There Really Is Something Wrong with My Mage Training Life

This is the first time I read this kind of story about masters and apprentices. The characters and other aspects of the female protagonist and male protagonist really impressed me. The writing is also very good, but the rhythm is not very good. Next came the sharp sound. To be honest, the reason why no one reads your book may be due to Shark Arm Platform. You wrote the dream part shortly after the beginning to lay out some things, but I feel like you are throwing something directly into the face. It is too sudden and the amount of information is too large. I am afraid that these few chapters of yours have turned away a lot of readers who are looking for leisurely daily articles. Next comes the characters. There are a lot of characters in the academy part. Most of these characters have no role in advancing the plot. They are more of a chat topic for the male and female protagonists (they don't even have any effect on the relationship progress of the male and female protagonists!!!). The final result is a chapter that contains a lot of information but not many useful questions (it really gives me a headache to remember the names, but seeing these characters now, there are not many useful ones) However, these problems are all from the first volume. After the second volume, these problems are basically solved, but sometimes there are inexplicable transition problems. When I see some places, I will flip forward to make sure I have missed it again. Finally, I still hope that my voice can help you improve. In some places, my judgment may be subjective. No matter what, I hope you can keep writing, because I really like your works, come on [like]

I've watched it all along the way, the growth of the male protagonist, the progress of the female protagonist, your aunt's smile in front of the screen, the super ↗↘appetizing↗stomach↘appetite↗but particularly active foot-skating "author"😡When will the male and female protagonists confirm their relationship! Not sweet enough, needs to be sweeter. Even though I was busy with work, I never tried to collect books, just for the happy ending that every goblin desires... I know the author is writing it now, so I won't force him to post the draft. But if this continues, I will change my job to become an undead skeleton💀💀💀 When will the sun shine into my heart?

It's nice to read, the writing is very fresh and refined yet humane. Xiao Xingyan is also cute and cute haha, and Xiao Lingyi, the white-haired dumpling, is also very cute ~ Dui! And there's also little Dumbao~! How shameless! So sweet~! And wow, don't be too tired, it doesn't matter if you update later~ I've seen it all, so why don't you give me a like? It's pitiful.

Give yourself a five-star rating

This book should use the story lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonist to drive the main plot. The plot is very interesting, and the heroine is a loli, silly, silly, and very cute. [Sinister smile]

Why does such an excellent Lolita novel have such a low rating? It shouldn't be like this I have read 600 chapters so far. There are no major problems in the whole story. The author is also active. As for stopping updating if there are no results Don't want that kind of thing All in all, this book is very good (I am not a lolita person) Recommended (I'm not very good at writing reviews for the first time)

I originally planned to read the latest chapter before writing, but I couldn't help myself and rated it (because I wanted to see the duration ο(=•ω＜=)ρ⌒☆(cross out). A stable update every day and never-ending updates (currently) are better than many novels I have read, so you, the author, are simply my superman (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧( fog As for the plot, this article is more about daily life, and the supporting characters are well written. They all have their own stories and choices (such as Lord Hawthorne, Lao Xu). It is considered a good novel in Tomato. At least I see that there are no poisonous points now, and the score of seven points is really low. Evaluations are inevitably subjective. If you like a slow pace and a more everyday person, you can give it a try. Finally, cheers to the author. Although no one will read it, I will try my best to see it to the end!

Good looking [like] Now when I read a book on Tomato, I dare not hope that there will be no poisonous spots. I can only hope that the poisonous spots will appear later. Not to mention that I haven't seen any bad points yet, the character descriptions are also good, so it's a very good book. There are just too few people. Is it because there is not much promotion? Logically speaking, if the quality was not constantly updated, there wouldn't be so few people, right?

If you take a quick look at the number of readers, it's really pitiful [face covering] Some new books are read by 30,000 to 40,000 people. Overall, this book is very good, so good that I don't know what to say. The writing style is beautiful, the writing is good, and the characters are distinct. Some readers thought that the early pacing was not properly controlled, but I thought it was okay and did not appear to be lagging or too fast. [Eat melon] If I have time, I'll try to see if I can publicize it to the outside world. Can you help me summarize the advantages? I can't wrap my head around it [laughs] How long have I been reading now [Eat Melon] Let's take a look

It's okay, but the plot jumps around a lot, which makes it feel weird to read, and it's not very smooth. The Riddler often makes me feel dizzy, but the daily writing is very delicate, but it's a pity that it doesn't have much space. Overall, Lolita is great!