Dash: the Legendary Acid-Resistant King!

I can give it four stars. Compared with the previous book, there is a slight improvement, but basically it can be said to be a refined version of the previous book: The main plot is the same, that is, the protagonist is reborn - discovers improvement in physical fitness - the arrival of Tongzi - the school coach discovers talent at the school sports meeting - school support - robbing people in the province - meeting a real coach - entering the national competition - various domestic and international competitions later, the main plot is basically this; The branch plot is about grandparents working at home - grandma died of illness in her last life - in this life she rushes to compete to win bonuses and earn money for medical treatment - her parents happen to be working in the city where they are training, and they went to Tsinghua University in the previous book and Peking University in this one; The emotional line is a little better than the previous one, but it is still full of the author's self-righteous YY imagination. An author who has never been in love is really not good at writing about things between men and women. The author still refuses to listen, but it is a bit better than the previous one and there is not so much pulling.

It's very good. It would be best to remove the content about the senior sister. You don't need to be in love to read competitive novels.

The existence of the system is very, very small, but the impact is very, very large, because before the protagonist was reborn, why did he not show his talent in sports, but after his rebirth, the era was bound to the summoning system. Although the author did not describe the function of the system in detail, and the protagonist had no way to communicate with the system, he wrote that the protagonist was summoning gymnastics during the era when he did hundreds of times, and the sports talent was visibly displayed to the naked eye. The protagonist must have thought about this, so even though he was very tired after training😩😩, he was still calling for gymnastics while jumping through time. Therefore, the function of the system is likely to be that every time you complete a gymnastics dance, your body's potential and physical fitness will be strengthened time and time again. The most intuitive manifestation is that the protagonist's physical strength, endurance, and lactic acid threshold are far higher than ordinary people. Otherwise, why would the reborn protagonist be almost as good as a master after practicing for less than 2 months?

A good genius flow, but the system is too hidden to understand the protagonist's level in real time. You can only see progress if he runs.

The last book by Li Feng, there are still some minor flaws in some details, but the flaws are not concealed. Overall, it is remarkable, not bad, keep up the good work!

Other than the fact that the woman and her family were really off-putting, everything else was pretty good.

It's pretty good. I don't think there's anything wrong with the little girlfriend, the senior. The protagonist is just here to run, not to be a saint without desires. It's a bit of a change and it feels ok. It doesn't feel so annoying. I don't know what those people are talking about.

It comes from an old book, it's a cool article, it's all done if it's cool Absolute talent and absolute hard work We never engage in sessions where inexplicable people come out to provoke and then pretend to be slapped in the face. A must-try if you like upgrading stories

A good sprint article, I hope the protagonist will continue to improve, not only 400 meters, but also 200 meters and 100 meters!

The pace is slower like the original, but still very interesting. I mean, can the author update four chapters a day like before? Two chapters a day are not enough now! Mainly sprinting, good looking!

Coming from the previous book, he is an excellent author in the field of sports and is worth recommending.

It's really well written. In terms of improving sports and running, the writing is relatively smooth. The emotional scenes are really not that good.

It is best to do a special 1500, so that you can run from 800 to a marathon

I can watch it, it's reasonable, it's not stupid, the only thing is that there are few updates [laughing] There are only three updates every day, I'll tell you the number, followed by 0, as long as it doesn't die, I will update it to death [laughing]

Well, the pace of this book is okay, not as fast as the previous one! However, the emotional line is a bit awkward and stiff. I hope that if there are not so many emotional lines in the future, the score will be better. Focus on the game.

It's really good to watch. There is no cliche plot. I watched it in one go and it was very enjoyable. To be honest, don't participate in relays in the Olympics. The difference in physical strength is too big and giving medals is too fake. Other than that, the writing is very good.

The new book must be supported, and Van Niekerk is also going to sit down! [Sinister smile]

I just started watching it and it felt good. The writing is delicate, warm and pyrotechnic [smile]

Good looking, highly recommended Not bad, good-looking

It must be praised, you are the only author on Tomato who still writes about track and field sports.

I like reading this type of book very much. This book is also very good and worth recommending!

66666666666. Simple and extraordinary progress

The writing is very good. I would like to suggest that the author could add some interactions and dialogues between people in the entertainment industry before finishing or competing in domestic competitions. Don't always write about Liu Xiang. Yao Ming and Zhang Yining did not write dialogues during the Olympics. Add more details and the dialogues will not be so repetitive and boring. I forgot one thing, I will definitely invest in Byte in the later stage, and I can also interact with Internet celebrities and so on @bat @bat I'm tired of just watching the competition

As good as the previous one

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Well written, good luck to the author

Well written and paced

I will first give 4 stars to the 400-meter Tomato article. I saw it for the first time. Most of the Tomato Dash articles are 100 and 200-meter articles plus 100-meter relay articles.

I forgot to comment now that I saw it. It's pretty good. You can give it a try.

Don't let the system interfere too much, rely on your own efforts, sweat, and hard work