Game Descends: The Original Heroine Flips the Table on the Spot

It looks good and is pretty cool, especially the part about cooperating to earn gold coins. . But the part describing the harem and the rotten men abusing the heroine is particularly vivid. It was painful to watch, a bit emotionally abusive. Although it is quite enjoyable to watch when the protagonist goes crazy and takes revenge, but every time he goes crazy, it is easy to feel uncomfortable even thinking about the abuse described before.

Hee hee, nothing to comment on, it's so beautiful. If you go to a cruel place, people like me who don't like torture will be reminded to skip it. But I still watched it, it was so sad and I felt sorry for the heroine, but it was still very interesting. I have a lot to say about bad books, but I have nothing to say about good books, just one word, "Enter". It became more and more cruel. She thought that she was the target of the planet for the first heroine (the boss) to grow up happily (the second protagonist, the second child), and later found out that she might be Li Xing's luck. Blue Star wanted to absorb the luck of another world and let herself ascend. She is like a doll, unable to speak for herself (because her power is too small, her struggle does not cause any waves, as if she is not struggling), and all actions are in the hands of others. The reader follows and is brought into the first-person perspective. The heroine has received too much malice, and she is depressed, disgusted, and powerless, which makes people feel negative emotions. I don't want to see it.

The whole thing is in line with my taste. The heroine's strength is never false. The author initially wanted to write that her strength is worthy of her suffering, and the feeling of positive and negative balance is more objective. However, after the feedback from readers, it is now more subjective. The painful memories are much less, but I can feel that the heroine deserves it, both ⭐⭐. The writing is still good, 1⭐. And there is no word for "breast girl". The ratio between men and women is normal, ⭐. The current progress is in the early stages, and the impression is okay. Regarding the "National Destiny", the full text has only a few paragraphs. The heroine did not help the country without exposing herself, but directly and forcefully helped all the people to obtain game gold coins (no loss to herself) by performing show-off operations, and she will destroy them and cause global disaster in the future. The props for sexual disasters (which have an effect on oneself but have little effect), focus on helping the people rather than the country. Although I like pure lone wolf novels, I can still accept this kind of description. It makes me feel that the protagonist is really kind to the best of his ability rather than aloof and kind, ⭐. The lightning protection point is that the heroine has a younger brother, and he is a good younger brother. I haven't written much about it at the moment, but I'm not sure whether it will be a thunderstorm or not, so I will deduct 0.5⭐. Overall rating 4.5⭐. Abandoned, personal rating 3⭐, I didn't change the rating because I am a novice author The parents plot is related to the main plot, so there are a lot of descriptions, and the more it is written, the more clear it is: in the beginning, boys are favored over girls, but in the end, the preference for boys over girls is all because of the female protagonist (not). . . . Well I don't like the complexity of this character. . . The plot of the younger brother is very inexplicable, and he had to write it. The author even gave him a trick, but it has no effect on promoting the plot, the heroine, and the parents. It is probably because of the low word count. At the beginning, the heroine hated her parents but not her younger brother (this hatred is the kind of hatred that we don't owe each other), and then as the plot progressed, she started to feel guilty towards her parents - it was all me who caused them - The above are my highlights. The rest of the plot is okay. Anyway, it is okay for the heroine, and the abuse of the girl is not included. The writing problem is that the author does not want to write a light tone but cannot control the tone. The male and female supporting characters have different opinions. (Only the ones I saw)

It's not bad. The game has a very Western fantasy background. The author's writing style feels like the female protagonist novels I've read before [laughs]. However, punctuation marks are occasionally missed (commas are the most common), which makes the reading a bit weird. Although I can segment sentences myself [eat melon], it's best for the author to fix it when he has free time. We are still in the preparatory stage before the invasion of the game. The heroine is amassing money wantonly and the nine tribes are playing games quickly and accurately, which is quite satisfying. The description of the past life is too real and cruel, with ruined etiquette and social unrest. It makes people itchy with anger. I really want to put the capitalists on the street lights [go crazy]. But there is no need to be so detailed when describing the humiliation of the heroine in the stinky male harem. In short, I am still looking forward to the development of the plot after the official invasion of the game. I hope that the Stinky Man can be offline soon [angry][angry][angry]

Don't deliberately leave negative reviews without reading a few chapters, okay? . . . I've been following this book for a long time, starting around chapter 300. It's the only game I've read except for "Invasion of Wine" and "Ace of Spades". I really think it's very well written. I always talk about torturing women and torturing women. I really haven't felt it. I feel sorry for Yue. She originally had a very good family but she was always being cheated. Seeing that the revenge that should be avenged is basically done. The plot behind the foreshadowing is pure and refreshing. If you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, the heroine can't bear a little hardship. If you can't bear a little tiredness, don't read this book. The heroine is essentially a lone wolf gambler. I'm convinced. I'm very picky about books. I think the characters in this book are well written. I hope Yue will be happy every day and become stronger and stronger.

I finished reading it in one go. As an old bookworm, I feel that the writing and pace are okay. The biggest highlight is the protagonist's character and decisive means of killing. Even though the female protagonists in the early female pornographic novels were very strong, they were always trapped in the vicious circle of "reasoning". They would always make the truth clear before making a ruthless move. Compared with the male pornographic novels, if I want to kill, I will kill them, and if they have a bad influence on me, I will also kill them. In comparison, it is quite frustrating. Because I mainly listen to the villains saying a lot of mindless things, and I get tired of it after watching it too much! This article absorbs the essence of killing quickly. It kills really fast and doesn't even leave it overnight. It looks really comfortable! From a plot point of view, it is still relatively novel, and the writing does not hold it back. It is just that the narrative rhythm needs to be improved a little bit. I can basically keep up with it, but occasionally some parts will be a little confusing. But it does not affect the overall reading, it is already very good for new articles! In fact, when a type of article already has its own benchmark, it is difficult not to learn from it after reading it, because your mind will subconsciously think that this article did not give me such a feeling. I'm really looking forward to the future development of the story ~ [Sending my heart] I have been following it for a while. The writing is stable and the plot is interesting. It is attractive for people to follow the series. I look forward to the subsequent stories~~ [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! Really, it's good-looking. It's also a game invasion, but it's a completely different type from Xunge, but both are good-looking. Moreover, the authors of these two books seem to be the first novels. Are all new writers so scary now? They are all such geniuses. I hope this book will not go downhill from now on, but will keep going up. The more I write, the better! ! !

The heroine is really awesome, very resilient and bloody. Even if she is suppressed and bullied in every reincarnation, she never gives up on herself. She saves herself from desperate situations again and again. She is her savior. Some comments say that there are too many descriptions of the sufferings of her previous life and it is not satisfying enough. In fact, I think it is these descriptions that make the heroine's character more three-dimensional and her soul more radiant. It also makes this book thicker than ordinary cool novels.

The writing style is the same as that of "Searching for Songs while Drinking Wine". It's very interesting. The writing style of the second Tomato game invasion type is so good. However, if you can't accept the hardships the heroine endures in the early stage, don't read it. Hatred is the motivation for the heroine's revenge [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

It's very good-looking and very enjoyable. The heroine's actions are crisp and neat. She kills when she can and the enemy appears in seconds, leaving no hidden dangers. All the abuse points mentioned by the author don't matter to me. It is abuse when the heroine is injured and unable to resist. After the heroine is injured, she continues to become stronger and fight back, doubling all the damage in return. The damage is just the way the heroine came. (Han Xin's crotch humiliation, Yue King Gou Jian lay down on the firewood to taste his courage) The way up is piled with corpses, that is the coronation ceremony of the heroine! Ps: Even in her previous life when she was being chased and intercepted, the heroine killed everyone she could, making her enemies gnash their teeth with hatred.