Spider Immortal: Flesh Is Frail, Ascend Through Machines!

In the early stage, there were some group portraits, and it can be said that it adopted a narrative structure that was not adapted to the local environment. When the protagonist develops in a corner, supporting characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist appear sporadically, resulting in a trivial look. Group portraits often require one or more heart-stringing core events to drive everyone. The core events create a cohesion that is not centered on individuals but centered on events to integrate the various lines of the group portrait, such as... The threat of the White Walkers in "A Song of Ice and Fire" with the coming winter + the fight for the Iron Throne, etc. In this book, the main line of mechanical ascension gives a clear psychological expectation centered on the protagonist, the only source of technology in the world of immortality, and there are no events such as natural disaster predictions to provide psychological expectations that attract people to gather with the protagonist. The radiation range with clear cause and effect to the protagonist is temporarily limited to the contact range of the protagonist's power. These characteristics mean that the early stage of this book is naturally not suitable for group portrait writing, and is more suitable for character series with the protagonist as the core. As for why I gave it five stars...[Face covering] It's rare that the subject matter is right, so I support it subjectively.

After reading it, it's very interesting. The author's writing is very good. It's a classic group portrait, but the story is still closely connected, but the ending is too hasty. Chapter 400 feels like it's just the middle part of the story, but chapter 500 directly explodes the plot. Although the ending of the story is still very good, it will probably take 2000 chapters to tell the story perfectly! In short, it's very good-looking, and more than 500 chapters are not enough.

It's a good book. I like it. I just feel that there is a little more description of the main character (for me personally). The book is very interesting. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.

It's slow to develop, and it's a group portrait. I've seen almost 200 chapters and I haven't seen any bad points. The setting is okay. Those who love to read the setting are lucky. The only awkward thing is the martial arts competition between several disciples. Although I know it is an exhibition match, it is really awkward to shout out the moves, especially the names of these moves are like arcade moves, which is even more embarrassing. But overall it suits my taste very well, five-star support

We still don't know how many manuscripts the author has saved

I still want to watch the main character's lines, but I feel like there are too few lines. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch and jump around to other lines.

It's very appetizing. I'll leave a five-star review here.

Entraining Qi - Body forging (cultivating immortals and demons both starts with body forging) - Single level Crystallization - Qi training/Enchanting - Aggregation level Armor formation - foundation building/demon repair - cracking level Gathering Pill - Forming Pill/Magic Pill - Fusion Level Condensing Pill - Golden Pill/Broken Pill - Fusion Level Beast Soul - Nascent Soul/Demon Soul - Honkai Level Demon Soul - Refining the Void/Swallowing the Sky - Martial God Level Ghost body - transformation into god/devil - demon machine level King Beast - Mahayana/Great Demon - Herrscher Level Imperial Beast - True Immortal/Earth Demon - Black Hole Level Beast God - Golden Immortal/Heavenly Demon - Subspace level

The writing is very good, but the pace of the plot is a little slow.

It looks good, I feel like the main character could have more roles