Harry Potter: Writing Ten Thousand Complaints at Hogwarts

Super pretty! The heroine is smart and charming, and the author's writing is very good, with many beautiful sentences. The heroine, like her name, is a smart little evening star, and she is sensible and at the same time very gentle to those she recognizes. Her originally messy sexual orientation suddenly became stable in front of Quinlan. She stood there without saying a word and I became jealous. This always-smart and always-calm personality really impressed me. She often wrote letters of report but she never complained. What she reported was all clear flaws. She was a smart and powerful little witch. Moreover, generally in fanfics with relatively big Golden Finger, there will be a feeling that the protagonist and the original characters are not in the same dimension, but this one does not. You can see the excellence and charm of the heroine, but you will not ignore the shining points of other people.

My goodness, the writing is so beautiful. There is a sense of rational beauty. Very Ravenclaw. And the heroine is kind of rational and cold, but also a heartthrob. I really like this. Very well written! He's going to be hot, really. It's definitely not just this rating. I want Crouch on! ! ! ! I really like crazy dogs.

At present, this book has 46 chapters, which has been equaled. The heroine of Yingyuan is very intelligent and powerful. I won't lie to you. She is really at the level of a master. The pace of the plot is arranged very quickly, and it is now the beginning of fourth grade. There are some plots, such as criticizing Dumbledore's overindulgence of Harry and his view of heroic history. I feel that the writing is quite enjoyable, so I will comment on it here. Regarding CP, it's currently a single arrow, and it's a bit perverted. What do you think about sister Bao's words, which are a bit indifferent? Nerve? The writing style is more descriptive, and I quite like it. I feel it is really perfect. Men see it as crazy, and women see amenorrhea. This is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. If you have any questions, you can ask me after reading it. It is recommended to update more [send heart][shy] @

The wise evening star, indifferent yet gentle, always knows what she wants to do and what she wants to do [get it] He has personality, does not follow the crowd, has a strong heart, and is a brave little eagle. Writing reports, giving suggestions, setting precedents, etc. It's so cool [blowing kiss]. As expected of a shining star, super charming [send heart]. Wisdom, keenness, strength, handsomeness, calmness. It feels so safe. Smart people will naturally understand what love is. Although the tone is light, it is also very romantic (the flower that wants the stars) (so what kind of fragrance will it be when the wind blows the curtains of my bedroom in the morning? What kind of fragrance will it be when it lingers on the tip of my nose and wakes me up from my sleep [smirking]) She is O because the highest level can only be O [note] Is this sapiosexuality? ! Love it so much The big timeline is also super super super super super super super awesome! Reincarnation is doomed, time and space have no boundaries. The foreshadowing and foreshadowing are cleverly designed. Some things are doomed from the beginning. But your own destiny should be controlled by yourself, not even God. If something is going to be achieved, then expand the width of the thing and carve out the depth of the thing. Try your best to crush the enemy's stepping stones, grab the hand of fate, and step out of the curtain of death. Even if it is a decisive victory. Everyone has this power. Do what you want to do, no matter what direction your destiny takes, no matter how time is reset, the "script" is only a "script" after all, and it can only be a "script". When fate wants to control the situation, pierce fate and its packaging. No matter how gorgeous the packaging is, it is not a reason for manipulation. The ending without thinking is certainly stable, but the story is about flesh-and-blood, living people with their own thoughts, not chess pieces on a chessboard that can be manipulated by others. They should also be able to have the right to choose. If someone tries to control his own destiny, let him or her pay the due price (I forgot what the original sentence said... I forgot to underline...) Now, those cyclical time games have to end The writing style is super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super! ! ! The writing is beautiful, and the plot is interesting and humorous. (The cute star conscientiously comforts the person (but the other person seems to cry louder) and so on. It's so interesting) and the concept is exquisite. It's been a long time since I read an article so happily [blowing kiss]!

How to put it, good-looking is good, bad is bad. [Thinking] I like the character of the protagonist, but those entangled things ruined my perception too much. There is also the timeline. I feel there is no need to foreshadow the plot or anything like that. There is no sense of suddenly realizing the key clues.

The heroine is gentle and sensible enough, and she doesn't have the temper to swallow her anger. Sometimes she has a slight sense of madness, which is very enjoyable to watch. Riddle in this book is really upset, and he can't forget the helpless and unwilling words "Teacher, I should be like this." The heroine really taught him well. The extra diary chased me to death. He knew clearly that it was wrong, but he had to do it. He went through painful cycles again and again just to meet the heroine again. The teacher's writing style also has a delicate and gentle feeling. At the end, every girl runs towards a bright future and they are all shining. Moreover, the timeline is handled well and the connection is very natural. Finally, I hope that the teacher can finish the extra chapter as soon as possible. I plan to read it again after reading it.

There are 48 chapters now. I have finished reading it. I won't talk about the rest. I will only talk about what I have read and hope it won't end. It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't drag on in the early stages. Every revenge must be retaliated. When the owl's feathers are plucked, it's also tit for tat. The first-grade versus the principal and some very elegant plots are very touching to me. I love it very much. But I don't really like the single-arrow love line between Crouch and Riddle. Lan is very sensible, handsome and powerful, and her life experience has always been foreshadowed. In short, two words, super love❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc) The author should update more＼(`Δ')/I really can't get enough.

For me, this book is the ceiling of HP. It is fast-paced and the heroine is very sensible. She always has something to do, just like the author said, "the evening star of wisdom." Absolute Ravenclaw, sane lunatic. The heroine has no CP and has no family relationship with the characters in the book. I'm really looking forward to the heroine's future development, and I hope the author will write more stories... After all, there are more than 130 chapters in the sixth grade, and there are almost no surprises, and everyone is doing well. The anti-Ministry of Magic scenes made my blood boil. In this book, Dali has also changed... In the end, I hope the ending will be he. Although everyone is fine now, I feel that there will be a knife in the future...

It can be said that this is the most logical and beautiful book I have read so far. The early timeline was a bit confusing, but after connecting to it later, I discovered the author's intentions and imagination. Infinite reincarnation, time series, souls from other worlds, and gradually I can see the author's precision in creating this book. The heroine's lack of CP and gentle or tough rejection of love really surprised me. When I read these fanfics, I was originally rushing to go without CP, but everything about the heroine can make her have many admirers and followers. The emotional stories of all the people in it are very meaningful and are not just emotional bondage and group CP. Whether it is friendship, love, or family relationships, they are all written in a very logical and meaningful way. I can say that I have read so many books, and this is the only one that made me feel comfortable. I really recommend reading it. Why is this book not so popular? It's a pity, pity TAT

It suits my taste very well. The heroine is very sensible. In my opinion, the heroine is warm on the outside and cold on the heart. She seems to be very close to everyone, but no one leaves too many waves in her heart. The heroine also has strong magical abilities. I feel that he is very versatile (can do any part-time job and does it very well). In this book, the relationship between Dali and Harry is not as bad as before. There are very few articles about Ravenclaw, so this one is super good-looking. The author is really great (›´ω`‹) but the updates are too slow. It's really good. Come and read it. The author is really great (｀Δ´)! As a digression, I wasn't afraid to finish reading it at first, because there were still two books I hadn't read, but now I've finished three books. The authors of the three books are so slow to update? Final confession to the author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Please update soon (><) The child has no food now [crying]