Moonlight on Snow

As an author, Virgo is already very good. There are some shortcomings in the early plot, which are mainly reflected in the emotional description of the characters and the description of the social environment, as well as the lack of description of the characters' appearance, and the dialogue between the characters is relatively stiff. However, these things started to improve around Chapter 50. Later on, the plot became more delicate and the characters became three-dimensional and distinct. Overall, it was pretty good, but the ending was a bit rushed. Come on, author, I look forward to your new book! 👍 "Written by a foreigner", voice input recognition error [awkward laugh]

It's okay, that is to say, there are more than 100 pictures where they haven't even seen the lady, and they don't even know the news that the escort is alive. It's a bit uncomfortable. If I want to read it, I will see it there soon, so I decided to keep it for now and wait until we meet or finish to read it. However, the writing is quite good, so I give it five stars.

I read it in one go and had some mixed emotions. I have to say that Li Yue's experience in the novel is really frustrating. It seems that they are always hovering on the edge of separation, either already on the way to separation, or about to face separation. This constant parting and uncertainty makes me uncomfortable. It's always hard to really settle down. I hope to see the protagonist have stronger combat power and be able to bravely face various challenges instead of falling into passive situations again and again. The slowness of this novel really makes people a little anxious to get angry. I look forward to the protagonist growing up as soon as possible and showing stronger strength and charm. However, the long wait often makes people feel tired and helpless. Of course, the novel is not without its highlights. Perhaps it is this kind of frustration and slowness that creates a unique atmosphere, allowing readers to feel the protagonist's inner struggle and the difficulty of growth more deeply. But overall, I hope that the author can pay more attention to the shaping of the protagonist's combat effectiveness in subsequent creations, speed up the pace of the story, and allow readers to immerse themselves in the story more freely. I look forward to the better development of this novel in the future, allowing the protagonist to truly shine in his own light. (Finally, this system is so confusing, [face covering] [face covering]) I really hope Li Yue will be more effective in combat. There's nothing more to say, come on.

We haven't seen each other for such a long time, and we recognize each other without pushing her away 🙂. It's hard for me to agree without driving a car [rolls eyes]

Hmm... The plot is novel, there is a knife, and my mood is a bit unstable (I can easily empathize)... I even cried π_π, but it suits me very well. If this person's life is not full of twists and turns, then it is not perfect, right? All in all, I highly recommend everyone to take a look. Finally, the author would like to keep up the good work! Looking forward to your new book! (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

20:00 To 2:25, I personally think it is very interesting. Although some parts in the middle may make people a little dissatisfied, but overall it is okay. I look forward to the author's next new book! ! ❤️💕

The first 50 chapters are all OK! ! ! [OK][OK][OK]Be more confident! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] Come on! ! ! 😘😘😘 Become a better version of yourself! ! ! 💕💕💕

The plot of the novel is full of atmosphere, and the emotional line between Xiao Yue and Gu Ningxue is delicate, easy to relate to, and full of sweetness. The world view of Xianxia is complete and exquisite, the setting of cultivating immortals is excellently polished, the intimate interaction between the two is gentle and healing, and the stickers are even more delicious [admiration]. Four years apart, the protagonist's journey of self-exploration, and Dongfang Li's characterization is also very brilliant. The two heroines express their feelings to each other, their feelings gradually grow, and their tenderness is heated up, which is very easy to relate to. The prison scene was so well written and heart-wrenching. I felt deeply and very angry for Xiao Yue (Xiao Yue really had to punish Gu Ningxue severely) 😠. The follow-up progress is a bit fast, which is a minor shortcoming of the full text, but the flaws are not outweighed, and the overall plot is smooth. The wind and snow are the curtain, the moonlight is the witness, the mountains and rivers are thousands of miles away, the moon reflects the falling snow, giving the story a unique warmth ❤️. The author's writing style is excellent, the characters and plot are vividly described, and the story is particularly contagious! Thank you to the author for his hard work~[Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one]

Personally, I think it's four and a half stars (if you can't beat it, it's 5 stars). The other half is stuck at the back where Gu Ningxue and Xiao Wang Yue play in prison. The sense of connection at the back is a bit emmmm, which is a bit weird for me personally. It's a little hard to accept. It's a bit weird to maintain the original feeling after having experienced that kind of thing, but overall it's good.

It's very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. This book accompanies me in my stolen leisure time while studying [smirk] [smirk] I like the author's style very much, and I like the way the author depicts Su Yue. I have to work hard for the author [sending my heart] [sending my heart] and looking forward to better works