Blue Archive: The Mark of Salvation

This book is one of the pretty good ones I've read in Tomato 1. The author has studied the plot between Honkai Impact and Azure Files. Although the writing was not good at the beginning, it gradually started to get better in the middle period. It is recommended that the author increase his efforts in research. 2. I also have a deep understanding of the character's personality, and there is no phenomenon of the collapse of the combat power or the collapse of the character. 3. The world view is clear, and it has been explained that this is the world beyond trees and seas. The whole text is relatively concise and clear, easy for people to understand, and there will be no confusion caused by excessive complexity. 4. As a new author, the writing is very good. I hope the author will work hard and we will witness the story between them together.

Among all the articles about the ancestor, it is the most restorative. It can even be said to be the ancestor himself. The character design is completely non-ooc at present, and the concepts of ba and bbb are well integrated. I hope to write more content with similar viewpoints and concepts in the future. Please be sure to add more😋😋👍💦

I finished reading it in one morning, and I personally feel that this book really captures Kevin's taste. From being unkind at the beginning to now he is gradually opening up, and the ice that has lasted for thousands of years has finally begun to melt. I hope the author can write more about the interaction between Alice and the ancestors. The two generations of brave men, one big and one small, are really interesting. I also look forward to Brother Zie's appearance soon. I really want to see the students surrounding Brother Zie, but Brother Zie is impatient and wants to use swear words but can't.

First of all, the author uses delicate descriptions to vividly present every detail of the world in front of readers. Whether it's a dilapidated city or a desolate desert, it makes people feel as if they are actually there. This grand and delicate setting lays a solid foundation for the entire story. Secondly, the portrayal of the protagonist Kevin Kaslana is perfect. He is not a hero in the traditional sense, but an ordinary person full of flesh and blood, full of contradictions and struggles. Through delicate psychological description and vivid plot development, the author shows Kevin's growth from an ordinary soldier to a warrior who bears the name of "salvation." In the process, we see his pain, confusion, struggle and final determination. This true and profound emotional description makes the character of Kevin particularly vivid, as if he is living beside us. The plot development of the novel is also amazing. The author cleverly arranges various conflicts and twists to keep the story tense and engaging throughout. Whether facing powerful enemies or inner struggles, Kevin showed extraordinary courage and wisdom. Every battle and every decision makes people's hearts beat faster and their breaths hold in concentration. This compact and tense plot arrangement makes it difficult for readers to put down once they start reading. However, what moved me the most was the profound discussion of human nature in the novel. The author does not simply depict a story about a hero saving the world, but through the experiences of Kevin and other characters, he shows the heavy price and inner struggle behind "salvation." When faced with the choice between destruction and salvation, Kevin's compassion and determination make people feel a kind of love that transcends personal interests. This profound insight into and depiction of human nature makes the novel not only an entertainment work, but also a profound discussion about human nature and emotions. In addition, the author's narrative style is also worth mentioning. It has both epic grand narrative and delicate emotional description, making the novel not only grand in narrative but also tender and delicate. The author is good at showing the character's inner world and emotional changes through detailed description and inner monologue, so that readers can understand and feel the character's inner world more deeply. This narrative style adds a lot of charm to the novel.

It's very beautiful. As long as the follow-up style continues like this and the fighting power does not collapse, it will be a masterpiece. Come on, but don't tire yourself too much

The first book with Kevin as the theme is well written, and the character is close to Kevin, but the updates are not that diligent [face covering]

It's great. This book integrates the theme of [salvation] very well. Kevin's character is very good and the plot is reasonable. I also hope that the author will write this book better and better. Author, please work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I feel a bit guilty after watching it for so long without saying anything, so I will briefly share some of my thoughts on this work: 1. The author has researched the plot of Blue Files, and the world view is clear, concise and easy to understand. The story revolves around "salvation", combining the power of destroying the world with the responsibility of saving, and the plot is very attractive. 2. The author has a deep understanding of the character's personality, retaining the basic personality of the character in the Blue Files, and there is no collapse of combat power or personality. (For example: Sky Fire comes out of its sheath, comes out, comes out, comes out, comes out until tired) At the same time, the character design of Kevin has been innovated to give it more human emotions. It is no longer just an ice cube image with a mission of saving the world. In the shared experience with other characters, the character grows naturally. So overall, this work performed very well and can be consumed with confidence

Let me start with my summary: good-looking I don't think I've read any fanfics about Kevin. In this one, the author didn't write about mindlessly opening fire from the sky. Compared with the original work, because Kevin is no longer just a man with a mission to save the world (but it seems that sooner or later he will be involved in saving the world?), So it has more human emotions (although Although some people may think it is OOC, but this is my review, I don't think it's okay) The characters of the students in ba are basically preserved (because only in this way can you understand that what you are reading is ba fanfiction) In the shared experience with Kevin, the students' growth is also natural A reasonable image that conforms to the development of the existing story based on the original work is a success, and it is a success if the sensei and captains can see different and beautiful stories that happened to the characters in the original work. By the way, although Kevin is no longer responsible for saving the world, I see this trend... It seems that saving the world is inevitable, and Kevin is too tired. Will [the world always be saved]? In fact, I'm not very good at writing comments (if you think I'm not good at what I say, then I'm not good at it). What I prefer is to use comments to create people. Those who like to brainlessly open up the sky and fire up the chicken coop can leave. There's nothing you want here.

Kevin's character description is quite good. If he could raise the ashes of the director of Caesars Group in the desert chapter, I would like the author even more [Like]