Come on, Let's Kick the Useless Male Lead to the Curb and Make It on Our Own

(♥∀♥) It's good to watch, but it's not enough to read at all. Ma Ziji will give me a few more chapters.

That's great, it's a rare protagonist who is not a weakling, who can bend a straight woman alive, and there is nothing wrong with the human wrench. The plot is good, and there are no poisonous points for the time being. I hope the ending of the original male protagonist is miserable and only he is injured. There should be more interaction between the protagonist and the heroine, the pace should be slower and don't get together so quickly, try not to cause amnesia and misunderstandings, just fall in love with someone a little bit every day, it will be very interesting. [Like][Smile]

Hmm... Sister Meng's writing style is still on point. I also started reading the Ye Fuli book, which was the first book I read after returning to Tomato. At that time, I was thinking: "Wow, Tomato has such a good book, and it has two heroines, so I also want to read a **** Green Tintin and TD!" What I didn't expect was that Feng Aotian was already a top-notch double heroine masterpiece in Tomato. Of course, that's not to say that other books are not good. There are still very few books with two female protagonists. If they can be written, it's already very good. At least he has the passion to create. But Feng Aotian is not comparable to ordinary literature. It is excellent in terms of characterization and plot arrangement. Although there is some fragmentation in the back, maybe Sister Meng is also tired. After all, there are about two hundred chapters, and the data for a romance that is too long may not be good (in my opinion, after all, there are no living people in the back.) Sister Meng's advantages are obvious, with profound writing skills and novel and unique themes. The shortcomings are also very fatal, that is, being impetuous, giving up easily, and having no passion for creation. But this is understandable, after all, who wants to be a cow and a horse without food. I say this because I want to tell Sister Meng that everyone sees your ability, but please persevere. Success does not come overnight. Please stop being a pigeon! I really like this article! [Cry][cry][cry]

I read it non-stop. How can I put it? The plot of the guide is good, but the second half of the fight against the law of heaven and time travel are a bit difficult for me to evaluate. The sense of fragmentation is strong. I still can't figure out what the development process of the world will be like after the world is restarted. What's more, although it is said that Xiao Zhenyu is still the same in the later chapters, I still can't accept it. I keep thinking that the original Zhenyu has changed. Forgive me for not accepting the ending of the world restart in the later chapters. However, this book is a pretty good one among the lilies. It is not like the kind that starts with double lilies and goes through all kinds of hardships to achieve success. The theme is an old theme of traveling through books, but the plot is indeed very novel. Breaking another person and then turning the little white rabbit into a big bad wolf is really eye-catching. Without the cliche male protagonist filter, the female protagonist (Bai) can see Lu's hypocrisy in time, without the procrastination. There is no routine of slapping the Dragon King in the face. The plot is close and calm. There may be some small waves, but this is also an attractive point. I am very happy to read this book in my fast-paced life. Generally speaking, this book is very good. I have never read it before. Now I have spent most of the time in three days reading it every day. It is good! After thinking about it, I still feel uncomfortable when the world is restarted in the later period. Although it is still the original world and little Zhenyu has recovered her memory, I think she is no longer the same little Zhenyu.

OK, I watched it all in one go, and it received an immediate 9.9 Rating. I would be proud if it was less than 0.1. Let me comment a little bit based on my personal subjective opinion. It's been so many years, you know how many years I've been watching Lily. It's really the first time I've seen such a comfortable, male video, and the emotional drama makes me enjoy the book from beginning to end. It's difficult, especially since it's not cliché. Ning conquered Bai in an almost domineering, straightforward, and powerful way, just like the "you have strength and means" joke. At the same time, the emotions are also very sincere. After reading these more than 300 chapters, I am very satisfied with the emotional drama. Secondly, the character design. As I said above, the character design is very three-dimensional. Even if it is someone like Lu, you can still see the pathological persistence and distorted thinking in him or her. Although some of them were too forceful and may not look like a human being, they still left a deep impression on people. Let's talk about Ning, her character is very comfortable to watch, and the same goes for Bai, she is more real, she is no longer the perfect heroine, but has become her own, Ning's heroine, her brilliance, her persistence under the influence of heaven, her shining point of being a wife, etc., Are really beautiful. Finally, there is the plot. In fact, in this book-like worldview, there is a system to cover the whole story and the "original work" to promote it, so there is basically no need to consider the larger story. But the author still gave a surprising design, and some of the plots are also very "young". In addition to the invincible emotional drama, he also added a very interesting story, which I think is very rare. The last thing is to grasp the rhythm. The author also said that some readers would not like raising children and so on, so he briefly wrote the extra story. At the same time, the ending of Classmate Lu, etc., Filled in the pit. The story ends here and the blank future is left to everyone's own imagination, leaving this beauty in the hearts of readers. This is a good article and worth reading. Above

The two cps are very easy to beat. They are different from the sick and arrogant ones in the author's second book, like the female versions of the overbearing president and the arrogant wife. I hope the author can have a slower ending in this book. If Jiang Ning and Bai Yuzhen want to have children, they can find the system in the second book to get the eggs. Come on

I am picky about the writing and settings of novels, but this one is really good and the plot is good. There are a few things that I can't accept in the novel. The protagonist is a man who wears a woman's clothes and has a nickname for his wife Bai (I know this is a nickname, but Bai also has a strong side. I feel that the image of the dialogue is a bit awkward and seems to be deliberately weakened. It should not hurt others), because I usually read Pure Lily. I'm a little disgusted with this kind of man engaging in lesbianism in a woman's body. Sometimes I can feel that Jiang still has some male concepts.) If you don't pay much attention to these small details, this novel is also very good!

Big cheers for the author! ! ! Very well written! You! Yes! I! Of! God! Love you love you~

I don't understand why this book only has a score of 9.1 So far My browsing speed can't be said to be one page per ten lines, but it is still very fast. However, I have only read 81 chapters so far, and each chapter is very substantial. I originally thought that it would take a lot of writing to write a character well, but this is not the case in this book. To be honest, there are not many words to describe each character directly, but in many details, each character is brought to life. Because of this, it is easy for me to get involved in the plot. I can clearly feel what each character is feeling at a certain time, like a God's perspective, oh no, it's like he is right next to me. This feeling is amazing, it has never been so clear. This book is the first time I have read it continuously for a long time I didn't feel anything, not even a little bit bored. I used to feel sleepy after reading a book for a long time at night, but I started reading this book at 11pm and stayed up all night. I still found it endlessly memorable and very interesting. Each plot progresses step by step and there is no difference. The book is so understated and a few hasty strokes. It can be seen that the author is very careful in this aspect. The appearance rate of the protagonist is also very high. At least it ranks among the best among the many novels I have read. It may be because of this that the whole story has a soul. I highly recommend this book. I think it is a really good book. Although it does not have too many amazing writing styles, it is easy to understand and makes people get involved in it very well. Chapter 192 turns to fantasy Another system appears in Chapter 200. It can be seen that the author has run out of ideas. 250 Has a relationship breakup. This kind of inexplicable external force to separate the protagonist and the heroine really makes me feel uncomfortable. I finally saw these two come together. Isn't the sweet story good? There has to be another doggy handler to ruin other people's relationships. I'm really unhappy. I won't watch it anymore. I quickly read the plot of the next dozens of chapters. Generally speaking, it is okay, and the ending is not that unsatisfactory. It can be said to be a very good ending, but it just feels like something is missing. It is a bit regretful, a bit of a pity, and I also feel a bit blocked in my heart. ๑•́₃•̀๑

Overall, it's still very good-looking. From the early stage to returning to my hometown in Diancheng, it was very good. However, later on, I felt that the system was a bit abused. This feeling was a bit out of line with the early stage style, and the look and feel dropped slightly.