Ye Luoli: Moonheart Blossoms

Oh my god, in the first story, I can feel that the author's writing style is still relatively green. The heroine's design is very good in all aspects, and her portrayal is still relatively good. However, the plot moves quickly, and the final emotional line is well written and relatively secretive. It looks like a secret and exciting feeling The second story is better. I feel like the writing has gradually matured. The second story is still good. It is about slowly getting along with each other and the separation of life and death. This one is still good, but the emotional line is not particularly good-looking. I still think the first emotional line is better. Then the characterization is still okay. It gives me the feeling that others are gentle, but they are more vindictive later on. The third story is that the heroine is an invincible person, very strong, and then more biased. The cultivation of immortality is no longer the kind of magic in the West, but the kind of cultivation here in China. The isatis root spiritual root in the back really made me laugh! I have finished reading the fourth story, and it is really good. The fourth story is really good to watch, and it is so ambiguous and pulling in all aspects. Whether it is the emotional line between the heroine and Mandola or Huo Liaoye, it is very tugging, and the characterization of the heroine is also very good, in the end. I really didn't expect that the last line was a very secretive one. For me, as for the fire therapy liquid, I actually thought he would be a little worried about the fire therapy liquid. But in the end, they all died!

The author's writing is still very good. Although the writing is relatively immature, some of the descriptions are a bit... It is recommended that the descriptions be written in a more literary and artistic way, for example, oh, this, that, no matter what, it will give people the feeling of a nouveau riche. It is recommended to learn some descriptions such as text and voice first, so that the events can be written more naturally, otherwise it will be a bit abrupt and confusing, but the author's writing is still good. I gave it five stars and hope that I can continue to work hard [Love]

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Ye Luoli Fairy Dream peripherals are great! The characters are as elegant and noble as in the animation. The production is exquisite, the colors are full, and the quality is very good. It fully meets my expectations and is worth buying.

It's pretty good, keep writing.

Good-looking, the heroine has a cool article [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Come on

The plot is very vivid and very interesting