I Told You to Cultivate Immortality, Not Wreak Havoc in the Cultivation World!

Comedies and shounen comics are funny and witty, but they don't lose their innocence. Reading novels and reading stories have ups and downs, but still maintain a rigorous world view. Use words and sentences to show your writing power. Between the lines, true feelings are revealed. Three or five friends formed a clique and practiced immortality and enlightenment for ten years.

Super pretty!! Many of the settings are very novel and interesting. I have also seen the extent of the male channel's cultivating immortality and refreshing writing. It is really good-looking and does not have the emotional pull like the female channel, or the slander and suppression of the best relatives, etc. The male protagonist has been a good friend all his way to immortality. The process of reading the book is also very relaxing and does not require too much thinking. Following the perspective of the protagonist feels really safe. And the most important thing is that there is no emotional line! No harem either!! The only one who has anything to do with the female disciple is the foot-picking senior sister. To be honest, I don't even know the name of that foot-picking master.

Rating(superior) Personal feelings: cool writing, neither typical nor poisonous, writing style is okay Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate by yourself 1. Internet article rating (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) (2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000 (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not suit your taste) (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features) (5) Middle-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience) (9) Inferior (novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation) 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Based on the evaluation of the first nine items, additional points may be deducted for other items. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: world background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm and overall description: relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design·Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growth and changes (9) Main line·Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...

The appraisal is completed. It is a comedy novel. It is very funny. There is no frustrating plot that makes me disgusted. Good review!

(Note: Five stars encourage the author, the following is a personal judgment for reference) Picky ten-point scoring system (current progress: Chapter 283) Theme fit [8] Plot development [7] Character creation [8] Emotional resonance [9] Writing style [7] Overall score: 7.8 Points Recommendation: It's very funny and ends happily. I couldn't help but burst into laughter as I watched it. High marks for emotional resonance, and good character design. The plot is just average. It feels like a theater troupe walking down the street, all performing the same play, and you will get bored after watching it too much. However, I decided to abandon the book after reading Chapter 283, which is already pretty good. Come on, author✊

A super nice book, but the rating is low! Everyone, come and take a look. My stomach aches from laughing so hard. After reading it, I felt very relaxed and relieved. The concept is unique and unconventional. Worth a look[snickering][smirking][smirking]

It's a very good funny (Lao Liu) article about the immortality system. The protagonist and supporting characters are very interesting, and the jokes and jokes are endless. It's very interesting to laugh while reading. There is still no female protagonist, but after 700 chapters, there is no need to worry about having a female protagonist. The male channel does not include emotional lines, which is particularly good and makes people feel comfortable to watch. The plot is not protracted, and the foreshadowing and foreshadowing are slowly filled in. I like the role of Li Zhengtong. He has been working hard through hard work (lol, but as a child of luck, Tongzi is still very lucky when he is lucky. The brotherhood with the protagonist Qin Yu is also very interesting. There shouldn't be any swordplay in the comedy - but I'm looking forward to Tongzi's growth, and whether Tongzi's IQ can be improved (? () Ahem, overall it's a good read. According to the progress, I can write a thousand chapters. I'll save the book first and come back to read it when it's finished💪 Five stars for you, let's run away

The protagonist is a sixth-former, who is very good at all kinds of operations. He is really a "talent". His golden finger is also good, and the others are also very out-of-the-box. Throughout the story, the writing style is relaxed, the painting style is fresh, the jokes are dense, and there are many jokes. It is very happy and funny.

It's very beautiful, there is no heroine, no harem, just a piece of green leek. There is no part where the protagonist has to swallow his anger all the time, and the audience feels comfortable watching it. There are basically no villains, and everyone is funny.

After looking for so many books, I finally found one that I like. There is no brainless female supporting character, and the protagonist does not have ambiguities with women. The supporting characters all have their own thoughts, and the protagonist's MLM skills are quite good🤣 There are a lot of transitions in the early stage, but it is also very interesting (I kept laughing). I look forward to the protagonist doing things in the later stage. Come on, the author! Not enough at all