Transmigrate into a Book to Cultivate Immortality: I'm Just an Extra

It is my first time to write a novel. I hope everyone will support me and take care of me. I read it today and I feel that it is not very well written. The name of the protagonist appears too frequently in the first dozens of chapters. The author will work hard to write it well in the future. This is my first novel. I am happy to give myself a five-star review. I also hope that readers will help point out anything wrong when they see it. Thank you.

Yuyu is very hard-working, brave and a bit cute, and she feels like she can play with or without a male protagonist. The capital letters are also very good, keep up the good work 🥰 😘 😘 😘

First of all, this is a very, very standard book about cultivating immortals. From the growth path of the characters and the way to obtain props, it is very similar to an online game. At least it proves that the author completed all this very, very hard work after a lot of thinking. Thank you to the author for your hard work. Come on, come on, come on, I wish you to become a great god soon.

As the plot progresses, the protagonist embarks on a counterattack in cultivating immortality by chance. In terms of the construction of the cultivation system, the novel is logically clear and imaginative. Every breakthrough in the realm is accompanied by difficult challenges and unique insights.

The author has superb narrative skills and precise grasp of details. The writing style is fascinating, the language is vivid, and the descriptions are delicate, making every scene lifelike. Not bad, keep up the good work!

"Stop!" A call stopped a little girl walking on a mountain path. The little girl quickly wiped away the tears on her face, which she had just cried because of her anger. The reason is very simple. They have become immortals and are only 1.6 Meters tall. Can the world be better? After processing it, he turned back to look at the source of the sound in confusion. Ah--! What a handsome and handsome man this is. The little girl immediately blushed. He was much more handsome than Venerable Fuli. "Who are you?! I don't think I know you." Chen Yu asked warily. As a cultivator, she would not be a nymphomaniac. "Would you like to give you a five-star review?" The handsome man didn't care at all about being so vigilant. He just smiled slightly, shook his fan lightly, and replied in an understatement. Hearing this, the little girl's eyes shone, alert? What is that? Don't want to affect my friendship with this good man, so he said excitedly: "Yes, yes, my dear friend, you are so handsome, and you look better than Pan An. We will be friends from now on. My name is Chen Yu, what about you?" "Oh, you can just call me Duanlang. I don't need to call me eldest brother." Chen Yu said doubtfully: "But I clearly meant friends." "Huh?!" "Big, hello, big brother!"

It is a very detailed and beautiful fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. The world view is grandly constructed, and the story is smooth and attractive! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Can you still wear it like this? Can you still cultivate immortality like this? So funny, the writing is humorous Great to read The plot advancement is also good The characters in the book are also very vividly described. Will continue to live here

A very good time-travel novel. Especially at the beginning, I thought that the first chapter "escaped", but it turned out to be "traveled through", which is a very novel beginning. The character descriptions are also very delicate and the plot is smooth and natural. Good.

It's a bit like the ancient immortal writings. There is basically no such writing now. I feel a little nostalgic.