Reborn: My Aloof Junior Sister Only Wants to Cultivate

Emmm, I thought about it and gave it 5 stars. I haven't finished it but I can't watch it anymore. The plot and setting are indeed attractive, and the supporting characters are also great, with full-featured images. But I would like to make some suggestions to the author (friendly, no offensive intention) First of all, let me state that I am an old bookworm and have enough experience. Please trust my judgment and listen to my speech. The writing is indeed beautiful, but to be honest, it is like a composition written in elementary school, but with a little extra length. In fact, I have never seen anyone writing novels spend a lot of ink on scenery and clothing. It is meaningless. Please focus on writing the plot. Secondly, the plot, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, progresses too quickly. I fell in love out of nowhere, and became lifelong friends out of nowhere. Although I haven't finished reading it, I can still give some examples. For example, the CP plot of Kong Sang Wan Wan and many female characters (not specific, but I have a deep memory of Kong Sang Wan Wan's name) progressed too fast, and I was already blushing without progress. Even the supporting characters cannot be written in such a sloppy way. It's also like the cp between the heroine's cousin and her friend. To be honest, I really can't understand those chapters. They're like a running account, and there are no hydrological words like "more intimate". I want to write a sub cp seriously, and treat my characters well. The supporting characters will also be a group of lively people, and they will be the protagonists from another perspective. The emotions generated between them must have a source and a basis, not come out of nowhere. Not only is the supporting role not done well, but the male protagonist's love is also very perfunctory. Please write the plot in detail. There is also the issue of punctuation. Many characters do not even have " " in their words. You have to guess based on the context whether this text is the content of the speech and who said it. The author should be aware of this problem, right? Regarding my suggestions, I hope that the author will not blindly follow them or look down upon them, and have no malicious intentions. Thank you!

It's a very nice novel. I couldn't stop reading it. I came here to comment first. The lonely little junior sister smells like the flower of the high mountains and the gentle senior brother is as gentle as jade. Enjoy it.

It's so interesting, hahahaha. The heroine was reborn in another continent and devoted herself to cultivation. The hero liked his junior sister and followed her all the time, but the junior sister was too aloof. Hahaha.

This kind of fantasy romance novel is the best to read. You can cultivate immortality and fall in love at the same time without delaying your upgrade. The sect competition is very interesting. Every plot connection is very coherent and not abrupt. It is very interesting to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's really good to read. This is the best rebirth novel I've read recently. The writing is very good and the characters are full-bodied. The coolness of the junior sister and the gentleness of the senior brother are vividly displayed on the page. Come on! ! ! [Love][love][love]

The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The content is rich, the plot is compact, and the characters are vivid, interesting, and three-dimensional. I hope the author can update it soon.

The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. It's very interesting to read, with five-star reviews. The protagonist has personality and the plot is also very good and heart-warming. The author's writing style is also good. The plot is not protracted and the article has a clear context.

The author's writing is good, the plot is rich and vivid, and the details and characters are vivid and worthy of further study. The story lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also well developed and exciting. It's vivid and flesh-and-blood, and I look forward to the author's updates.

The plots are often designed to be very compact and exciting. Through ingenious conception and arrangement, the author cleverly interweaves various elements and clues to form ups and downs and fascinating storylines.

It's really good to read. It's the top 1 rebirth story in my heart. The younger junior sister asked with all her heart but was not in the mood for love. This made the senior brother very embarrassed. It's really interesting. Update soon [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]