Hearing My Love Rival’s Thoughts, I Become His Man

Beautiful! The plot will become more and more exciting after coming to the magic city. I look forward to the update! Let's talk about the shortcomings first. It's a little slow at the beginning. The setting of "Listen to the Heart" does nothing to advance the plot other than flirting. It's weird that the whole story of that night can be explained in a hundred chapters. A misunderstood meme is like chewed gum after being used for a long time. It is tasteless. On the contrary, the subsequent plot progresses well. In order to defeat the original protagonist's power, the Queen of the Demon City starts a game with Zhang's family. It becomes more and more interesting, and the plot has a sense of grandeur that is gradually unfolding. And the various plot foreshadowing and reversals are much more interesting. The protagonist Gong is portrayed as very smart and charming [but it is a bit ineffective. It seems that apart from his identity, he is really an innocent young man with no experience and city government, and he looks more and more like a fucking love brain. Gong is in various arrangements, Shou is in love, it seems that everything depends on Gong to smooth things out for Shou, and eliminate hidden dangers. In the original book, Shou was as nameless as cannon fodder and was tricked to death by Xie. In this life, he was stepped on by Xie (entering the Huo family in a grand manner), but he was not wary of Xie from the beginning to the end. It's not that you can just let him jump around if you don't like him. If you want to crush a bug, crush him to death. What's more, this is a poisonous bug that can bite you to death if you don't pay attention. No one can be beaten by this soy sauce. At least I hope that Shou has something to do outside of Attack's field of vision (something that promotes the main plot, or promotes his own growth, not just relying on Attack and Rescue). Rather than punching in and clocking in to work at the company, just fall in love with Gong, just like the vase heroine in the male video. But overall it's a good review! Worth seeing! My opinion is that I hope the author writes better and better!

Five stars! Five stars! It was the first time I saw a book on Tomato that appealed to my taste. The characters of the two protagonists also really poked me. In my opinion, Xiao Pei is the one who doesn't argue with the other, but will use actions to prove whether he can do it🤤🤤🤤🤤, Xiao Pei Huo, a child who looks ordinary on the outside but is a kid who talks about everything on the inside. There is a big contrast between the outside and the inside. The contrast is so cute🤤🤤🤤 I like it❤️❤️. Every time I see Xiao Huo complaining about Xiao Pei a lot, I want to laugh. Xiao Pei novels, but he can't let the other person know that he can read minds. Hahahaha Zundu is so funny. I'm really looking forward to the moment when Xiao Pei finds out that Xiao Huocai has sex with him at the hot spring hotel. I guess chapter 40 will be soon after. Looking forward to it! ! Come on! It's so beautiful! ! ❤️❤️❤️

It's so good-looking. I haven't seen such a smart protagonist in a long time. [Laughing awkwardly]

I really love this book. It's so novel. After reading the introduction, the setting is so delicious🥰. I found out it's a serial and I was about to explode (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). I've never seen such a book that appeals to my appetite (what an interesting misunderstanding hehehe). It's so well written, I love it so much (*'ε`*)

I really like this kind of thing, it really pokes my XP, vocal, I immediately praised the 360-degree flying spiral. I really love rats regardless of the emotional line or the plot line. Oh my god, the author, don't be too good at writing. Update it quickly. I'm so greedy [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Why isn't such a beautiful book popular? Come on, come on, come on! Burst! Burst! It's so beautiful. The detailed logic, the intriguing plot, and the two delicate emotional lines are all unforgettable and in-depth points for me. It made me toss and turn in bed waiting for updates. Generally, there are not many novels that I am willing to follow up on. Madam, hurry up and update, I am so greedy, this one really poked me! Like like 😍

The setting is very good, two equally handsome men, I am very worried about whether they can do it faster, I am anxious to death, I am still misunderstanding, I have listened to it all morning, hey, this article is too new, let them go in both directions! ! ! !

The writing is so good. The misunderstandings at the beginning were a bit annoying, but the whole plot is clear and does not affect the understanding. The young couple has been really sweet since they got together, with straight shots + mind-reading cheats, Tianke Tsaojiao, kswl. Some comments are a bit extreme about the supporting characters, but the author did not focus on the supporting characters. It is natural for the supporting characters to have their own emotional development. There is not much space to follow up and it will be considered a branch OE, right? Except for the protagonist of the original work, all other characters have a more or less gray camp feel. There is no whitewashing of the villains. It is very comfortable to watch. The young couple keeps giving out wedding candies, which makes me feel warm after eating them [sends my heart]

1. I think the most attractive and eye-catching part of the book is the creation of characters. Each character has his own thinking, and the thinking is deep, and the character of the thinking character is real and delicate. I really like to see everyone's inner speculation process. 2. The progress of the plot in the first part of the novel is not sluggish, but in the later part, the plot feels a bit slower, but the description is more detailed. 3. The protagonist Gong in the previous article is an unruly and ambitious young man, but after arriving in the magic city, he seemed to be cheating, his IQ soared, and the transition was not so natural, as if he suddenly matured and grew up and became scheming. Instead, Shou's light was eclipsed by Gong in the later period, and he was suddenly compared to his boyfriend. I felt that there was a weird feeling in his heart and in my heart. Did Shou get weakened? 4. There are still some things I don't understand, such as what Chief Zhang wants to do when he recognizes Su Su. Will it not have an impact on him if Su Su goes to jail? What will be the outcome of Ms. Cui? Will she be troubled by the loss of her husband? What happened to Dwarf Potato's pair of specious CPs? Did the author just write about it on a whim? What will Xu Jiang do to CP? Summary: This book is still good. The protagonist's IQ is online, the characterization is realistic, the plot is not procrastinating, and the emotional lines develop at the same time. However, it is not perfect. The author still has room for improvement. Come on. [Praise]

It looks good, good, it would be even better if you could add more [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss], not enough [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The score is low, it is definitely a good book, the writing is very good, the more you write, the smoother it becomes, the plot is not brainless, the relationship progress is not inexplicable, the storyline is not boring, it is definitely above average in this monotonous routine article, it makes people's eyes shine. Come on, author, I am looking forward to your other articles. As expected, you will be my treasured author! ! ! In the past, great writers were everywhere, but now good writers are hard to find, and good authors are even harder to find! ! ! Come on! ! !