What Should I Do About a Captain Who Always Wears a Scowl?

As an e-sports novel, the large amount of romance and daily life at the beginning of this book may dissuade many people. I know that not catering to the public means that I won't get perfect attendance and won't make money, but I still want to finish writing my first book. This is not only an explanation for myself, but also an explanation for everyone who pursues books. Only by not forgetting your original intention can you achieve success. Remember, my dream is to be a writer. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Come on, author! There are really very few novels with two heroines on the e-sports theme, not even one. [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

Let me start with my comments: I hope the author will not use words like "girl" as derogatory terms to describe people when writing a book next time. It makes people uncomfortable, especially in gl articles. Let's talk about the conclusion: it is a rare gl e-sports article and the author has good writing skills and the description of the game is also very good. The plot is quite attractive, and the description of the relationship between the heroines is also good. It may be a little awkward in the middle, but the flaws are not concealed. I hope the author can write better words. [Love]

This novel is really written and I have high expectations for it. I used to hate slow-burning novels, but I don't know why this novel is so slow-burning, but I just like it. Maybe it's what the author said that you don't need a reason to like something. Of course, I haven't searched for other e-sports articles, but I found that those novels didn't make me feel that much expectation. After reading it once, I didn't want to read it a second time, and some didn't want to read it after reading a few chapters. Therefore, the author's writing is smooth, better than the novels I have read. I am short of words and can't say anything good to praise, but I really like this novel. I hope the author can continue to update it and not stop updating it.

I love the two heroines or the main e-sports character [Adoration] I don't know why I feel that the interaction between Bai Yi and An Tao is so awkward, especially those descriptions. I feel that Bai Yi is like a little darling wife. Can Bai Yi be calmer in front of An Tao and not be shy at all times? At least there are fewer adjectives

It's really good. The description of the game screen is very real and immersive, which makes me vividly feel DaDa's love for the game. Finally, come on DaDa, don't stop updating! !

It's been a long time since I've read an article on this kind of subject. I rarely read more than 200 chapters. I didn't skip a chapter in the whole process. It's the first time I'm so patient. The game I wrote in big letters looks very boring (I think I don't play games). The emotional line I wrote is also step-by-step. It's okay if the rating is not high~ It's okay~ Come on＾0＾

This book has been followed from November last year to August this year. Now the main text has been completed. It is very interesting. It has e-sports and sweet love. It is recommended that you read this book and give it a rating of four stars or more to give back to the author.

I mean, the plot looks really good. I mean, they are all too innocent. Author, when can you write a story about two people confessing to being together? It's almost 200 chapters and the protagonists are not together yet😓😓

Bai Yi and An Tao were two people who had their mouths sawed in the early stage. You didn't ask me and I didn't ask you in the early stage. If you are the type who doesn't like to coy and coy, it might be a bit uncomfortable. Bai Yi is always shy and blushes in front of An Tao. She blushes no matter what she does. Other than that, everything else is fine.