Game Descends: From the Start, I Steal the Protagonist's Fortunes

One less star is because adding funny descriptions to the villain is whitewashing the villain in disguise, because this will subconsciously ignore the pain of the heroine. Also, don't write so many funny jokes, because they are not that funny. Delete some jokes and unnecessary psychological descriptions and you will find that it has no impact on the book and can make the text cleaner. It can be seen that the author is writing a novel for the first time and the writing style is a bit jerky, but the subject matter is okay. It is important not to add funny descriptions to the villains! Don't add funny descriptions! Don't add funny descriptions! ! !

It's very good. It's rare for authors to write well about dungeon puzzles. This book directly avoids this. The dungeon is all about fighting monsters without solving puzzles. It's not embarrassing to read. [Like] And then, the protagonist is not betrayed by a man and reborn. It's hard to think that she is smart when she is reborn after being stupid in her previous life. This protagonist is purely a matter of luck. Revenge is also clean and tidy. It doesn't say that they should be left to play slowly. It says that they can grab the golden finger in just a few days. The protagonist is the first in the fault and there is no inexplicable hidden powerhouse. This is called a cool novel. If you seize so many opportunities and are side by side or even suppressed by a bunch of official aristocratic families, then you will be reborn. If you are so open, of course you will dominate the world. The current male characters are all clowns, and there are a few female supporting characters who are quite strong, which are very nice. What I don't like is probably the description of the boss. The bosses that are killed are all projections. I prefer the ones that cannot be resurrected after killing them, otherwise I always feel that they will hold grudges and suddenly appear to play tricks on the protagonist. And it feels like they are trying to be cute, making the boss look like a big cat, which is a bit embarrassing, as enemies should look like enemies. Then the protagonist didn't take action against the relatives who bullied her, which made her a little unhappy. The recent plot has been a bit boring. I've been wandering around a few aristocratic families, and the game has no sense of presence.

Except for the plot of Hanfu, everything else is perfect, but Hanfu's supporting role and the presence of the map in the early stage are still relatively strong.

I was treated like this in my previous life. After my rebirth, I didn't kill anyone. What a good person.

Nice! I hope the author won't get carried away in writing the setting ability like other places, and the combat power will collapse. I have always maintained the ability to write logically, and I like the feeling of watching this ability improve little by little. I hope that the copy will be normal and not engage in the infinite flow writing method and then throw away the game settings. I like to see this kind of national game and I like to see the digital feeling. The ability settings are messy, and later on I forget what the abilities I set look like. I hope there aren't those random and inexplicable gods playing games

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very decisive in dealing with others, fighting and taking revenge. I experienced a lot of pain and suffering in my previous life, but I made a fortune before I died, and I am very decisive in taking revenge in this life. To be able to keep the bottom line with people who have no hatred against you can be said to be a very determined and good person. Both the supporting characters and the villains have brains, and they only know how to get money for nothing. The protagonists are not the pure scammers as imagined. They also have unique personalities and memorable points. It is quite interesting to occasionally intersperse their stories. So far, no big poisonous points have been found. From a personal perspective, there are very few small blocking points. The article is not long. I hope the author will maintain his standard and update it on time.

I go The heroine Golden Finger has a lot of thunder, and rarely drags on. There is basically no watery plot. Each chapter has some specific content, rather than watery plot. In fact, I really like this kind of game invasion novels, but many of them are the kind where the female protagonist is inexplicably stronger than the male protagonist, or the female protagonist is not as strong as the male protagonist, and the female protagonist acts as a pendant for the male protagonist. No CP is just right, it's confusing and doesn't hurt your brain (no) There are no interesting points at the moment. I personally can actually watch more, so there are not so many interesting points. You can watch them individually anyway.

It's not bad. Although there are only a few chapters, it has the flavor of a novel with a big heroine. The heroine is developed steadily. There are some logic problems in some places. I personally think there are some contradictions in the logic of the relationship between the heroine and the original male and female protagonists. The heroine's character is not too distinct and deep. I hope it will be gradually improved in the future. It is very flat, not outstanding but has no faults in the story. Not bad, please come on the author and will continue to update [Love] .. I have no memory points. I suggest the author improve the outline before writing the book. Some places may be logically contradictory. Come on...

It's quite good-looking. The heroine has a big gold finger in this life and is very strong. She has high martial arts and many skills. She does a lot of high-profile things. She has been widening the gap with others from the beginning. From being an abandoned child in her previous life to being favored in this life, the overall experience is quite refreshing and interesting. The female-male comparison and the shaping of the female character are also good. It's just that the recent chapters have always been told from the perspective of various supporting characters, and the progress is a bit slow. I want to see the heroine get the last ability quickly (the heroine has been getting the ability until now, and she is tired of repeating similar recycling seven times) and then get to the main topic of the game invasion, as well as the protagonist's old flag, and there are too many prophets. Occasionally there are embellishments, and it becomes a bit boring when there are too many. Well, it would be better if the wording could be changed, such as using jealousy instead of jealousy or something like that.

You don't look like a newbie at this level. Do you have a vest? [Laughs evilly] Very beautiful, the heroine has many talents, very cool The ratio of men to women is normal, and there are many good female characters [sending my heart]