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I have been waiting for a new book for a long time. I thought you would write about the Warring States Period. But I also quite like the scene of saving the night of genocide. In other words, this night of genocide shows many shortcomings of Uchiha. First, they have no allies and are unpopular. In addition to not properly teaching his son about his ties to the family, Nikita Fugaku immediately sent him to ANBU to brainwash the third generation. As a clan leader, he was too weak. He failed to properly guide the clan to unite, and instead was forced into a coup by the clan. I hope the author can update more.

Coming from the previous book, the author has experience in writing this. There are no poisonous points, the logic is relatively good, and it has both wit and combat. It is worth reading!

The author's new book must be supported, and I look forward to the author's new journey of realizing his dream. The cover of the book is also well received by the Uchiha group. [Sinister smile]

So far, I have read a good book that really tells the story of the conspiracy, conspiracy, and dirty dealings behind Naruto. I don't know how the word count of other Narutos was so high that they got such a high score. However, the fact that this book talks about the core and the score is so low also shows that brainless novels are the mainstream here on Tomato!

Not bad, not bad, it's best not to have a female protagonist, otherwise there will be flaws

What is it like for Itachi Uchiha to be involuntarily? Is that called being involuntarily?

The author is of high quality. The protagonist is extremely strong and crazy, and he scolds and beats up those who act in extreme and stupid ways. Some of the darkness is caused by Kishimoto Masashi not straightening out the settings when he first started drawing Naruto. The author arranged these darkness and some darkness that did not originally belong to him to Sarutobi Hiruzen. But as a political figure, Sandai must be the first person responsible for some dark parts. Danzo also acted with his connivance and acquiescence. Well, Haruno Sakura was kicked out of the protagonist group. Lots of words and good writing

This book still has a system, and it still travels back to the Uchiha clan. It's not very different from the previous book, so it's not easy to write new ideas. I hope the author, Junxia, ​​can try to travel to another clan, or try it without a system. Five stars for you! Come on, homework man!

The writing is delicate, and the author has corrected many incomplete bugs from a reasonable perspective. On. Many sub-chapters are written like running accounts by other authors, but in The author here carefully describes each character's personality and emotions. It is written with flesh and blood and vividly. Doesn't look tired at all Annoying. At the same time, I solved a lot of regrets! For example, the lonely Naruto finally met his mother with the help of the protagonist! Xiang Phosphorus, who was treated as a tool along with her mother, was successfully rescued by the protagonist. Xiang Phosphorus also started her new life, and her personality also changed in a reasonable way! And Shiro, Kimimaro... I can feel the emotion flowing through the tip of the pen. Make The author must be as rational and emotional as the protagonist in reality. People. Great book!

Who can read it three times a day? Update soon! It's too short and not enough to see! ! ! [Smile][smile]@burninghands Why is it only 6.8 Points?

I have read more than 400 chapters so far. The first plot is okay, but the relationship between the protagonist and Xiang Ling in the later part is unbearable. They are obviously raised as daughters, so why does it favor the female protagonist? I can't stand the emotional line at the end, but I still like this author. Except for Xiangling's emotional line, everything else is pretty good. It's a good Naruto novel.

I feel that Xiang Lu's feelings for the protagonist have changed a lot, but it is understandable. After all, Qian Yao pulled her and her mother out of the abyss. In addition, the protagonist must be good-looking, and he is so good to Xiang Lu. Even a girl will be moved! Moreover, Xiang Phosphorus is a relatively precocious character, and his feelings for the protagonist will definitely change. For example, if a person is very kind to you, he will indulge you no matter how you touch his bottom line, but there is still a gap in your identity. You must want to get closer to him, enjoy better protection from him, and be treated more specially by him [Chigua] The protagonist is the Dream Master, which is very enjoyable to watch [Like]

Okay, I came to comment after reading Chapter 224. Although the book is indeed well written and the emotional scenes are good, it still dragged on a bit. It was already invincible but it took more than 340 chapters to depose the Third Hokage. I really can't stand it anymore. One star less makes you proud. Come on, author [Like][Like][Like]

It was pretty good before Chapter 400, but after that it was basically just fights. It's not that it's not good to watch, but it's boring. If I had just read the novel, I would have thought the author was great and the battle descriptions were very good. It was possible to read it all night. But I have been reading novels for 15 years, and I have practiced these battle descriptions in my mind countless times, and I no longer feel it. (These are my impressions of this book) When writing Naruto fanfics, to be honest, don't write too many descriptions of battles, otherwise I can't watch the anime, right? When writing fan fiction, you must have your own opinions on the anime, or to make up for your own regrets. Generally, 1 million words is enough to write a fan novel, otherwise it will be too procrastinating. (These are my opinions on writing fan fiction) This novel is still good, and it keeps fighting in the middle period. It is just right for readers who have been exposed to the novel for less than 5 years, so I give it a 4❤️

As expected of an old author, very stable. Alas, I just don't like the heroine Xianglin that much, mainly because her looks in the original novel are too underwhelming. Even fan art can hardly save his look. The only thing that looks passable is the swimsuit skin in the mobile game.

After seeing chapters 575-631, I felt a little tired. There were many time and space shifts to the original plot to establish bonds, and time travel to resurrect the dead. It is equivalent to the invincible novel. After the plot changes in the middle chapter, due to the high level of combat power due to the golden finger, the game world... I haven't watched Boruto later, so I don't know if the plot matches up? The "Star God" in the later stage should be to close the pit set up in the early stage [what] Overall: Not bad, the early plot is tight There are very few books on Tomato🍅 that I have finished reading📕, and I stayed up all night to read them [currently in progress]

The writing is really good. I have only briefly watched Naruto, but I can still read it. The logic is clear, the thinking is thoughtful, the story is strong, and it is also very carefully equipped with character pictures and comic screenshots! This book is sure to be popular on Tomato, and leave a name before it becomes popular! I will only give four stars to this unfinished book. If this book is completed, it will be worthy of becoming a god!

It's quite interesting. There is currently no female protagonist and no ambiguity. It has also changed many people's life paths and given Gaara a childhood.

Not bad, there is a leading author, hello! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "Leohard's Fifteen", if I watch more episodes, I will miss one episode. I want to watch it but can't bear to let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded and made me finish it quickly. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Jingji waited for Wei Wumei for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Zi Wentuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day and month, a man was lying on the bed, with unconcealed anticipation on his face. Zuiyu smiled slightly. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and his eyes sparkled with tears. The hoarse voice murmured: Don't forget to update... It's not easy to find this book in the vast sea of books. I want to leave a little mark on this book to prove that I have been here and read it very hard! ! 👣A gentleman was passing by... With a crooked smile! ! 👿

Five stars presented. There are really not many authors who can write second-generation plots well. The plot is novel, the writing is fluent, the logic is perfect, and there is basically no poison in it. Moreover, each character has a reason for his setting and personality. Even if the second creation changes the character of the original work, the causes and consequences will be laid out in the novel. Everyone's logic of doing things also conforms to their character settings. This book is really comfortable to read.

The development of the story is reasonable and reasonable, and the author has posted the original comics in many controversial places. I cannot give too much praise for this point. Most of the content in this article adopts the setting of "conspiracy theory", but since the original author did not explicitly object to this setting, it can be interpreted in any way. However, there are still a few settings in the article that are slightly outrageous, such as the Thousand Yuan Family Army, but this is not a big problem.

First of all, is this book worth reading? I think you have read some of the excellent Naruto fandoms and are looking for a new book to read. This one is worth reading. Among them, the author himself is also a classic dream master. The writing style and plot arrangement are good, and there are also golden fingers. There are some places that should be fun. There are also some unreasonable plots and character outcomes or characterizations in the original work. The author has changed them to make them more reasonable, or in other words, more enjoyable. But judging from the current situation (after confirming the relationship, resurrecting Gaara's mother), this book is worse than the author's previous book. What's the main difference? The difference is that many places are flooded. There are a lot of things that are insignificant and have nothing to do with the development of the main line. If they are just for foreshadowing, there won't be so many chapters. Sometimes it's not a matter of skipping a chapter or not, it's a matter of only part of the chapter being valid. I don't know what the author's final profit standard is, but in terms of reading experience, this book is much worse than the previous one. His improvement in the protagonist's strength seems straightforward, but his performance is not. The golden finger itself is actually quite good, not exceeding the standard, but exceeding the standard, and the refreshment is enough. However, the author intentionally limited the development of the character's intensity and deliberately lengthened the timeline. The focus is spent on some insignificant places. There are many ways for some characters to realize their dreams or appear on the stage. The author changed the whole long plot of Minato and the "original" plot in Dragon Vein. It can be seen that the author has the ability to shorten a large part of the plot in this book to the essence or appropriately reduce some unnecessary parts. I think this is a pity. If this book was well written, I think 9.4 Would be very casual. The plot arrangement, character growth, and the whole (ninja world) would be perfect. Now in the new chapter, there is a link with the previous protagonist, which can be said to be very good. It's a pity The following contains spoilers: Another thing that I personally think is quite obvious is the change in the position of the heroine. There is a sister who needs help from Orochimaru or Tsunade to repair her disability. She is cute and can also promote the plot. There is a strong childhood sweetheart who is always by your side. This configuration is undoubtedly very attractive, and I was looking forward to how it would develop at first. But later it was replaced by Xiangling. I can understand it. It was clearly intended to let Sasuke and Xiangling realize their dreams. (I think there is a high probability that the author does not want to promote the plot. If he really wants to, there are many ways. For example, the Yang attribute chakra obtained by Golden Finger can be used to directly trigger the universe. There is no need to use Xiangling to obtain cells as mentioned in it) The whole process changed immediately. The younger sister and Zhu Ma became lesbians, but it was useless. The protagonist and Xiang Ling ended up together. I can see that the author has been constantly patching it, but the plot is really too fragmented. Does it mean that the child born from the union with Xiangling will be very high? Then why did the protagonist in the previous film choose Bai, and there was no mention of being a child. Is it just to make a distinction? What about my sister and Zhu Ma? There is no drama left? Also, for the first three generations, there was absolutely no need for this guy to write so many scenes. I wasn't the only one to bring this up. Someone else mentioned that part of the plot when you were writing it. The whole feeling of pleasure was diluted after being stretched for too long. It was obviously very comfortable when I controlled the Uchiha clan before, but why did I just talk about it when the Hokage came to power? This part can be used as a small explosive point. If you want to expand, you can also write about stabilizing the morale of the army after taking over as Hokage, and just killing everywhere. The protagonist can be completely distinguished from the weak and conservative third generation directly. It doesn't matter how many miscellaneous fish die, it does not affect the plot. So much so that when I killed the Sarutobi clan later, I didn't feel particularly happy, and the same was true for Danzo who was offline. The only part that felt slightly better was when he was recruited into a dog-eat-dog and exposed scandal. Finally, a message to the author: Maybe I shouldn't say so much as a free prostitute, but this book is really a pity. I also finished reading the author's last book. The previous book had a similar problem, but it wasn't as severe as this one. The golden finger in this book is originally very direct and refreshing. It is actually very popular in Tomato. It can reasonably create a bond with the plot characters and improve the strength simply and directly. It's a pity that the author has given up too much for the sake of length, or added too many restrictions. Maybe this is what you want, or maybe your writing skills are insufficient. But the book is still a good book, thank you

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The early stage is pretty good, the mid-term is overwhelming, and in the later stage, Xiang Phosphorus expresses his love for the protagonist and explodes.

Regarding the number of Uchiha three-magatama: There is a scene in the animation where Obito changes eyes for Sasuke. There are more than 170 three-magatama on the wall behind him, which is a guaranteed minimum of 80 pairs of three-magatama, more than 80 jounin, excluding the inventory taken away by Madara (there are 10-20 pairs in stock), and Danzo's genocide night A dozen pairs were stolen, which means that there must be at least 50 pairs of 3-magatama in Konoha, because including those disabled and retired 3-magatama, there are about 30-40 3-magatama with actual combat power. There are only more than 200 jounin registrations in Konoha, and Uchiha accounts for one-seventh. You think they are strong or not! ! Without Itachi and Obito as internal agents to annihilate the clan, Konoha would not have dared to use force to annihilate the clan (so among fans, Shisui and Fugaku are fools. In fact, they lost because of Uchiha's conceited character, and were brainwashed and praised by the third generation)

I like it very much. It has a strong sense of logic but a weak sense of system presence. It's more about the protagonist's own ability getting stronger step by step. Really like this pattern. I hope the author only writes about Naruto so that it can be included in the theatrical version. It is best not to write Boruto content. You don't want too many Otsutsuki to join (Toneri, Kaguya, Asura, Indra, Raincoat, Amemura). You can write

I read this one after reading the author's previous one, and I was not disappointed. It still has all kinds of wonderful plot designs. I also like the Hinata subplot on the way the protagonist becomes stronger, and Sarutobi's ending is even more satisfying.

The writing is okay. It's the only Naruto fan novel you can read. The protagonist is decisive and affectionate in his killing. The whole text except for the latter part is too supermodel and exceeds the power classification of the Naruto world. Overall, it's okay.

It's rare to find a Naruto fan in Tomato who has the same taste as me, but I feel that there are too many uncertain factors in promoting the plot.

After reading so many Naruto fanfics, I finally got one that wiped out the entire Konoha F4 clan.