A Pocket Dimension: After Dying of Illness, I Arrived in the 1940S

Before the founding of the People's Republic of China, having money, space, and a lot of small space was my favorite subject. The one thing that's bad is that I explained it before and expressed it again later. It's in different words but the meaning is the same. I listened to it while working. It's very annoying to hear this. Some of the writing is so messy that I have to spend a lot of time to sort it out. Come on, author, try to be concise and capable. I give 5 stars because I really like this subject. I regret giving it five stars. This article is suitable for reading without thinking. It's too wordy. For example, the heroine's father is unreliable and the heroine's mother has to yell at the side. This line appears three times in one chapter and I am speechless.

I like this kind of content very much and hope to continue writing.

Dear author, your novel is wonderful and beautiful. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Everything is difficult at the beginning. In the first few chapters, I felt that the author had a lot to say. He wanted to flesh out the characters and explain the background story clearly, but it was too much. There were too many related words in the writing. It was a bit difficult for me to be in the perspective of the protagonist because I was not old enough. It was difficult to read the first few chapters. After reading the next 10 chapters, I feel that the author has found his groove, and the plot development is more exciting and less wordy. You can try to make the relationship between the characters and the foreshadowing of the background story simpler... Zundu... Simpler, and the way of speaking is simpler. [Love]

Very special! ! ! ! The emotional line was written very suddenly and started inexplicably! ! ! The writing is too selfless, too patriotic, personal heroism, very serious! ! ! ! I can't explain clearly,,, it's not a great article, it's very piecemeal and the starting point is very niche! ! ! ! A little bit, I feel like cool articles should be a little more comfortable.

Can a female protagonist have multiple male protagonists?

It's too short. The space is magical. Please keep it secret.

What a merit! Save the world! O Bodhisattva! Come and take a look! Oh! All of the above are acceptable. After all, you are helping people in your own country. The main thing is that one thing cannot be explained clearly in several chapters. Luo Liba Sui [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

Very pretty! Gu Yuanyue here has just returned to the room. Gu Zhengqing is quite happy today. He even got back his medals and calligraphy and paintings. These are the talismans of their Gu family. He is finally relieved. You must know that he has always been worried that his family will be in danger in the future. This time he has a real iron book. After carefully reading every item on the list word for word and remembering it deeply in his heart, he handed it back to Gu Zhengqing without hesitation and solemnly told him: "Thank you very much for Comrade An Ye's contribution. We will keep it in our hearts." Time passed quietly, and in the blink of an eye, it came to the beginning of next month. At this time, the bird came secretly again, bringing not only the supreme glory that belonged to Gu Zhengqing, but also a high praise from the superior department and an IOU full of deep friendship.

There is no problem with the three views, the writing style is very mature, the story has a certain novelty, the narrative of the Republic of China + a little unique, it is worth a read...