Hearing My Love Rival’s Thoughts, I Become His Man

It's great! The plot gets even more exciting after they arrive in Shanghai. Looking forward to the next update! First, let's talk about the flaws. The beginning is a bit draggy. The "listening to one's inner thoughts" trope, aside from providing sweet moments and flirting, doesn't really advance the plot. And to drag out that one night's misunderstanding for a hundred chapters is just bizarre.

Five stars! Five stars! This is the first time I've seen a book on Tomato that I really like. The characters of the two main characters are also very appealing. Xiao Pei, in my opinion, is someone who doesn't argue with others, but proves himself through actions 🤤🤤🤤🤤. Xiao Huo, on the other hand, is someone who seems ordinary on the surface, but inside he's someone who speaks his mind freely.

This is amazing! It's been so long since I've seen such a brilliant protagonist. 😅

I absolutely love this book! It's so original and the premise was so appealing after reading the synopsis 🥰. But then I found out it's a serialized book, and I was ecstatic (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). I've never read a book that's so to my liking before (what a funny misunderstanding, hehehe). It's so well-written, I love it so much (*'ε`*)

I really love this! It really hits my sweet spot. The vocals are amazing! I'm totally blown away! I love the character of the mouse, both the romance and the plot. Oh my god, author, please keep writing! Update soon, I'm so hungry! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 How come such a good book isn't popular? Hurry, hurry, hurry, make it go viral! Go viral! Go viral! It's so good!

The premise is great! Two equally handsome men, it really appeals to me. I just can't wait, it's driving me crazy! They're still misunderstanding each other. I've already listened to the whole thing this morning. This story is so fresh! Let them get together already!!!

This is so well-written! The beginning was a bit angsty due to some misunderstandings, so I skipped around a bit, but the overall plot is clear and doesn't affect comprehension. Once the couple gets together, it's incredibly sweet! The seme is straightforward and has a mind-reading ability that perfectly counters the tsundere type—it's so cute!

1. The most captivating and brilliant part of the book, in my opinion, is the character development. Each character has their own thoughts, and these thoughts are profound, revealing their personality in a realistic and nuanced way. I really enjoyed reading about each character's inner thoughts and deductions.

It's great! It would be even better if the author could add more chapters! 💕💕💕😘😘😘 I can't get enough! 🥺🥺🥺

The rating is low, but it's definitely a good book. The writing is excellent, getting smoother as it goes on. The plot isn't mindless, the emotional development isn't inexplicable, and the story unfolds in a way that's never boring. In today's sea of ​​formulaic novels, it's definitely above average and a breath of fresh air. Keep it up, author! I'm really looking forward to your other works.