I’m the Demon Lord, the Villain, Got It?

I'll kiss these two cute babies. It's so well written, the interactions are so cute, and the plot also has a traditional fairy tale feel. The front looks great, but I personally can't stand the back, so I'll let you know: 1. The body under suspended animation is managed by the system, but it is still very active in the plot later. And the author seems to want to write out the soul of this entrusted dummy? What is the significance of the plot where the dummy is in harmony with the dummy and the dummy NPC can't figure out the idea of ​​the dummy? I'm sorry I don't understand what this is. Having a dummy that is exactly like me is already embarrassing enough, but now you want me to guess who the protagonist is? 2. He repeatedly described the plot of Gong choosing a concubine among different vests, and also questioned why he was so carefree. What about this? 3. I really can't stand the auction part anymore. The plot is dull. Isn't the casino plot with the eyes open interesting? It also comes with a supporting actor who has appeared once and an ambiguous NPC dummy. . What's the point? Good luck, this xp is still too advanced

Ma Jiawen felt a particularly strong pull. Shishang and Cang Yichu, upon discovering a clue, just wanted to hide. No matter who he is playing, he can recognize it at a glance and take the initiative. Recommend

Ending of Scattered Flowers——(A lazy dog who spent a long time finally finished reading it completely) It is an unconventional fairy tale. There are very few fighting and adventure plots. It is more about ordinary daily life and emotional pull. It is very suitable for the author's writing style. It is very comfortable to read. You can well understand the emotional changes of the two people in the long flow. There are also many small climaxes and explosive points. Many foreshadowings laid in the early stage are recycled in the ending. The overall structure is very complete. It can be read in one go or it is suitable for reading a paragraph occasionally. Identity switching as a core setting is used very well. It is an important plot point every time. The old identity is also well arranged in the follow-up, and it is not thrown away after use. I like this very much.

Overall, it is a very good novel. The writing is smooth and the characters are well portrayed. It does not make people feel that a certain character appears just to appear. The setting is common but well-written, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the supporting characters are also very likeable. It will give people little surprises in some unexpected places. It is surprising that not every vest dies (maybe I have seen less of this type). On the contrary, it is more reasonable. I love reading it, but I was a little rushed in the old grandfather's vest, and the description is a bit messy. Every vest is so cute. . . Like. It's not just a role, it's integrated into the protagonist's personality. It's really comfortable to watch overall, and there are no pitfalls. The foreshadowing of the main plot has been solved. I'm looking forward to the extra chapters and the results of the two pairs of secondary CPs. [Sending my heart] I feel that there are very few people watching it. I recommend it.

I am very happy to read the ending of this book on New Year's Eve. The author handles emotions very well. (The following contains spoilers). After Yuchi Yin gave birth to his own consciousness, he was very worried about whether the author could handle the relationship between Shishang and the new consciousness. (Hereinafter called the new consciousness Lin Zhaoying) Fortunately, the final ending was handled very well. The story between Duanmu Shi and Cang Yichu is really a knife in the sugar. Zi (crying loudly), some plots in the middle were transformed a bit stiffly. For example, in the plot of going to Feiying Island, I felt that the encounter with Mu Han and the interaction between Mu Han and Lin Zhaoying were a bit strange. It may be that the author did not point out the clear separation between Lin Zhaoying and Shishang at the time, so this plot may be a bit unclear. (Personal opinion) But it does not affect the beauty of the whole book [Love] [Love] In the plot of Shishangdang Tuobayi, I thought that the waistcoat could still be hidden. Cang Yichu was also very direct in revealing the truth. The official speech of Shishangdang was also very sweet. The author's writing is very good and the ending is also okay. I hope to see more extras. Author, you must continue writing [Please update]

Unknowingly, I have been chasing it for five months, and I didn't expect it to be over [crying]. When I first read the title, I thought it was about a villain. When I clicked on it, I was attracted by the introduction, because I was a little bit looking forward to the cross-dressing plot, and I always wanted to read the third vest, but I caught up early. The author had just started writing the first vest, so I waited patiently for so long. If I was attracted by the introduction, then I must have been moved by the author's delicate writing and vivid characters and stayed. As the author said in the introduction to the new version, it is really the most ambiguous relationship. Every time I watch the relationship between Cang Yichu and his junior brother (Shi Ban), I would hide under the quilt and smile like an aunt. Yichu's doting and the junior brother's cuteness make me think this is the sweetest part of the book; but the second vest is the moment when their relationship develops by leaps and bounds. After all, there is a light-up plot. Yichu is really a good baby, every time I can quickly recognize my wife every time, and even with different identities and appearances, I can find the destined person through the soul; the little flower demon with the third identity is really cute\(//∇//)\, and there is even a little bit of Shura Field plot, but I won't spoil the details. Anyway, I really like to see Yichu, the jealous person, being cool [laughs] and I like it even more with my favorite cross-dressing gag, haha. The emotional experience between the two babies still has some twists and turns, but it is almost over and the pain is over. I hope they can be sweet forever in the world of the book. Although I don't like having a deputy CP very much, the feelings of the deputy CP in this book are sincere and natural, making it easy for people to accept. All in all, this is a very good novel. The plot of the novel is very good, the author of the novel is very good, and the characters are very good. I highly recommend everyone to read it [Love] Also attached: I am a person who is not very patient and rarely read serialized books, but the author's books are really worth following. There is also a little easter egg on the author's Weibo [making faces]. This is also the first time I have written a relatively long review for a favorite, so I'd like to comment. In addition, I still have a little doubt. Didn't Shishang use his junior brother's waistcoat to kiss Yichu in the little easter egg before? It feels a bit awkward to be with Muhan again [Sending Hearts]

I started reading it when it was less than 200,000 words long, and it took me so long that I remembered to give it a five-star review. The main reason is because it was the first place to be updated twice in a row. To be honest, I don't really want to win this first place. When I saw the update, I read other books first. After an hour, I updated the chapter with the author, and then I found that there was no update reminder. Then the last update was over 70. This book is so cool! I haven't stopped yet, and I still want to continue reading, but I'm really afraid of the author. The author didn't update for two days a few days ago, which is really scary. Hey, I hope the author sticks to it. We'll always be watching. There's nothing I can do about it, the main reason is that we just don't say anything when we look at it. It took me so long to think of commenting. Then there was the expectation of losing the horse, well, it was gone. Well, I'll wait until the book is finished before writing a formal review, and write it in the form of a follow-up review. (Well, I hope I still remember this by the end of the book, but if I forget, I may not.) Well, that's it. The official review is here! ! ! Alas, time flies so fast. It feels like the author just said that this book needs to be maintained. More than 2 months have passed and the book is finished. Well, I also fulfilled my promise (which may contain spoilers and misread it) and write a book review. Well, I am not writing this officially. This is written from my own perspective. It may be biased, so please forgive me. Advantages of this book: 1. The explosion of the demon king's vest is quite interesting and very refreshing. It is the first time I have seen it exploded so simply. Well, it also uses hypnosis. I have seen two male protagonists with the theme of the demon king having his vest exploded (I have read dozens of books, and I have almost finished all of them except having children). This is the first time I have seen this kind of thing. The only pity is that some vests are not completely blown out (we will talk about the shortcomings later) 2. I really like the show-off scene of the Demon Lord, and the fight scene between Cang Yichu and Shishang. Shishang uses a pen to block Cang Yichu's sword. It's really cool. With such a high-level character, the two male protagonists based on the theme of the Demon Lord's vest being exploded are also considered to be top-notch. 3. The emotional scenes can be regarded as cyclical and gradual. They are not like other brainless dramas where feelings suddenly appear. …(Demarcation line)… Having said that, a very refreshing place. Let's talk about the shortcomings of this book and the areas that can be improved. (Let me explain in advance that I have read female videos: Duo Men, Romance, male videos: Xianxia, Martial Arts, Urban, History, Sports, Fantasy, Mystery, Games, Suspense, All Heavens Infinite... In the past five or six years, I may have only read a few books in each category. Although I have not necessarily read many, they must be diverse enough) The author just needs to take suggestions. Disadvantages of this book (maybe a few): 1. First of all, this book is a bit confusing. Although everyone has different opinions on hydrology, don't rush to refute it. Let me talk about mine first. Each chapter, each volume, the plot of each story, and the protagonist's purpose of advancing the rhythm, whether the direction is clear and whether it is moving towards this purpose, what things are used to advance, and what conflicts there are. Each chapter should have its own purpose. A very simple way to judge, what exactly is written in a chapter? To sum it up, does it make sense? Are you moving closer to the main line? Are you moving forward on the main line? Is there a link between the past and the next, is there any suspense left? What is your purpose in writing this chapter? If you can't answer any of the above questions, or you have to write several chapters for one thing, there is a lot of meaningless nonsense (irrelevant to the purpose of the main plot, superfluous character design, etc.), Scenes (too many landscape descriptions), actions (meaningless actions, no progress in the emotional line, no relationship with the main plot, or not much). Then you can judge the hydrology. Improvement method: Write an outline, detailed outline, and volume outline. Before writing a chapter, summarize what you want to write. Is it consistent with hydrology? Which things should be highlighted and which should be summarized directly? You have to think about it carefully. To be honest, when the first vest begins to confirm the relationship, the second vest begins to perform system tasks, is recognized by Cang Yichu, rescued, branch plot (I have roughly forgotten what the plot is about in this part of the branch plot, but the writing is really not very good, I suggest you refer to the plot design of the male channel Xianxia for more details, the writing always feels like a process to complete a purpose, it is recommended to add some connotation, new characters), make a sword, send it out, the third vest... I feel that the third vest is not necessary. As the love line progresses, the first vest is enough. Because it wastes resources, I build a sword. The second vest is also enough. In addition to the women's clothing, the third vest also gives resources at the end. The novelty actually overlaps with the previous two vests. The fourth vest is a pure tool person (due to the Tomato review review, I won't say too much due to the word limit). 2. The character design of this book is a problem. By the end of the book, I only remembered the two protagonists. The main character is a vest, a pair of deputy CPs, the protagonist is his master (fewer scenes, appears 2 to 3 times), the second vest is his sister (fewer scenes, appears once), the third vest is the little scholar (fewer scenes, appears once), Dong under the Demon Lord (fewer scenes, appears 2 to 3 times), and the system. It seems that there are quite a lot of people, including 13 vests. If the vests are taken and those with few roles are excluded, there are only 5 people and other cannon fodder in a grass-stage team (there are really few roles, so they just go out and set up, and then it is useless, especially the master, who lives more in the mouths of the two protagonists). Co-writing the subsequent plot, it really doesn't come at all. The people in the setting office are just setting things up, not making the best use of them. The master has been on the mountain his whole life, and can only be used as a background board to seal his cultivation. The four people under the Demon Lord's seat have a role in winter, and spring, summer, and autumn are basically in the Demon Lord's mouth. The little scholar only appears in the memory of the third vest and the hero saving the beauty. His sister in the second vest appears and exits immediately. The system has always been by Shishang's side. Apart from helping Shishang and revealing his identity in the finale, it has no meaning. A pair of deputy CPs wrote the plot, and there is not much to say except that Chi Weiyin is related to the main plot. When you read the entire text, you will find one thing. It feels like the whole text is about the two protagonists talking about their relationship. Others are irrelevant. Any plot points follow the two protagonists. There are very few conflicts. Even if there are any, they will be offline quickly. At least the romance also includes conflicts such as a vicious female supporting role (who plays a secondary role), family parents, etc. This full text is about Dong, who is the sister of the third vest, and they are facing each other. It's a bit boring to watch the relationship between the two main characters. 3. The vest scene is very exciting. Many readers like to see the plot of losing the horse. I also like to see their expressions and emotional development after losing the horse. So, why do you want to break a sheep specifically for Cang Yichu? A demon king's vest explodes once, what kind of waste is it? What about the deputy CPs? Where is the protagonist's master? All decent? What was the reaction? What expression? What should a decent person do after knowing about the Demon Lord's vest? This is all a fucking plot... Just hide it and swallow it. Oh, in the end, Bai Xiaosheng's vest exploded and there was no feeling at all. In fact, many characters who appear in the plot can be written and used. The most exciting thing is to add emotional lines to the plot. In the end, it is really just used, and subsequent plots can also be added. What kind of extravagant behavior? …(Demarcation line)… Actually, I still want to complain, but there is a word limit. Write a simple summary. I really like the plot of the vest and the identity of the demon king, but this book still has a lot of room for improvement. It is recommended to read some high-quality male novels, write an outline, and extend the plot of supporting characters. Writing branch plots will not be that difficult. The book has about 500,000 words and can be compressed to about 400,000 words.

Oh my god, it looks great. The writing is very good. There is no unnecessary moaning or showing off. It is just written normally. The plot is not embarrassing. It is very sweet. Why doesn't anyone read such a high-quality article?

It's a good-looking book. It's rare to see a person who writes a mission be so decisive. When I saw the protagonist decisively throw away his vest without any nostalgia, I knew I was following the right book (I feel like Shishang is the kind of character who looks carefree but is actually very indifferent at heart. It hit my Now it seems to have that meaning, but I hope that the relationship between Shisheng and "ai vest" can be explained more clearly in the later plot. It's a bit blurry now. Overall, it seems to be going very smoothly, and the relationship is going very smoothly. Finally, madam, you must have a good rest, but don't be too comfortable. Please update more. The child is starving to death [please update] (I have a small request, madam, can you add a dividing line or mention a line during the transition? Sometimes the sudden transition makes the view a bit fragmented [face covering])

It's very interesting to watch. I like the plot and characters very much [Blowing Kiss], but I still have two questions [what]: Are Cang and Shi both pure, especially Cang, is he pure in both lifetimes? [Working on draft] Please hurry! ! ! Qwq