Harry Potter: When I Became Lily's Cousin

It's very beautiful, not only about love. Many regrets have been fulfilled. Don't blame everyone. Penny became a ballet girl, a good sister, had her own career, and the relationship between the two sisters was still very good. Ariana regained her sight, and the two Dumbledore brothers became like family members again. Grindelwald can also meet Dumbledore... The story continues

Snape CP's original heroine, very beautiful [send heart][send heart][send heart] This is by far the best and most satisfying ending for all HP fans: 🌸The fate of Mr. And Mrs. Evans changes 🌸Penny's destiny has changed and she is very happy (I like this Penny) 🌸The relationship between Lily and Petunia is no longer broken 🌸The three siblings Dumbledore, Ariana and Aberforth live together, and Ariana is a ghost cultivator 🌸Dumbledore and Grindelwald🤫🤫🤫 🌸Dumbledore is no longer cursed by the Resurrection Stone 🌸Lily and James also died from Voldemort, but their souls can be saved 🌸Harry was loved by his grandparents, aunts and uncles, and had a happy childhood 🌸Harry's cousin Dudley is a great boy 🌸Snape did not join the Death Eaters 🌸Regulus also sank to the bottom of the lake, but he was not dead and could be saved. 🌸Gold Cup Tom (soul fragment) vows to eliminate his sins (Voldemort and other Horcruxes), and aims to become an immortal . . . . . .

It's very nice. I personally feel that the character design is not coo, and it fits the original work very well. I'm particularly happy that Penny has her own interest and dream, and she is taking the path of ballet. It is no longer like the original work. I hope to keep updating! ! The more the merrier

Super pretty! ! ! Everyone comes to see, CP Severus, the heroine is a dual practitioner of magic, and according to this trend, her strength will be absolutely maximal! ! ! And it's good if no one in the article is bad! ! Just looking at the introduction, it seems that Lily is still gone [almost crying] [almost crying]

I've read this book, and there's nothing wrong with the character. The heroine is a very cute little girl, and the other characters are also described objectively. It's very good, but it's just a little lacking. I hope the author can stick to it, come on [Blow kiss]

The writing is very good. I rarely write book reviews, but this one really spoke to my heart. All the characters are very detailed, and it can be seen that the author has put great care into it, and he did not deliberately criticize anyone. Our heroine, little badger Lin Long, is generous, kind, smart and powerful. She is like a little sun. At the same time, she does not seem too charming. The focus of development is still our main character. I really like this. I want to make friends with Lin Long just through words. My biggest regret is about cp. It is known that the introduction is about cp Snape, but from the current updated position, Sirius is really the book that I can't get over. It feels like a pity. Of course, I am also looking forward to the next plot. Thank you to the author for your hard work, come on! Oh, yes, I forgot to mention the most important thing. Many of the tragic endings in it have been rewritten, and I feel sad every time I see it. The Evans sisters no longer quarrel, Petunia embarks on the road of ballet, ggad meets again, Aberforth, Albus and Ariana reunite, the potion that Mrs. Snape predicted before leaving, etc., Etc., All of these are quietly changing, developing in the direction of beauty...

It is rare to see an original female protagonist who is neither reborn nor time-traveled, and is tied with Ying Ying Ying. I feel that the current heroine's abilities are a bit fantasy-like, and I'm looking forward to seeing how she will play Lao Fu in the future. Snape's dialogue is quite on point, not too OOC, and the heroine relies on her own ability to grow herbs and invest in them. Snape is particularly good at making money ()

I enjoyed reading this book. The character description of the heroine is really good. The heroine is portrayed very three-dimensionally in some details. The characters in it are not inexplicable. It inadvertently makes up for a lot of regrets in the original main line. It does not make some plots seem to be regrets for the sake of peace. Everything is described in a logical manner and does not appear to be abrupt. The relationship between Lin Long and Severus does not happen overnight. It is divided into three stages. First Grade Heartbeat , the second grade has a heartbeat, the third grade confirms the heart, the process seems slow, but there are many interesting things interspersed in the middle, and it will not feel boring. The two of them will be together inadvertently. Although there are a few twists and turns in the middle, it is not very heartbreaking and can be solved in one or two chapters. There is no grand oath between them, only a steady stream of companionship. In the battle, no one holds back the other, but it is not over yet. I hope that the subsequent writing will continue smoothly [laughs]

This article is not invincible at the beginning, it is a growth article with Chinese Taoism (Jiu Shu guides the practice) and magic. Each character has his or her own personality traits and is not a fixed and unified personality. The character's personality is more fleshed out. Although Penny in this article is an ordinary person, ordinary people also have their own wonderful lives. She no longer demonizes the magical world and looks down on ordinary people. The interaction between Lin and everyone is also very interesting. Everyone is no longer just defined as the stereotype of lion, snake, little badger and eagle. Snape had the ambition of a snake, but he also had the courage of a lion. The foursome no longer look like brainless lions, but they also know how to give in and take care of their friends. Among the many fanfics, this one is really good. The emotional line is so written that it makes people anxious. It is obvious that they are going to Wen Shengsheng in both directions and it has become a crematorium story! ! I really want to beat this author to death! ! ! [Cry][cry]

Awesome! The heroine is a metaphysician, very powerful! It was Lily's sister who saved everyone! Tom and Voldemort split, and finally he! Really awesomeദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧