The Calamity of Nightmares

Let's put it this way, this first chapter of Blackwater Town can be a whole novel on its own. It is an oriental fantasy and supernatural type, with great skills and upgrade system. The author's writing skills and plot foreshadowing are very good I like Eastern fantasy and supernatural genres, but the style change in the second chapter, well, everyone has their own preferences.

The book is actually really good. The main problem is the three golden chapters. I didn't read much of the early plots. The main reason is that it started to work around the time when the Black Water Realm accepted the disciples. I guess many people stopped reading the beginning. It was only in the undead beasts and wizarding world that it gradually got better. The author obviously started to speed up the progress in the later stage of the world of undead beasts. There are too many aspects of writing female characters, which actually have little to do with the progress of the plot. I feel that there is still a lot to write about undead beasts. He has been paying too much attention to the female characters, which is inconsistent with the protagonist's character, and the character design has collapsed. Okay, the female supporting role is written down in the back, and there is a hidden hook. She is obviously a character of a evil demon, and she still makes some emotional dramas. It is a bit disconnected and the two are not happy. The power system is quite good, but the second-level world has reached the wizard's late stage power body. To be honest, it's hard for the system not to collapse. Nowadays, the general novel system of wizards is considered to be the top of the power system of fantasy novels. Even if you write about gods in the future, it is difficult to feel that you have surpassed it. There is still hope for science fiction and weird Cthulhu to compete. It is impossible for three or five world protagonists to be invincible. The recognition of the author's self-innovated system is probably not too high. I hope the author can write better and write less female characters. I really don't want to read it. It would be much better to just write some other plots with experience-earning tasks. Come on.

Four stars. The writing is actually quite good, in terms of subject matter, content, etc.; However, too much psychological description really affects the perception, and the behavior is too naive. Maybe I kept looking at a certain point, and the requirements are a bit high. Withdrawing this sentence, one copy has inexplicably written many chapters of cultivation.

I've read more than 30 chapters and I think it's quite interesting. Chapter 60, the marriage plot is a bit abrupt, downgrade it by one point Chapter 65, it seems like it was written by another person, forget it

This book is quite good😊, interesting and novel, and the characters are full-bodied, but I hope she has a single heroine, and that this heroine is the first one to go on a nightmare mission. His master said to choose a woman, divide her soul, and not only become the heroine, but also a salty or sweet person who can stand behind the protagonist, but don't be too pretentious. It would be better if there is a plot with a knife. However, I still hope that the author will update it soon and give me a five-star review! ! !

To be honest, there is a bit too much written about female characters. It would be better to spend more ink on other places, such as the protagonist's exploration and innovation of paper skills. The first world is still well written, but the second world is dense with poisonous points. If the author honestly focuses on upgrading and uses women as a supplement, the results will be better.

I can't explain why, but the second copy is much worse than the first copy. It doesn't have that sense of wanting to watch, and the character's personality has changed a lot compared to the first copy.

The writing of Blackwater Town is pretty good, giving people an oriental and mysterious flavor. The undead beasts are just so-so. The Wizarding World is really a headache to watch. It took me a long time to explain it over and over in one sentence. There are many such plots in one chapter. Also, I don't like to criticize the heroine crazily, and neurotic women are indifferent to watching it.

Why is the plot of this wizarding world so similar to a novel I read a long time ago, where the weak eat the strong, go to the wizard sect in the borderland [facepalm], it is also on the sea, and you encounter risks. Now that you see the wizard, you must also become a disciple [facepalm] And there is too much water in some places [face covering] The protagonist sometimes kills decisively, but sometimes he can't carry it clearly and is indecisive.

The writing is quite nice. In fact, the first world is very interesting. I want to see how to continue practicing, but I won't allow it to be broadcast if I write any more. It's a pity, but I like the first world very much. Farewell. I wish the author will write better and better. If you return to the first world in the future, remember to kick me.