Villain: Master! Senior Brother Ran Off Again!

I have read a lot of regret stories and husband-chasing stories, and this one really hits the mark for me. It doesn't have the bloody stomachache plot or poisonous points of similar books. Even though the female protagonists are affected by the consciousness of heaven, they still retain their rationality and feelings for the male protagonist. Moreover, the exciting points of the female protagonist chasing her husband and the male protagonist's attitude after awakening are retained. It is like taking the essence and discarding the dross.

It's a good theme, and I've finished the latest chapter. I like the subject matter very much and want to continue to pursue it, so I left a long comment and wanted to make some personal suggestions. I hope the author can forgive me. The writing style leans towards daily comedy, and there are indeed many plots that make people laugh. It is well written. However, the change in the protagonist's personality is really strange. Being funny, careless, and afraid of the Master should be the character of the protagonist before the disaster. Therefore, during the period when the protagonist just regained his memory, his personality changed. It is difficult to assume that the protagonist is someone who has experienced several reincarnations. Now that the protagonist has begun to understand and forgive the heroines, and does not deviate from the funny and relaxed daily style of writing, then I think, can the protagonist's character be made a little stronger and sinister? In other words, he will tease the heroines from time to time, and he will not always be in a funny weak position when facing the master. After all, the current protagonist combines the memories of several lives. If he still uses the out-of-the-box personality before the disaster, it would be better not to write about the past life. If the setting of past life reincarnation is put aside and there is no difference between it and ordinary light-hearted daily novels, then wouldn't this subject matter be very redundant? In short, there is currently a lack of motivation to continue chasing. Personally, I hope that the protagonist can be like the above and change his personality a little bit when facing the heroines. Although the misunderstanding has been resolved and the male protagonist will not resent the female protagonists, after all they have suffered for so many lifetimes, it is still too bland to seamlessly switch back to Senior Brother Youai (disciple) after the misunderstanding is resolved. Personally, I think the male protagonist can really be more playful with the female protagonists, especially when facing the master, he can be stronger and even meaner. Because after seeing the title of the book and reading the introduction, my first reaction was that the male protagonist teases the female protagonists and tries to escape all day long. (PS: I really want to see it. The protagonist is saying "my good master" while doing bad things to her hhh. He is a master and a disciple. Isn't it more exciting to emphasize the contrast of identity in this way? Jie Jie Jie)

How can I put it, it's not as exciting as the regret in the crematorium. The misunderstandings of several reincarnations are wiped out in a few words. It looks really awkward, like being stuck in a breath and feeling uncomfortable. But at least it's not poisonous. It can be seen that the author's strong desire to survive is crazy. It's a pity that the actions of several lifetimes are explained in one sentence and forgiven. It's a bit hard to watch. Overall, it's okay.

The writing is good and quite interesting. Unlike most other articles that have a system and are cheating, no1, all kinds of opportunities, and all kinds of love are given to the harem without progress. After reading it for a while, there is no desire to read anymore. It is the same. This one also adds a little bit of plot. If we keep up the good work, we can dig more holes and delve deeper into the plot. It would be better if we add some humor to the style of the newspaper seller. It will definitely be an outstanding article.

It's quite embarrassing. Tomatoes are like this. As long as the author feels comfortable writing, the readers will have to think a lot [laughter]

The author hopes that the system will be "punished". After all, there are easier ways to complete it, but it still depends on having fun. This has to be "punished", so that people who have fun can also become fun [laughter]

Wow wow wow, it's super beautiful. Yuan'er's previous lives were so miserable and pitiful, and the master's love for Yuan'er in the later scenes was so well described that it made a 20-year-old boy cry when he saw it ❤️ 👍

I took this book out of the bookshelf and added it back three times. After much stumbling, I finished it this time. I could read the first 50% of the book word for word. I read it very seriously and liked it very much. The rebirth flow has the author's own characteristics. The reason why I gave up the book was that I kept pushing the map in the later period (maybe it was because the data was not good and I didn't want to write seriously?). It can be regarded as me giving the author some personal opinions. If I support the author, I will give it five stars. I hope the author can write such a bright book in the future!

Great to watch, very funny, lots of jokes, very interesting. Personally, I like it very much. The system acted as the entertainer and set up a crematorium for the male protagonist to chase his husband. It was very interesting. It is also a reverse strategy. The four women are trying to defeat the male protagonist hahahahahaha. The villain Ye Fan is very interesting. When the author made the clay figurine of the villain, he was full of laughs. He looked stupid, and the villain's old man also made comments from time to time, which was very interesting. The author has a very strong desire to survive and would avoid most poisonous spots. When you are passing the time, catching fish at work, or being a light bulb, bedtime stories are the most suitable.

It's okay, but the first version of the text is a poisonous version. Is this a pressure revision?