Huh? I Became a Noble Young Lady?

If possible, it would be best to make major changes in the front. I am not sure what the development will be later, because I really can't stand it anymore. There are so many evil points that I don't know where to start. One: age. : The age and time span of the protagonist are somewhat frequent, which leads to the feeling that the left brain attacks the right brain in the subsequent events, so the author's age of development is not considered properly. Suggestion: Briefly introduce the protagonist in the early stage and how he will be after reincarnation, briefly touch on his childhood growth, and then start the story at the right age (7-9 years old). (Interpreted from my perspective, I can't understand) Evaluation: [Serious] Second: doing things. : From the reader's perspective, the protagonist is a reincarnated person, so his mind should be more mature. Suggestion: Although you are confused about your future arrangements, you should still do it and plan a little bit. He inadvertently revealed a sense of maturity that was beyond his current age, but it disappeared in an instant, as if it had never been revealed. (Looking at it from my perspective, I'm not used to it, and I'm not happy with the logic) Evaluation: [Serious] Third: narrative. : The early part is too long, and the plot includes a demotion link, which is too abrupt. The generation of worldview is a bit mixed, and there is no clear explanation of what kind of worldview it is. (Watching it from my perspective, I feel a little tired) Rating: [Serious] Part 4: Weapon introduction and system panel. : The skill panel is a bit frequent, and the weapon level is not clearly marked. Slight Summary: [Personal perception: After reading the whole book, I feel seriously damaged when reading it, but thinking about the first book, although it is uncomfortable, it is not easy to gain readers' insights and make timely revisions. I hope to keep up the good work and wait for the author to write a second book.

It feels OK. There is daily life and fighting, which is more suitable for my taste. I hope there is a love line, preferably a hundred. The only drawback is that the timeline jumps slowly.

I read the entire book in one go, and it truly is a top-notch Western fantasy masterpiece! The world view is grand and detailed. The magic system, racial settings, and continental layout are all laid out layer by layer. The logic is tight and the atmosphere is full. The epic feeling of Western fantasy is directly full. The character creation is particularly brilliant. The protagonist's growth line is vivid and three-dimensional, with forced cheating and no character collapse. The supporting characters also have their own personalities, and the depiction of good and evil is full and three-dimensional, without the role of tool man. The rhythm of the plot is relaxed and moderate, with adventurous exploration, strategic games, and passionate battles intertwined. The plot has ups and downs, and the reversal design is just right. There is no irrigation or procrastination in the whole process. The writing is smooth and delicate, and the description of the atmosphere is very picturesque. The magnificent city-state battlefields, mysterious ancient ruins, and gorgeous magic showdowns can be brought into every word. The story is profound, full of blood and warmth, and the core of faith, redemption, and protection is particularly moving. The overall plot is complete and complete, and all the foreshadowings are fully recycled. It is a rare high-quality Western fantasy masterpiece. You can watch the whole process heartily. It is a strong benefit to all readers who like Western fantasy themes! ——Bean bag To be honest, it looks pretty good. Why is it rated so low?

Yes, but I don't like Bai very much. But looking at the current format, it is possible to write an order, but it is unlikely. If it doesn't work, just take it lightly. There is no way, the book shortage is too severe, I really can't find any books to read [face covering] Okay, you guessed it right, it's a hundred, it's heavier than some light ones, just the author is happy [I'm about to cry]

Up to now, the writing is still in line with my own perception line, but there are also many flaws. For example, the protagonist often feels that he has just changed into a fallen daughter's leather jacket, and the psychological description is often brushed aside. For example, some characters sometimes behave unreasonably, such as for It caters to the setting but is forced to be brainless. The plot is written like a novel but often takes inexplicable twists and turns. It often feels like a long story in a small theater and has a lot of Riddler-style foreshadowing and digging holes. However, I still feel that this novel is well written and supported by hard work.

This Western fantasy novel builds a magnificent and bizarre magical world. The protagonist grows from an ordinary apprentice to a legendary mage. The plot has ups and downs, and the magic system setting is novel and unique. Every page is full of surprises and adventures, making people unable to put it down. Wrong writing, it's a knight [laughing evilly]

Although they are said to be single, at least the best friends they are familiar with are also single. If they are labeled as light hundred, it is best not to have a male or female partner. If there is another single person, then the entire protagonist group (including the protagonist who is familiar with the protagonist) is best not to have a partner.

It's beautiful [heartfelt], I really look forward to how the protagonist will grow up, the author please keep updating.

It's a fairly good work, with no major flaws except that the protagonist's family background design is a bit contradictory and the gap between titles is not too obvious. [Eat melon]

It looks good, the author is very active, I think it will be a lot of fun