Harry Potter: The Passionate, Pure-Hearted Professor

It's very good. I like the heroine's character and the relationship with the professor, but I feel that when it comes to Dumbledore and those who have done something bad to the heroine and the professor, they say they want to teach the heroine and the professor a lesson, but they don't. It was very uncomfortable to have a thorn stuck there, but everything else was fine. I saw Lupine in class asking the students to imagine the teacher wearing female makeup, and I was really angry. The Gryffindor students below were all laughing. The heroine was watching all this at the door, saying that she was very angry, but nothing seemed to happen in the next few pictures. I was really angry. I didn't read the latter part, but if you don't mind, you can watch it. Overall, it was good.

Yes, I like the interactive description. The early part was good, but later on when I wrote about some things that made Severus angry, I always felt like he was picked up high and put down gently, especially when Severus was wronged and something he cherished was secretly reported to the heroine, and the heroine just rubbed her hair and didn't take it seriously. I think this is a bit like not caring about the lover, and the heroine's preference is always given to others, Xifu is always angry, and the heroine likes to see Xifu look aggrieved and angry, which is a bit. . . It feels like they only go back to the cellar to sleep for a few months, and Sifu is a supporting character later on, which is quite uncomfortable. This book is more like a heroine novel. The plot is pretty good, not boring at all

Super invincible and beautiful! My professor should be like this. After determining what he wants, he should get it instead of crazily shrinking and feeling inferior! He is a standard Slytherin! The most annoying thing about watching fan fiction is that the emotional line is too slow. I have already read the novel, and I just want it to be sweeter without the plot, and just want to satisfy the unsatisfactory feeling I felt when watching the movie and reading the original novel. This is what I should eat! ! ! Thanks to the author

It's very beautiful, and the emotional development is very delicate. Snape is very suitable for this kind of moisturizing and silent character. He is not given too much time for internal friction, and he is naturally pulled out of it. The chief lady's whole life does not revolve around Snape. She has her own goals. She is very happy to get along with the cubs. There is no tit-for-tat between the colleges in other fans, and the overall tone is very relaxed. Just pay attention to segmenting it into paragraphs. The text in one paragraph is too long, which makes it a bit tiring to read. Come on, update quickly, ten updates a day will be no problem! ! !

The author's heroine's personality is full of charm, and the professor is also very human ~ But I really hope you can read the comments. As someone who specifically reads Professor BG's article, I really don't want to read the professor's sexual transformation or right position... Especially in the original work, the image of the professor dressed as a woman was created by Lupine in order to maliciously smear and humiliate the professor... As a professor fan for more than 20 years, I can only feel heartbroken when I see the professor dressed as a woman... It once appeared in Miss Rabbit's creation, which is harmless, but this gag is repeated and continues to spread... It is really painful for some readers... Because the author's big book is really charming, and this gag does not have any need to promote the plot...

Woohoo! Forgive me for just reading more than ninety chapters and I couldn't help but give it a five-star review. The lead lady is really great! Single-handedly, he unknowingly influenced the four branches of Hogwarts to feel like a family. From time to time, the cubs in each branch visit each other to pick up things hahahaha And everyone is really cute. The writing style is relaxed, and the subsequent interaction with Professor Snape is also very healing and heart-warming, occasionally with a bit of adult pull. The heroine does not have the habit of blushing at every turn. Although Snape is a bit ooc, this is really cool! It's not so bitter and full of hatred, how should I put it, it's much more vivid, and there are many more words influenced by the chief lady. And ah and! When I read more than ninety chapters, Snape knew that the heroine knew the danger of Voldemort but was not afraid at all. He couldn't help but ask the first lady what her ambition was. Her answer really touched my heart! (Crazy heart for the chief lady) (Everyone feels déjà vu) The following is the original text ["Calm down sir, maybe you can have a glass of wine and listen to me slowly. I know that staying safe would be the easiest choice. Not only me, but also my little snakes can avoid the danger during that time and live in other countries temporarily. Until the matter is settled, even if the mysterious man wins in the end, I don't have to worry too much. The European continent is so big, and even like you said, I can go to Asia and China and still live a good life. Including my little snakes, most of them were able to escape unscathed from the danger that everyone thought would never happen again. But Professor, Hogwarts is here and so are the professors, even Headmaster Dumbledore. Although I don't like him as much as other professors, I believe that he will do his best to deal with that matter. And you, my professor, you have this mark but are trusted by Headmaster Dumbledore. So when that day comes, what will you face? A traitor to the Death Eaters, or an insider of Headmaster Dumbledore? No matter which identity you have, you will be the one facing the most danger in the whole incident. In addition to you, I also have friends from other houses, such as the naughty Weasley twins, the arrogant and annoying little Berg, and the really beautiful and charming Miss Johnson... I think one day, this group of reckless Gryffindors will not know what it means to protect themselves wisely. They will just wave their wands non-stop until the end of their lives. And my little badgers, at least half of them are hemp and mixed-blood wizards. Some of their families were not too wealthy and they couldn't even move their families abroad at that time. And the little badgers don't have any evil intentions. They are friendly and tolerant of everyone. They also deserve to be treated kindly by everyone. They are a group of simple, kind and sunny little cuties. If the mysterious man wins in the end, where will my little badgers go? Is there any place for the little badgers in the huge British magical world? Of course, there are also those little eagles, they are all a bit strange, like the free wind, blowing wherever they want to go. They are smart enough to explore the deepest mysteries of magic, but they are also dumb enough to not understand the slightest bit of complexity in the human heart. If the wizarding world is in turmoil, where else in the UK can my little nerds find a place to read and study in peace. So my good professor, this decision was not just made by me, even my little snakes made the same choice. The kits need us, especially in a situation like this, where Slytherin is everyone's brains. Obviously, Gryffindors never use their brains on things that have nothing to do with getting into trouble. In the eyes of Hufflepuffs, all good people in the world are good people, but Ravenclaws are so smart that they don't put their minds outside of knowledge at all. What would my little idiots do without Slytherin? We were smart Slytherins, and they had Slytherin friendship. "] After watching it, I couldn't help shouting my allegiance to the leader! Seat! Small! Sister! (Mom——!) (Cross out)

Ahhhhhhh it's so pretty! Show them all to me! ! ! (But I still want to say something secretly. My wife doesn't like punctuation a bit [laughing]. She doesn't mention it at the end of a sentence, and sometimes there is no break in a sentence. What impressed me the most is a chapter near the front. There is a sentence in four and a half rows, without a single punctuation mark [laughing]) But it's really well written [Love]

It's super good-looking. Severus is really cute in this book. His venomous tongue and arrogance can make him face his emotions. The unwavering Lucy, this article is really unmatched. I have read many books about redeeming Severus. In this book, Severus first realized his feelings, and then his Slytherin characteristics made him wait patiently. Lucy is also a Slytherin. She knows Xu Xu Tuzhi. Her real age is 30 years old. She is not revealed at a glance, but has a profound soul. In short, this book is really sweet, and the interaction between the two of them is also very interesting. You can enter the pit vertically [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's a great cp Snape book. Finally there is no such situation of conflict between schools [face covering] To be honest, I still like the kind of writing where we work together. The writing is good, the plot is also very good, and the transition of feelings is also very natural. In addition to the heroine's life experience, there is a Miu Miu magic, but it is actually quite logical. It's worth taking a look, it seems to be very good so far [sending my heart] [admiration]

It's not a chronicle based on the original work. The author has his own ideas. This is the kind of fanfic I want to read. Moreover, the character of Severus in this article is also quite interesting, not so mean, and even quite cute. I also like the heroine in the same grade, and everyone is my friend.