daniel) are given fresh vitality, as if they are vividly written on the page. I hope the author will continue his efforts and paint a more touching world.

This book is so beautiful. It's completely non-toxic and makes people laugh till their noses are bubbling. I highly recommend it. My brother is so cute that I can't help it.

The lack of relationship story in the first chapter was perfectly solved in the second chapter. I won the hemp and finished reading it in one go. It can be said that the writing is very good. At least there are no problems in the plot. Some criticisms are only about the power system, such as why the sister can kill the high level with a low level all at once (there is no explanation after reading it), but I personally feel that these do not affect it; The first chapter tricked and killed some people who wanted to read a good article. Some people felt that it was poisonous, self-motivated, and forced to sensationalize. But as I said, this is the reason why the chapter is not enough and lacks plot stories, and the pace is too fast (but it will not work if the pace slows down and the story becomes dull). In fact, this book follows the style of cultivating emotions and adding soft rice (actually, it is hair knife) , but I like [like]), it is not Shuang Wenlong Aotian (at least it was not [face covering] at the beginning). The plot rhythm of the first chapter is fast and lacking, so it seems to be very "self-moving", but it also depends on the person, at least I think it is harmless, but these are perfectly solved in the second chapter. The author is very good at telling stories. The overall story of the second chapter is very well written step by step. If I have to say the shortcomings, it may be that it is too bland and lacks big ups and downs. However, it is also one of the most perfect chapters written so far (because there are only two chapters at the moment). I would like to suggest that it would be very interesting if there are some big scenes and that kind of dihua, and some side reactions are still very interesting. Final Rating: Excellent work Suggestion: maintain standards, pay attention to details, and do not have any logical flaws (in terms of strength system)

The plot is quite good, quite interesting, and the simulated world is still very interesting. However, the author's writing style is a bit awkward. It feels like it is written for a purpose, so it seems a bit deliberate, but overall it is still good and I can continue to read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's so good-looking. The protagonist breaks through the Nascent Soul when he is on the verge of death for the sake of the heroine. He kills several demonic elixirs by himself. No one supports the demon invasion, which provides the protagonist with space to show off. It's so good-looking and good-looking. You must watch it [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The best funny novel of the year. The protagonist is so outrageous. The first copy made me laugh. The magic cultivator called me a cheater. He was such an unbeatable Xiaoqiang.

I read more than 200 chapters in one go My favorite among the 4 story units so far is the third one As an alternative kind of fast travel, I have always believed that this form of story should not be too long or too short. Too short and insufficient paving, too long and complicated The first story (Xianxia Plane) is too short. Although it is also quite touching, it always feels like it ends all of a sudden without much progress. The second story (Magic Plane) is much better than the first, but because the characters are too monotonous, there are only two heroes and heroines, so the image still feels too thin. The third story (martial arts plane) is just right! There are male protagonists, female protagonists, supporting roles, and extra roles. In the same huge world background, these small characters are like stars guarding the sun and moon. The author's sublimation at the end caught the swordsman off guard. After chewing and savoring it, it feels reasonable again The fourth story (sci-fi plane) conflicts with the main structure of the third world. It is too long and has too few characters. It is the only one among the four units that I skipped some chapters. I still hope the author can use more care In terms of writing, the author is already very good. It just lacks a little bit of excitement in the arrangement of the characters and plots (the male and female protagonists are fine, but we just need to see if we can add some supporting characters and make the villains more three-dimensional - even if they are bad, they should be bad and have their own characteristics, not like they are copied and pasted) Judging from all the chapters so far, 9.2 Points are well deserved. Here are five stars to help me a little bit. (Send three free gifts and six flowers to wish the author a happy New Year's Eve!)

This book is particularly good. [Like] The main character has lost all his spiritual power and has only one day left to live. He screams about bonds and family ties, and then he sits up in the middle of a dying illness and slashes at a bunch of golden elixir demon cultivators. It's so much fun.

It's well written and the characters are well drawn. But there are currently 2 problems: 1. The combat power system has been broken, and the main storyline has not been seen yet. A little attention to the current situation of Blue Star can instantly solve any problems. But it's not impossible to save it. For example, in the later stage, you can write a technological plane or something to introduce the concept of dimensionality and compress the combat power. 2. At present, 3 harems have been released in the 180+ chapters, and the increase speed is a bit too fast. It's not that I don't like to read it, as the author himself said, the place for love is limited, and I personally don't like too much harem. As long as there are too many, it will inevitably not be able to take care of them all, resulting in them becoming a vase in the later stage. If possible, write more about daily life, and even let the supreme people participate in the simulation appropriately (according to their understanding of reincarnation, without retaining strength and memory). It would also be good to write about stock trading (party struggle).