After Transmigrating Into a Book as a Wicked Master, I Just Want to Stay Away from Feng Aotian

It's definitely good to watch, a typical master-fighter-disciple story, but I don't get tired of it [smirk] The early plot is pretty good, but the pace is a bit faster later on. I feel like Jiang Yu's original setting of a boy's soul-transportation could be changed to a girl's soul-transportation, because Jiang Yu's character is quite like a girl's (purely my personal opinion), so it's pure. In fact, I was planning to read Shen Yuan's book at that time, but when I saw that the author had published a new book, I wanted to read this one first and then catch up later [facepalm]

It's beautiful and the writing is smooth and natural. It's worthy of you. I estimate that in a few dozen chapters, when the female lead surpasses the protagonist, Lao Jiang will enter the dark room hahaha Not as good as the book about Shen Yuan and Senior Sister, the two strong characters Shen Yuan will not rely too much on Senior Sister, and will protest if he is treated roughly by Senior Sister (their emotional entanglement is quite exciting to watch), and it is also very satisfying to watch Shen Yuan's perspective without looking at emotions, and it is also very comfortable to level up and fight monsters. Feng Aotian This book is like Jiang Yu being taken care of by Lin Qingye, and your book Chasing Wife and Crematorium always hastily reconciles halfway through, which is quite speechless. The first time you escaped, you could have written it, but you made Jiang Yu rescue Lin Qingye to save Jiang Yu. The two reconciled and became Taoist couples. . . The second time, Lin Qingye said that she liked the master's body, and did it without comforting or asking the master. The master was obviously reluctant, but she couldn't tell it. She felt that Lin Qingye was very immature in terms of emotions. You only think about yourself. Originally, he was chasing his wife to the crematorium for the second time, but they quickly reconciled after meeting for a few words. Didn't Jiang Yu really have no temper at all? Accept everything and forgive Lin Qingye in just a few words? She was so sad when she was used as a substitute by Lin Qingye (you said Lin Qingye was half-joking, but even if she said it, it could still be a joke, she had already caused harm to Jiang Yu), so why should she just let it go? It wasn't that she, Jiang Yu, couldn't live without Lin Qingye, but Lin Qingye couldn't live without Jiang Yu, which made Jiang Yu feel like he was cheating.

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Overall, it is a good work, but the flaws are obvious. 1. In the process of writing, the explanation of the flow of time is a bit confusing, which makes it difficult to understand sometimes when one looks at another time period. 2. Maybe the author is tight on time, so the whole story is rushed. Although the foreshadowing is finished, the story feels like it is not finished. 3. It would be better if the author's description of emotional changes could be more detailed. I am Xiaoya who aspires to be a good book reviewer. Please forgive me if there is any offense.

The original one from Shen Yuan is really well written and has a lot of foreshadowing. When I first read it, I was very resistant to the plot of the soul traveling to a person in the novel world. I felt that there would be a sense of confusion about experiencing other people's lives, so I could understand Jiang Yu's choice to leave. I was also thinking about how the author would come back to this emotional setting that is difficult to bring back, until I saw it When all the mysteries are solved, everything suddenly makes sense. The plot is worth considering. It can be seen that the author has polished it very carefully. After searching for countless transformation articles and seeing countless rough and brainless white articles, it is really exciting to find such a book. I regret that I saw it so early and read it all in one night. My thoughts are: please add more! Not enough to watch!

Although this novel does not deserve 5 stars, I still gave it because it is Raisin. (I am not saying that I am biased, but I am comparing Raisin's previous novel with this novel) I've read "Twin Girls" countless times, so I'll start with my evaluation of this novel (save the comments): It's very good, except that the author's mentality collapsed at the end of the writing, which caused the plot to be awkward. It is indeed a standard novel about young white girls, and it is in the genre of cultivating immortals (of course, I still recommend the author's previous novel, and this novel is indeed better than the previous one). What follows is my detailed insight: I think one of the few highlights of this novel is its plot arrangement. For example, the memory and rebirth of Jiang Yu (the heroine) are really unexpected (after all, as a fairy tale, innovation is often what makes it interesting). Of course, the biggest and most important problem in this book is the author's mentality. (It's hard to say this, it's best to read it, especially at the end of the novel) Finally, let me summarize: this book is still interesting. As a lesbian writer, it has all the stickers it should have (there are a lot of them, but it is very stable). Except for a few minor flaws, it is still good. Also, raisins, join Aha, contribute your joy, you will make the messenger a joy

What I like most about Raisin's books are two things. One is that the author insists on finishing the book even if he knows that the quality of the book may not meet expectations, which is very happy. The other is that the author will link up the characters of his previous book, so that it gives a nostalgic feeling of meeting old friends. This book is indeed not as good as the previous one, but in my opinion it is pretty good (I read half of it, and then I went to see Gu Baixue, and then finished the rest. The main reason was that I really lacked the desire to read on, but after seeing the linked characters, I came back to read the rest)

I have to say, because there are very few books that I have finished reading, this book can be said to be at the top of the books I have finished. As for the plot, it ranges from dull to tense. Although it is not superb, it can still be enjoyed with confidence. In terms of characters, both Jiang Yu and Lin Qingye left a very good impression on me, but can you give me a spin-off about You Qi? (I want to read this kind of salvation article) Finally, I still want to say something! Thank you to the author for bringing us such a wonderful world. I have always believed that the world in every novel exists, and the author just tells their story. Thank you.

The imagined cliché crematorium and the bloody pursuit of the wife have not appeared (so far) Instead, there is a very rare mutual understanding and a two-way journey. After 100,000 words of paving the way, the relationship between the two smoothly and naturally turned on the right track before it caused an irreparable mistake. The writing is precise and easy to read, and the rhythm is perfect.

Well done, the only controversial point in this book is that Jiang was imprisoned by Lin for two or three hundred years, and his soul was broken by the play, but he finally got over it. To be honest, I thought he was going to torture me again (I personally think that I still need to be tortured here, otherwise it is really difficult to understand). The whole book is relatively sweet, and there is no knife. Be careful when watching, don't let the day pass by (finished in one day...)