Discipline Makes You Free, Not Free to Chase Beautiful Women

Very good. The only thing that wasn't handled well was the dual heroines. One of the two heroines is from a high-ranking official's family and the other is a CEO. I don't know if it was not done well at the beginning. After the two were accepted, they were a little incomplete. Later, they may be thinking of being more reasonable, so they became a lover and a main palace. However, this is not as good as having a single heroine from the beginning. The handling is average. The description is very gentle and comfortable to watch. It is not a very middle-class language style, but it is not procrastinating. At the same time, the details of each game are also very rich. The author does not avoid describing the process. The protagonist's progress is very stable, not rapid, and looks relatively reasonable. Personally, I feel that there is no poisonous point that suppresses the combat ability. It is just progressing slowly, making the progress as reasonable as possible. The protagonist is also purely self-disciplined. The overall feeling is that although it is a niche track, it will not be ignored by laymen. It is quite good. My personal feeling is around 9.2.

1. It's very fascinating. I read it in one breath and started to urge for updates. 2. Although there is systematic support, the protagonist is also very self-disciplined and hardworking 3. The plot of the story is relaxed, and you can even drive a car from time to time to adjust it.

The writing is okay, there are not too many bad points, but there is no need to keep emphasizing how beautiful the heroine is. No matter how beautiful the heroine is, she is still a human being. There is no need to make the heroine as beautiful as a fairy. Even if she is that beautiful, there is no need to keep emphasizing it. It's really annoying to keep emphasizing one point. I have read many Tomato novels, and they all have one thing in common, which is to emphasize one point repeatedly. For example, the heroine is very beautiful, but whenever someone sees it in a public place, they emphasize how beautiful the heroine is, and repeatedly emphasize how beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful the heroine is. There is no need to emphasize it once. If you emphasize a point repeatedly, it will really make people annoying. Looking at the novels of Qidian and Zongheng, he did not always emphasize one point. The writing and speaking are okay, not that immature. There are not many poisonous points. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

As an aerobics enthusiast, I quite like this book. Except for plug-ins, the sports data and some sports knowledge collected by the author are quite reliable. I hope it won't be too much to write down, and I look forward to the follow-up.

It is one of the best sports works I have ever read. Even though I don't know much about long-distance running and mainly focus on football novels, I read it with passion and a strong sense of immersion.

It's really good-looking. Believe me, it's really good-looking. Whether it's about life or competition, it's all written very realistically. I'd like to call it a passionate article about daily farming, hahaha. Come on, author! Keep up the quality[Like][Like][Like]

Worth a look. The biggest flaw is that there is a system that adds points but it does not reflect the advantages. If the system does not give points but "physical enhancement potions" with unclear values, the perception should be better. I crash every day and still ride a crappy bike. Is that what the novel says? If you look at the data, there aren't even a few paragraph comments at the end, so they're still underwhelming. Such a pressure method can only lower your own evaluation.

There are very few genre novels in Tomato, which reminded me of "The Athlete" I read many years ago, but the quality is even better. The marathon running part is quite explosive. It's passionate without being too hard, and it's easy to read without being boring. It's very enjoyable. After that, I switched to road cycling and skiing, and the pace became much faster, even a little too fast. If the author could stop and control the pace, and not write it as a purely refreshing article, it might bring this book to a higher level. I feel that the latter part is far less exciting than the previous plot, and I am still a little disappointed. Although this type of novel does not have many new exciting points in the future, I am still a little disappointed to see that the level of the second half of the book has declined.

The author's pace of writing is quite well controlled. After reading it for a while, the writing style is also very good. The characters' IQs are average. But if it is just a niche sport, fewer people will read it. I don't know what the author's outline is, but if there are too many words in a novel with a fast pace in today's life, there will be no motivation to follow it. The time control in the article is also very good. Now there are only two projects in 940,000 words. Is the pace too slow? I have read a lot of novels with millions of words, but most of them I can't finish reading halfway through, and I lose motivation as I continue to pursue them. People feel that the pace can be appropriately accelerated. After all, Hexagon Warriors, the pace of each event can be appropriately accelerated.

It's so good. The protagonist tells everyone that I have a system, I am willing to help others, I can easily become the best in the world, and the system can also make money. I can only say that mortals will eventually die, and temporary enthusiasm and fame are ultimately vanity.